高考模拟考试英语试题
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My great-grandmother Eileen is fierce, loyal and strong and a bit of legend in her own lifetime, which now stretches to 92 years. I should add that we’re not allowed call her Gran, becau she says it makes her feel old.
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That summer, I lost my job and felt hopeless. One day, I paid a visit to her. She picked up a box which she placed on the coffee table. “There you go,” she said. “You do know what you’re doing with the things, don’t you?”
It was a new phone. Her current mobile was pretty ancient. I was amazed it was still going.
“Yes,” I said.
“Good. That’s why I ask you. You young pe ople know more about such things than us oldies. You can take it home with you and get it all t up,” she went on. “Then, when you bring it back, you can show me how to u my new phone, such as getting on the Internet, nding
e-mails and so on.” She smi led so sweetly that I felt a surge of love for her.
I grabbed the box and stood up. Setting up the phone would be easy. It was teaching her how to u it that may prove challenging.
The following day I headed back to my great-grandmother’s with the phone. “Here’s your phone. It’s all ready to u.”
For the next hour, I was busy tting up her passcode and fingerprint recognition, which she said was like something out of James Bond.
She cho a picture for her screen and it was all going so well until I tried to show her how to swipe（滑动屏幕）. “What do you mean, swipe?” she asked. She was 92, I reminded mylf. This had been tiring for her.
She presd at the up arrow and got angry when nothing happened. When I finally got her to swipe,
she di dn’t put the right amount of pressure on and the menu slipped away. After what emed like hours, she threw the phone across the room and it landed on the sofa. “Take it away!” she howled. “I want my old phone back!”
I picked up the phone and was about to leave to give her time to cool down when I realized I didn’t want to go home when she was angry upt.
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“Come on, Eileen. One more try.” I said. _____________
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穷山僻壤I was not feeling so hopeless any more now. ____
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1.人物（角色）：u盘的英文
①Eileen：great-grandmother（曾祖母），92岁了，fierce, loyal and strong and a bit of legend，而且不允许我们叫她奶奶。她喜欢尝试新鲜事物，想换只手机，但智能手机给她带来了一些“麻烦”
②I: 失业，失意。拜访曾祖母的时候，她让我把智能手机的应用程序安装一下，并教教她如何使用智能手机
2.主题：人与社会（他人）、人与自我
兰石公园我的曾祖母是一个92岁高龄，她严厉、忠诚、坚强，但又有一定传奇色彩的人物。她喜欢尝试新鲜的事物。我失业失意在家。有一次去拜访她的时候，她让我把她的新智能手机安装好并教她使用。我为
她设置了密码和指纹锁后，教她如何滑动屏幕，但却在这里困住了。她就是学不会。于是，她很生气，把手机扔到了沙发上，并且吼着让
锅贴的做法我拿走。正当我准备离开曾祖母回家的时候，我转念一想，在她还生着气的时候，我不应该回家。于是，……
3.续写情节安排：
♥第一段：“Come on, Eileen. One more try.” I said.
①（与开头句衔接）老太太假装生气，但我知道她的“把戏”
②我用什么方式让她对新手机继续怀有“好奇”？
③（与下文开头句衔接）老太太最终“学会”使用新手机，她的“感谢”给了我温暖和力量
♥第二段：I was not feeling so hopeless any more now.
①（与开头句衔接）看到老太太脸上的笑容，我很是佩服这位上了年纪的老太太
②与老太太进一步交流
③老太太的一番话让我更加明白我的人生之路应该如何去走
下水作文
“Come on, Eileen. One more try.” I said. Still in her anger, my
great-grandmother turned her back to me, pretending to ignore my words.
I knew her tricks! I went over to her quietly, stretched her new phone before her, and took a lfie with her. She took over the phone immediately before I could do something. “Let me have a look at the photo!” she said curiously as if nothing had happened. “Wow! Great! It indeed works better than the old one!” It emed that “curiosity” drove Eileen to learn to u the new phone fast and perfectly. And her sincere “thanks” brought me warmth and strength. (100 words)
I was not feeling so hopeless any more now. “Eileen, you’re great!” Seeing the brilliant smiles on her face, I showed my admiration to the lovely lady for her “passion” for the new things. Meanwhile, I thought to mylf that nothing could defeat someone if he had a willing heart. “You’re cooler than James Bond! Nothing is difficult for you.” “Thanks again, my dear! Surely, I’m eager to learn something new, though it may bring difficulties to me. It really brought me benefits to think of something from different angels. So it is with you!” My
great-grandmother’s words really got me lost in thought and inspired me go forward. (100 words)
参考范文
“Come on, Eileen. One more try.” I said. “This time I’ll hold your finger and show you how much pressure to u. Guess what, it took me a while to get the hang of swiping.” added I. I held her finger gently and her face lit up when the menu appeared. “I want a lfie with you. Show me how to u the camera!” My heart sank a bit, but she didn’t need a lot of help and we nt her friend Emily a photo of us both laugh ing. “I can’t wait to show everyone my new phone,” she said happily. “Thank you for your patience, Tom.” (99 words)
I was not feeling so hopeless any more now. Great-grandma’s spirit inspired me greatly. It occurred to me that if a 92-year-old lady could learn new skills, then so could I. I had no doubt that I would find something I liked even more. There must be a job out there for me somewhere and I was sure to find it. I headed for home with a smile on my face and a whole lot of love for my amazing great-grandmother. My great-grandmother would always be a role model for me to learn from. (85 words)
