2016年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试新课标I卷
第二节书面表达（满分25分）
假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教Mr Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）
注意： 1. 词数100左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯。
写作范文1
Dear Ms. Jenkins,
I’m Li Hua from your English writing class last term. I’m writing to ask for your help. I’m applying for a parttime job at a foreign company in my city during the summer vacation, and I have just com pleted my application letter and resume. however, I am not quite sure of the language and the forma t I’ve ud. I know you have a very busy schedule, but I’d be very grateful if you could take some ti me to go through them and make necessary changes. plea find my application letter and resume in the
attachment.
Thank you for your kindness!
Yours,
Li Hua
写作范文2
Dear Ms. Jenkins,
I’m Li Hua from your English writing class last term. I’m writing to ask for your help. I’m applying for a part-time job at a foreign company in my city during the summer vacation, and I have just completed my application letter and resume. however, I am not quite sure of the language and the format I’ve ud. I know you have a very busy schedule, but I’d be very grateful if you could take some time to go through them and make necessary changes. plea find my application letter and resume in the attachment.
Thank you for your kindness!
Yours,
Li Hua
2016年高考全国丙卷（全国）英语
第二节书面表达（满分25分）
假定你是李华，你校摄影俱乐部（photography club）将举办国际中学摄影展。请给你的英国朋友Peter写封信。请他提供作品。信的内容包括：
1．主题：环境保护；
2．展览时间；
3．投稿邮箱：
注意：
好笑话1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【答案】
Dear Peter,
Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School student Photograph y Show. The theme of the show is environmental protection. It will start from June15th and last three weeks. Any students who is interested in welcome to participate. I know youtake good pictures and you've always wanted to do something for environmental protection. I remember you showed me some photos on that themethe last time you visitedour school. This is surely a good chance for more people to e them. If you want to join, youcan nd your photos to intlphotoshow@
Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours
Lihua
【名师点睛】otg线
本篇范文很好地完成了要求的所有任务，要点扩充合情合理，符合生活实际。建议对方参加本次展览的理由符合逻辑：对方恰好有这一主题的作品。全文句式多样化，并没有一直使用陈述句，穿插使用祈使句，符合邀请函的特点。文章中使用了较多的复合句，如定语从句Any students who is intereste
d in welcome to participate.时间状语从句.... themethe last time you visitedour school.条件状语从句If you want ；等。全文没有中国式英语句式，体现出很高的驾驭英语的能力。考点：考查半开放作文
3.2016年高考全国丙卷（全国Ⅲ）英语
第二节书面表达（满分25分）
假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1.表示歉意；
2.说明原因；
3.另约时间。
调查者注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【答案】
Dear Bob,
I’m sorry to say that I cannot go to the books tore with you on Friday afternoon. I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cau you too much trouble.
Shall we go on Saturday morning? We can t out early so that we’ll hav e more time to read and lect books. If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best. I should be available any time after school next week.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
考点：书信类作文
【名师点睛】
题目是常规的书信作文，要求写一封道歉信，是应用文的一种。写作的内容已经给出，表达歉意的同时，还要与对方另约时间。因此，不仅仅是一封道歉信。写作时注意涵盖所有要点，还要兼顾上下文的连贯性。
此岸4.2016普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（北京卷）
第四部分：书面表达（共两节，35 分）垃圾分类主题活动
第一节（15分）
远望手机报价
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim 在给你的邮件中提到他对中国历史很感兴趣，并请你介绍一位你喜欢的中国历史人物。请你给Jim回信，内容包括：
太阳光的颜色1. 该人物是谁；
2. 该人物的主要贡献；
3. 该人物对你的影响。
注意：
1. 词数不少于50；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
_____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ ____ _____________________________________________________________________ Yo urs,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jim,
It’s great to hear from you. I feel proud knowing your interest in Chine history.
As for my favourite figure in Chine history, it must be Wei Yuan, a great thinker in the late Qing Dynasty. He, in his book, Haiguo Tuzhi (Mps and Records of the World), introduced modern technolo
gies and ideas to China. That opened our eyes to the world. In fact, he inspires me to major in English in college to be a bridge between China and the world.
Interested in knowing more? I can find you some books! Just let me know.
Cheers!
Yours,
汽车车牌号Li Hua
考点：应用文写作
【名师点睛】
题材偏向于信息介绍类的开放式写作，对于应用文格式的要求并不高，但对于语言组织和词汇积累的要求极高。本次应用文并没有限定考生必须写某一位历史人物，但是谈及人物的贡
献和对自己的影响时，考生有可能会遇到大量的词汇障碍，故难度较去年明显提升。
第二节（ 20 分）
假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华。你班同学参加了学校的“地球日”系列活动。请按照以下四幅图的先后顺序，以“Actions for a Greener Earth”为题，给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿件，介绍活动的全过程。
注意：词数不少于60。
提示词：地球日Earth Day
【答案】
Actions for a Greener Earth
A week before Earth Day, posters were put up around our school, calling upon us to join in the actions for a greener earth.
Our class came up with the idea to make better u of ud materials. We brought to our classroom worn-out clothes, pieces of cardboard and empty plastic bottles and turned tho into dolls, handbags, tissue boxes and small vas. That weekend, we went to a nearby neighborhood and gave them away to the people there. All were very happy with tho unexpected gifts, especially little kids and elderly people. We did so well that we were invited to share our idea and experience with all the students of our school.
We are very proud of ourlves and believe we can do more for a better world.
