I have a good friend who’s name is Liu Mei. She is our monitor and one of the excellent student in our class. Although she is clever, but she works very hard. We have a lot on common and have a lot to talk about. One evening she told me that something happened when her parents was out. She was doing her homeworks one Sunday morning when she smelt something burning. She stopped look out of the window and find a cloud of smoke coming out of her neighbour’s hou. She called 119 immediate. Ten minutes later, the firemen came and put out fire. Her neighbour was very thankful for her help.
改错二
I went to e the film after supper. On my way the cinema, I met an English woman, who lost her way. I gave up the chance e the film and took her to her hotel. While go there, I told her about great changes that had been taken place in the past few years and she had told me anything about her country. Although I misd the film, I still felt very happy, for I had not only helped her out of trouble but practi my spoken English. If I had not worked hard on English, I would have been able to help him.
初中语文改错三
Dear Ralph,
人生感悟一段很现实的话
I'm a nior student. I'm getting well with a boy in my class. But I have fallen in love with him for almost half a year. He is shy boy, so I wrote him a letter first to express my feeling. He wrote back. In his letter he said, "We are students. Our task is study hard. Let us to wait and e whether we have some chance after graduation." So after graduation I telephoned to him, ask him about going out. But he said he didn't want to. He just wanted to sleep and watched TV. What do you think I should do? Do you think I should continue to love him and give up?
改错四
Dear Bob,
河南特产有哪些土特产
Hello. I learn about you from my English teacher, Miss Fang. I’d like to your penfriend, and get to know more about your country.
First, let me tell you something more about mylf. My name is Li Hua. I live in Beijing, where is the capital of China. I go to Hongqi Middle School. We study quite a few subject, such as maths, Chine, English and physics. I u to play ping-pong a lot on my spare time, but now I am interesting in football. Do you play any ball games? What your favorite sport? I look forward to
hear from you soon.
Y ours, Li Hua
Two months ago, I went to abroad for further study. Before I left, I was given a lot prent. Among them，there were two prents which were really interested me. My sister buys me a book with color pictures about body language and with words about customs of different country in them. My brother gave me a note which read, “My prent has put in your bedroom.” When I hurried into my bedroom, I found a box, in that there was an electronic dictionary. I was very glad but a few surprid to receive the two prents.
改错六
Dear Li Ming,
I have received your letter yesterday. Don’t worry about you. I’m getting along well with my rearch works in the lab. But, to my surprising, you say you will give up learn English. The reason is that you have not done well in it recently and you have lost interesting. I’m afraid I can’t agree with you. I know it is not easy to learn English, and English is widely ud in the world today and it will be important tool in your future work. Besides, it is becoming more and more important at our daily life. If you study hard, you will succeed. Do remember where is a will, there is a way.
改错七
Dear Sally,
Now I’d like to tell you something about my part-time job, in it I work like a guide in a travel agency. This is the first time when I have earned money. I’ve realized what hard my parents work to support for the family. I was ud to ask t hem for money, but now I’ll never waste money or learn to share worry with my parents. I’ve learnt how to get along well with other. What’s more, I have gained some social experience and I have learnt something can’t be learnt from textbooks. In the word, I had a wonderfully and valuable summer vacation.
改错八
Sports is fun and most people in the world, whether men or woman , boys or girls enjoy them. Since long ago, many adults and children called their friends together to spend many hours play games. Why? One of the reasons is that sports help make them live happy. In the other words, they help to keep people strong and feeling good. When they were playing games, they move a lot. That is why sports are good activities for their healthy. Having fun with their friends make them happy. Many people enjoy sports with watching others play.近水楼台的意思
No. 9
I went to the Summer Palace on last week. At the gate I happened to meet some America tourists.
I greeted him in English and then we began to chat. I got to know that they were college students travel in China. They were busy with taking pictures and were much impresd with the changes
had taken place in the past few years. After which, we went boating on a lake and had a good time. We exchanged our email address so that we could write to each other on the future. They thanked me again and again. I was very glad to have a chance to practising my oral English
No.10
My classmate except me were in high spirits. At the coming party I would have to do some cleanings, for I wasn’t able to dance and sing. During the party, I tried to keep the room being clean. After the party I got rid the rubbish. Enjoying my classmates’ smiling faces, I felt their job worthwhile. When told the room will have been a dustbin without me I thought of a saying, "There must have a u for my talent." You may have no special talent, so as long as you try to do good in everything uful, you’ll find everything is beautiful at every corner of your life.
No. 11
鸦字组词Recently, we have had a discussing about if we should study by discussing in free class. V iews vary from persons to person. Most of the students consider that it is of greatly help studying by discussing in free class, that, they think, can help to find better ways to solve problems. What is much, they believe that they learn by discussing can last longer in their memories. However, there are 35 percents of the students holding the opposite view it is not good. They insist that discussing mean lacking thinking and the loud nois is caud by it will disturb others.
No. 12
Our school lies on the foot of a mountain with a small river pass by. It ud to be a quiet, clean and beautiful place for a school. It is a pity which things have changed after a chemical factory was built near our school one year ago. Every day the factory produces many w aste water and some harmful gas. The terribly pollution is harmful to our health. What’s bad, the great noi from the factory had a bad effect on our activities. As a result, our school is no longer what it ud to. Our teachers and students are mirable beyond the description.
No. 13
Now I’d like to tell you something took place in my school yesterday. In the afternoon we are all held together for our 18-years-old birthday. At the first we promid that like grown-ups we should be responsible for our society. Then we expresd thank to our parents who experienced hardships to bring us up and our teachers who educated us heart or soul. And our teachers also gave to us cards expressing our good congratulations and wishes to us. Finally, we put on wonderfully performances.
No. 14
In the country now, there are many children do not attend the school. I think one of the reasons is that their families are very poor to nd them to school. They had to stay at home to make money to support their families. Other reason is that many parents think it uless of the girls to study and
they do not like them to go to school. A third reason is what some children are not interesting in their lessons. In my opinion, all children, included girls, have the chance to receive education. Everybody should pay attention for the education of the children.
No. 15
It is known to us, a vere tusnami occurred in the Indian Ocean in December 26, 2004. It’s reported
that more than 10 countries were suffered from the disaster. But it caud more than 200,000 deaths and left million of people homeless. Countless hous and schools have destroyed. Just imagine how the students here need help. Schools should be rebuilt so that they could return to class soon. Here the Student Union ca lls for everyone to do something for them. We’ll have a voluntary contribution this week. Let’s give away our pocket’s money.
有奢有得网No. 16
The Guangming Middle School is in west of the city, with the Chengxi River run nearby. When you enter the school, you can e a big flower bed in the front of you, and two large buildings on both side: the library on your right and the teach building on your left. Walk on further, and you will find the sports building. Behind which, there are two basketball courts. On the north of them is the sports ground. On it’s east side stand two buildings: the dining hall, or the dormitory. All the buildings of the school is surrounded by bushes and flowers.
No. 17
One morning, Mrs. Smith’s dog was hunger. She took out a piece of paper,that read, “Give it half a pound of meat.” Then she gave it to the dog saying “Bring it to the butcher’s.” The dog ran here and
元宵节民俗
gave the paper to the butcher. He read it and did. Soon, the dog came again and gave him other piece of paper. Without looking, he did so once more. Two hours late it came again. He wandered why Mrs. Smith gave it so much meat. He read the paper and found out there was not a single word on it. What a clever dog it was!
No. 18
Mr. Chen has a habit of drink. The best prent to him, of cour, is wine. His the eldest son brought him a bottle of Mao Tai. He was glad and drank them up. Then he wrote “105”on the trademark with a pencil, meant he had already drunk 105 bottles the wine. Two days late, a stranger came and offered to paying 5 Y uan for the empty bottle. Mr. Chen was very pleasnt and sold it. Several days later, his cond son brought him other bottle of Mao Tai. While enjoying it, he suddenly found out “105”----the very mark on it.
No. 19
One day a lawyer happened to e a man beat a donkey with a stick. “Why were you doing that?” asked the lawyer. “To make the donkey to go.” answered the man. “Have you right to beat the animal like that?” asked the lawyer once again. “Certain I have.” said the man. “It is my donkey and I ca n d
o that I’d like to with what is my”. The lawyer thought for a minute and took his own stick and beat the man. “Stopping!” cried the man, “Are you mad?” “Oh, yes. This is my stick and I can do what I like with what was mine.”
No. 20
An old man was ating in an armchair at home, reading his newspaper. Beside him lay a dog sleep soundly. The old man decided to leaving home for a while, and he couldn’t go out with his slippers on. So he woke up the dog and let it fetched the shoes for him. Out of its expectation, the dog didn’t even stand, but just barked with two eyes clod again. He was complete puzzled. As he was wondering what was happening, a cat appeared in the front of him. Why do you think a cat came there?
No. 21
Show respect to parents is one of the Chine traditional moral value. As most of the students today are “the only child” in their family, they often regard them as the “centre” of the family, without caring many about their parents. Our school start a programme when the new year came. It is “Respecting parents programme”. Ten “Do’s” have worked out for the students to follow clearly and easily. They i
nclud: “Remember your parents” birthdays and express you're the best wishes to them; tell “hello” to your parents e them returning home; a nd tell your parents where you go when you leave home.” The programme has been successfully.
No. 22武当功夫
Welcome to Holland! I hope you all enjoy your staying here. I’m glad you have come on April, for spring is certainly a best ason to get to know Holland. I’m sure you will amazed by the color and variety of all the flowers. Y ou won’t be able to stop taking photograph! We have many beautiful towns. I suggest you start by taking a boats trip on the Canals. It’s a relaxed way of visiting the old canal hous. Then you can visit to our muums and churches. Y ou don’t have to worry about language problems there. Just have a plead trip and come again next year.
No. 23
This is said that Great biologist Darwin was a man with a n of humor. Once he is invited to dinner. At the dinner, he happened to sit next a young good-looking woman. “Mr. Darwin,” the woman asked a biologist, “I heard of you have made a surprising conclusion which the person's ancestor is the monkey. I am suitable for you row of judgment?” “Certainly.” Darwin well-mannered re
plied. “I am like the monkey?” "Yes, you aren’t. And you were changed not from the ordinary monkey, but from the extreme attractive monkey.”
No. 24
I am shy when at school. I was afraid of speaking in front of the class. When I had to face such many classmates, I felt nervous but my voice and legs shook. My teachers helped me a lot of. They often encouraged me to answer question in class and to go to the teachers’desk to read lessons. Sometime I felt I didn’t do so well bu t they spoke high of me. Meanwhile, my classmates kindly asked me to join them all kinds of activities. All the helped me with my confidence. Since then on I dared to do that I wanted to.
No. 25
When tea and coffee was first introduced to Europe in the 18th century, people thought they were harm. So the king of Swede decided to find whether this was true or not. It was happened that
