读后续写精读精炼（一）
一：原文重现
Dad and Mom had got to go on a four-day business trip. They taught their elder son Daniel and younger daughter Jane how to feed and look after their dog, Spot, how to take good care of themlves—learning to cook if they could, or ordering pizza—with money left on the table—if they were busy, and told them to keep their rooms clean and tidy. They asked Daniel to be in charge.
On the very morning when the parents left, Mom kisd them and said to Daniel gently, “Young man, do take care of Spot and Jane.” Daniel promid, “I will, Mom.”
Too excited to fall asleep again, Daniel and Jane jumped out of bed, calling out each other to get up. Their pet dog, Spot, heard the similar voice and rushed in, with a ball in its mouth. Jane stuck(伸) her head into Daniel’s room,“Spot got up an hour earlier. Let’s walk it.” Daniel said excitedly, “I’m coming, but, Jane, don’t forget to keep your room clean and tidy.” “I will.”
They ran with the dog in the yard and threw the ball away for Spot to bring it back. They had fun playing with Spot the whole morning. Washing Spot was slow and tiring as it was the first time they had done it. Then Daniel ttled down to his homework while Jane did her reading with interest.
The following day, Jane begged her brother to order pizza for lunch. Daniel agreed excitedly, “We haven’t tasted that for long and we behave ourlves, right?”After a while, he added, “We should save money, too.” Within half an hour, they treated themlves to a big pizza. However, in the afternoon, Spot looked sick, lying lazily and unwilling to move. Daniel was concerned about the dog and took it to the pet clinic immediately with Jane as their parents had done.
注意：(1)续写词数应为150左右；
薄古开来(2)请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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When Dad and Mom arrived a day earlier, they were amazed to find everything in a mess.
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红色家书诵读Daniel ran into his room, with tears in his eyes,“ Jane, there is no need to explain and Mom won’t trust me any longer.”
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二：文本解析
美丽心灵的永恒阳光
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了爸爸和妈妈要去出差四天，他们教年长的儿子丹尼尔和小女儿简学会独立生活并照顾好狗Spot。父母离开之后，丹尼尔和简兴奋得睡不着觉，他们和Spot玩的非常开心。他们给学会给Spot洗澡，订披萨当午餐。然而Spot生病了，他们把Spot带到了动物诊所。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“当爸爸和妈妈提前一天到达时，他们惊奇地发现所有的东西都是一团糟。”可知，第一段可描写父母非常生气。
②由第二段首句内容“丹尼尔跑进自己的房间，眼里含着泪水：“简，没有必要解释了，妈
妈不会再相信我了。””可知，第二段可描写爸爸妈妈了解了真相并向丹尼尔道歉。
2.续写线索：出差——兴奋——洗澡——生病——生气——原谅
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.大喊：shout/roar
②.用完：ud up/run out of
一辈子的英文③.理解：understand/make n of
情绪类
①. 生气的：angry/in anger
②. 焦急地：anxiously /worriedly
昏睡症增分句型：
1. Hearing the little daughter’s words, Mom understood that the reason why they had no time to clean the hou was that they waited for Spot at the clinic all day.（现在分词作状语、关系副词why引导的定语从句和连接词that引导的表语从句）
2. She apologized to Daniel sincerely and hugged him in her arms, saying that “you are really growing up into a young man.”（现在分词作状语）
三：续写单句训练
1 当爸爸妈妈一天前到达时，他们惊讶地发现一切都一团糟。
抽奖券尺寸
2 妈妈很生气，喊道：“听我说，年轻人，我让你负责了。我们以为你会表现得像个成年人，但看看这一团糟。
3 买食物的钱已经用完了，但为什么Spot看起来仍然很饿呢？
4 你用我们剩下的钱做了什么？
5 简焦急地解释说：“妈妈，斯波特病了，所以我们把剩下的钱把它带到了宠物诊所。”
6 丹尼尔跑进自己的房间，眼睛里含着泪水：“简，没有必要解释，妈妈也不再相信我了。”
甲胎蛋白高7 爸爸安慰妈妈平静地说：“可能一切都是有很好的解释的。”
8 听到小女儿的话，妈妈明白他们没有时间打扫房子的原因是他们整天在诊所等现场
