专题02 劳动感悟类
一、真题链接
（2021年浙江卷6月）
My dad, George, only had an eighth grade education. A quiet man, he didn't understand my world of school activities. From age 14, he worked. And his dad, Albert, took the money my dad earned and ud it to pay family expens.
I didn't really understand his world either: He was a livestock trucker, and I thought that I would surpass（超过）anything he had accomplished by the time I walked across the stage at high school graduation.
Summers in the mid-70s were spent at home shooting baskets, hitting a baball, or throwing a football. , preparing for my future as a quarterback on a football team. In poor weather, I read about sports or practiced my trombone（长号）.
The summer before my eighth grade I was one of a group of boys that a neighboring farmer hired to work in his field. He explained our basic task, the tractor fired up and we were off, riding down the field
looking for weeds to spray with chemicals. After a short way, the farmer stopped and pointed at a weed which we misd. Then we began again. This happened over and over, but we soon learned to identify different grass like cockleburs, lamb's-quarters, foxtails, and the king of weeds, the pretty purple thistle. It was tiring work, but I looked forward to the pay, even though I wasn't sure how much it would amount to.
At home, my dad said, "A job's a big step to growing up. I'm glad you will be contributing to the houhold." My dad's words made me realize that my earnings might not be mine to do with as I wished.
My labors lasted about two weeks, and the farmer said there might be more work, but I wasn't interested. I decided it was not fair that I had to contribute my money.
Paragraph1：When I brought my paycheck home--it was $ 119--my dad wanted to talk to me.
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Paragraph2：I was surprid that my dad allowed me to u the money as I wished.
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二、真题解析
2.1 整体把握怎么共享文件
2.2逐句写作
第一段：
1.知道他会谈论我的收入，我拉长了脸，打算从他身边走过，溜回我的卧室。
Knowing that he would talk about my earnings, I pulled a long face and intended to simply walk past him and slip back to my bedroom.
炒年糕的家常做法2.“过来，孩子。”爸爸带着一种平易近人的表情喊道。
“Come here, son.”Dad exclaimed, wearing an accessible expression.描写夏季的诗句
3.我的心沉了下去。我一直期待的是——一套梦幻般的新足球装备最终会变成家庭开支。My heart sank. What I had been looking forward to—a dreamy new football outfit would finally give way to family expens.
4.我很不情愿地向前挪了挪，提交了工资。
Reluctantly, I inched forward and submitted the paycheck.
5.然而，爸爸把薪水塞回到我手里，温柔地说：“你长大了。你完全有权决定如何处理这笔钱。”
沉浸的英文However,Dad slid the paycheck back into my hand, saying in a tender voice, “You've grown up. You have every right to decide what to do with the money.”
第二段：
6.我先前的绝望立即被巨额薪水抹去。
My previous desperation was immediately erad by great bills.
7.我走近他，紧紧地拥抱了他。就在那一刻，我注意到他灰白的头发和僵硬的脖子。
I stepped clor and hugged him tightly. Just at that moment I noticed his grey hair and stiff neck.
8.他平时脖子疼的叫喊声音的回忆涌上心头。
Memories of his usual cry of pain on the neck came crowding in.
9.我意识到他作为一名卡车司机的辛苦工作为这个家庭做出了多么大的贡献。
I realized how much he had contributed to the family through his tiring work of being a trucker.
10.泪水模糊了我的视线，“爸爸，谢谢你这些年来的辛勤工作。我不应该这么自私，不愿意贡献我的薪水。”
Tears began to blur my vision, “Dad, thanks for your hard work the years. I shouldn’t have been so lfish and not willing to contribute my money.”
11.那天，我开始了解爸爸的世界，他似乎也在进入我的世界的路上。
On that day, I began to understand Dad’s world and it emed that he was also on the way into my world.
2.3 范文赏析
When I brought my paycheck home--it was$119--my dad wanted to talk to me.Knowing that he would talk about my earnings, I pulled a long face and intended to simply walk past him and
slip back to my bedroom. “Come here, son.”Dad exclaimed, wearing an accessible expression. My heart sank. What I had been looking forward to—a dreamy new football outfit would finally give way to family expens. Reluctantly, I inched forward and submitted the paycheck. However,Dad slid the paycheck back into my hand, saying in a tender voice, “You've grown up. You have every right to dec
ide what to do with the money.”
I was surprid that my dad allowed me to u the money as I wished.My previous desperation was immediately erad by great bills. I stepped clor and hugged him tightly. Just at that moment I noticed his grey hair and stiff neck. Memories of his usual cry of pain on the neck came crowding in. I realized how much he had contributed to the family through his tiring work of being a trucker. Tears began to blur my vision, “Dad, thanks for your hard work the years. I shouldn’t have been so lfish and not willing to contribute my money.”On that day, I began to understand Dad’s world and it emed that he was also on the way into my world.
三、素材积累
3.1 情绪类素材积累
品牌钢琴消极情绪
不高兴unhappy/ displead /upt 心沉下去heart sink
绝望desperate / fall into despair 不情愿的unwilling/reluctant
3.2 动作类素材积累
向前挪动inch forward 引起某人的不快arou one’s displeasure
皱眉 a frown stand on one’s face 眉头紧锁eyebrows knot together
擦眼泪wipe away the tears 忍不住哭can’t hold back tears
应时而生脸气地通红flush with anger 气地说不出话be speechless with anger
蔡雨晴
四、模拟演练
练习（一）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节，使之构成一个完整的故事。
A man came home from work late, tired and irritated (不耐烦的), to find his 5-year-old son waiting for him at the door.
"Daddy, may I ask you a question?"
"Yeah sure, what is it?" replied the man.
"Daddy, how much do you make an hour?"
"That's none of your business. Why do you ask such a thing?" the man said angrily.
"I just want to know. Plea tell me. How much do you make an hour?" pleaded the little boy.
"If you must know, I make $20 an hour."
"Oh," the little boy replied, with his head down. Looking up, he said, "Daddy, may I plea borrow $10?"
The father was angry, "If the only reason you asked is that you can borrow some money to buy a silly toy or some other nonn, then you march yourlf straight to your room and go to bed. Think about why you are being so lfish (自私的). I work hard every day for such childish behavior." The little boy quietly went to his room and shut the door. The man sat down and started to get even angrier about the little boy's questions. "How dare he ask such questions only to get some money?" he thought to himlf. After about an hour or so, the man calmed down, and started to think: Maybe there was something he really needed to buy with that $10 and he really didn't ask for money very often. The man went to the door of the little boy's room and opened the door. "Are you asleep, son?" he asked.
"No, daddy, I'm awake," replied the boy.
"I've been thinking, maybe I was too hard on you earlier," said the man. "It has been a long day and I took out my anger on you. Here's the $10 you asked for."
The little boy sat straight up, smiling. "Oh. Thank you, daddy!" he yelled. Then, reaching under his pillow he pulled out some crumpled (皱巴巴的) bills.
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The man, eing that the boy already had money started to get angry again.
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Not knowing what his son meant, the father just stood there, waiting for his boy's explanation.
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