托福独立写作范文三两招突破独立写作系列
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今日一招：
“四两拨千斤”
解读：一句话完成“对比”性的争论
“
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to work for a business owned by someone el than to work for a business ow
ned by your family.
”
我们以【立场：work for a business owned by someone el】为例，展现这一招“四两拨千斤”：
先争论对方的劣势：假如work for a business owned by my family，可能会让我感到不适。
If I work for a business owned by my family, the atmosphere of the company may feel strange, making me uncomfortable. This is my ca, actually. I declined the offer from my uncle’s company for the consideration that since I may be recognized as the nephew of the company’s owner, other staff may show a defensive attitude and gesture when they work with me. They may exchange ideas behind my back, and although tho ideas may not be bad words about the company, they would not involve me in the discussion. Meanwhile, the office may be a stressful place, becau there in their eye is a spy or a sn
itcher, which is me. I do not think that I could feel comfortable working in such an environment as my coworkers would behave with too much discretion in front of me.
至此，我们发觉，我们充分争论了对方的不利之处。然而，我们还没有拿对方的不利之处对比于我方立场。紧急么?不慌。“四两拨千斤”，一句话说明这个劣势/不利的状况在我方的立场下不消失。
This awkward situation would not happen to me in the ca that I work at a company that is not my family’s.
对比论证其实就完成了。.
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今日一招：
“别想了，举例吧”。
解读：抽象话题，没有详细的情景。于是，通过举例设置详细的情景来完成争论。
“
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Remaining happy and optimistic when you fail is more important than achieving success.
”
以【立场： remaining happy and optimistic when you fail is more important】为例，展现这一招：
The esnce of doing anything may not be attaining the desired goal but enjoying the process.
接下来怎么办?抽象话题，没有详细的情景。于是，通过举例设置详细的fail或achieve success的情景或者经受来完成争论。
I have personally met many failures and success in my study. To reflect on the many past achievements and disappointments, I find that tho results did not really matter. What really mattered is how I managed to achieve a goal or what mindt I adopted in the face of being unable to achieve the desired result. As long as the learning, as the process, was productive and enlightening, I did not care about the grades, and it was being able to remain happy and optimistic when I failed that made the process meaningful.
留意：举例中，不肯定特殊详细的某个大事(比如，不是详细的某个prentation、experiment或者paper)，而可以是一种宽泛的状况。
别急，还有福利。
烈火见真金 假如我们【立场：remaining happy and optimistic when you fail is more important】，轻松复制这一招：
Success creates a pleasure that is far more joyful and overwhelming than the happiness or optimism we have when we fail. 云计算含义
上一个演示段落里设置的详细的fail或achieve success的情景或者经受，简洁调整就可以用来争论另一个立场了，轻松、省脑。
I have personally met many failures and success in the many examinations I have taken. To revisit the many past accomplishments and disappointments, I find that tho good grades were way more enjoyable than the resilient mindt in the face of poor grades. This is best illustrated by a particular ca that I failed multiple times in my attempt to pass the qualification test of being a nutritionist and eventually achieved a passing score and got the licen in my third attempt. The joy was a feeling that is so strong that no optimism in any failure can create.
托福独立写作范文 | 三两招突破独立写作系列(三)
折射现象
《金牌教程》是入门托福写作的“良品”我们以94页的题目为例，(通过主体部分的一个段落)快速学会一些构建复合句的招式。
.The first reason is simple, and it is about life quality. 写段落中心句的时候，通过连词and建立的平行关系，构建两个简洁的“主—系—表”句子的符合，并且前后两个句子形成信息的递进关系。
.A person who is generous in his or her expen of money may live his or her life to the fullest. 对于主语a person做定语从句的修饰，就可以把人的行为和结果放到一个复合句里说明白了。同时，这个句子还可以以另一个复合句形式呈现：If a person is generous in his or her expen of money, the person may live his or her life to the fullest. 这个句子中，把人的行文放到了条件状语从句里，构建了一个“条件—结果”复合句。
.Otherwi, life may be dull and awkward. 两个复合句之后，不要连续复合句了，此处简洁句为宜。
.For example, money may be spent on purchasing goods, bringing us material comfort. 进入举例的部分，这一句，通过伴随状语来构建复合句。
.A woolen blanket, for cold temperatures, may be costly but quite cozy, or good pair of
shoes may be expensive but nice to the feet. 通过连词or建立的平行关系，构建两个简洁的“主—系—表”句子的符合，前后两个句子所描述的状况形成平行关系。
廉颇读音 .In addition, money may be ud to purcha rvices, particularly entertainment, which creates fun. 这个句子中，通过最终的非限定性定语从句构建复合句，引出“fun”这个花钱的好处。
安吉白茶 .It is obvious that people need spiritual enjoyment in their lives. 通过形式主语It去指代后面的由that引导的名词性从句构建复合句。此处“福利“：形式主语是由于英语句子(普遍说来)的习惯是“头轻脚重”，是“头小尾大”。
.Such a style of life contrasts sharply with the plain andfrugal one. 同样地，复合句连续消失之后，需要简洁句来调剂一下。
.As money is saved, the comfort or fun may be reduced. 通过as引导的状语从句构建复合句。
.In other words, a person who is stingy or conrvative about spending would rather m
ake do, with very limited material, and bear the boredom. 至此，是不是可以从前面的展现中找到这个复合句的构建复合的方式?但是，似乎还有一些部分搞不清晰?没事，我们的栏目会在后面的episodes中渐渐掩盖。
.However, the awkwardness deprives the person of the many possibilities of life. 简洁句。
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