2021年6月英语高考真题浙江卷 读后续写
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My dad, George, only had an eighth grade education. A quiet man, he didn't understand my world of school activities. From age 14, he worked. And his dad, Albert, took the money my dad earned and ud it to pay family expens.
I didn't really understand his world either: He was a livestock trucker, and I thought that I would surpass（超过）anything he had accomplished by the time I walked across the stage at high school graduation.
Summers in the mid-70s were spent at home shooting baskets, hitting a baball, or throwing a football. , preparing for my future as a quarter back on a football team. In poor weather, I read about sports or practiced my trombone（长号）.
The summer before my eighth grade I was one of a group of boys that a neighboring farmer hired to work in his field. He explained our basic task, the tractor fired up and we were off, ri
ding down the field looking for weeds to spray with chemicals. After a short way, the farmer stopped and pointed at a weed which we misd. Then we began again. This happened over and over, but we soon learned to identify different grass like cockleburs, lamb's-quarters, foxtails, and the king of weeds, the pretty purple thistle. It was tiring work, but I looked forward to the pay, even though I wasn't sure how much it would amount to.
At home, my dad said, "A job's a big step to growing up. I'm glad you will be contributing to the houhold." My dad's words made me realize that my earnings might not be mine to do with as I wished.
My labors lasted about two weeks, and the farmer said there might be more work, but I wasn't interested. I decided it was not fair that I had to contribute my money.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
版本一：
Paragraph1：The pay day arrived at last.___________________
Paragraph2：I understood immediately what my parents were worrying about. ___________________________________
版本二：qq黑名单在哪
Paragraph1：When I brought my paycheck home--it was $ 119--my dad wanted to talk to me._______________________________
青岛四方长途汽车站Paragraph2：I was surprid that my dad allowed me to u the money as I wished._______________________________
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主题
人与社会---家庭生活
原文解读
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语篇大意
本文为记叙文。文章讲述作者8岁暑假的时候，和一群孩子给邻居家的田地除草，打工挣钱的故事。
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关键词
dad, worked, family, future, farmer, learned, tiring, growing up, realize, fair
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题型解读手上的月牙
这是一篇记叙文的读后续写，要求考生在所给短文的基础上续写，并且结合划线词，构成一篇合理的完整故事。读后续写对学生学习语言知识的综合运用能力有着较高的要求。同时也考查学生们的发散思维能力和创造性思维能力。续写故事时，要求考生读懂文章，然后明白故事的发展进程、前因后果、人物特征和情感等。在此基础上，考生必须沿着文章的思路，根据提供的线索，恰当进行发挥，并且要使用给出的至少5个词语等。故事的结尾也必须符合原文的主题意义。
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写作分析
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者高中毕业后，参加农场工作，辛辛苦苦挣到的钱，不情愿贡献给家庭，后来在看到父亲的辛劳之后，理解了父母担心的是自己太过自私而不知奉献，终于想通，并自豪地将自己劳动所得交给父亲的故事。
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详解
版本一
1. 段落续写
① 由第一段首句内容“工资终于到了。”可知，第一段可描写作者的工资到手后，高兴地计划自己用这笔钱，不愿意交给父亲，然后看到父亲的辛劳。
② 由第二段首句内容“我立刻明白了父母的担心。”可知，第二段可描写作者明白了父母担心自己不懂得奉献，想通了，然后自豪地把钱交给了父亲。
2. 续写线索
高兴——计划——不情愿——发现——理解
3. 词汇
行为类
① 计划：idea/plan
② 奉献：contribute/ hand over
③ 发现：find/understand
情绪类
① 不情愿的：unwilling/reluctant(unfair)
② 自豪地：understanding
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【原创范文】
The pay day arrived at last. Holding the money I earned through two-week’s hard work, I couldn’t contain my joy and kept pondering over the question: how should I spend
such a large sum of money?Well, a new football outfit would get me one step clor to my dream of being a quarterback. Suddenly, Dad’s words echoed in my mind, “I’m glad you will be contributing to the family.” “But it’s unfair!” another voice reasoned. Torn between the two voices, I finally decided to go half and half. As I neared home, I heard Mom’s voice, “We need to buy one. But …” “But we are currently short of money.” Dad’s voice emerged, full of anxiety.
I understood immediately what my parents were worrying about. They were talking about the truck engine. It needed to be changed becau its frequent failure to work halfway almost drove Dad mad. Hesitated for veral minutes, I walked towards them and handed overall the money. “Dad, this is what I earned. Here you are!” Seeing what I was doing, Dad froze there for a moment but soon he gathered me into his arms,“You’ve really grown up.” Meanwhile, I saw tears welling up in Mom’s eyes. It was on that day that I realized what Dad had accomplished at my age was much greater than I did.
版本二：
1. 段落续写
依靠的近义词① 由第一段首句内容“拿到119美元的工资了，父亲却有话说。”可知，第一段可描写作者的工资到手后，父亲想用这笔钱，得知消息后，作者的情绪变化。经过和爸爸意味深长的谈话后，虽然作者仍有想要的东西，“迫于压力”，却还是把钱交给了父亲.
② 由第二段首句内容“父亲竟然让我自己决定如何支配这份工资。”可知，第二段主要描述作者内心活动以及最终的决定，突出孩子长大后，对父亲和家人多了一份理解。
2. 续写线索
高兴——不情愿——惊讶——开心--发现--主动贡献
3. 词汇
行为类
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① 发现：talk/ find
② 奉献：offer to contribute手腕骨头突出图片
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情绪类
① 不情愿的：unwilling/surprid/happy/willing
② 自豪地：understanding and thankful
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【原创范文】
When I brought my paycheck home--it was$119--my dad wanted to talk to me. Knowing that he would talk about my earnings, I pulled a long face and intended to simply walk past him and slip back to my bedroom.“Come here, son.” Dad exclaimed, wearing an accessible expression. My heart sank. What I had been looking forward to—a dreamy new football outfit would finally give way to family expens. Reluctantly, I inched forward and submitted the paycheck. However, Dad slid the paycheck back into my hand, saying in a tender voice,"You've
