新高考英语读后续写高频表达指导
情感与动作篇
六大续写功能Functions：
一．复杂心情(消极) 二．不知所措（消极) 三．感激(转变)地瓜做法大全
四．激动(转变) 五．紧张+成功(积极) 六．成功+结尾(积极)
一．复杂心情（震惊/害怕/迷茫)→个人成长与真善美类
→For a moment, within my heart was a complex feeling, which made me rooted to the spot. I should not have behaved in that way.
有一瞬间，我心中有一种复杂的感觉，使得我钉在原地（倒装+定从)。我不应该那样做（虚拟语气)
→ Within ,sb. did , -doing/-ed .
[2016浙江卷]: 在她内心有一种复杂的感觉，Jane维持一动也不动，疲惫和无法动弹。
Within her heart was a complex feeling, Jane remained rooted to the spot, exhausted and unable to move.
[2021八省联考]:在我内心有巨大的惊讶和感激，我站着一动也不动，盯着那个即将从盒子里拿出午餐的女孩。
Within my heart were enormous surpri and gratitude, I stood rooted to the spot, staring at the girl who was about to take out their lunch from a box.
[2021全国1卷]:爸爸难以置信地钉在原地，当他看着可怕的厨房，想象双胞胎做了啥。
Within his heart was a complex feeling, Dad remained rooted to the spot in disbelief, watching the terrible kitchen and imagining what they had done.
→配套词汇及短语：
1. complex adj.复杂的 2.complicated adj.复杂的 3. emotion (s) n.情绪 4. freeze (fro
ze) v.冻住，冻结
5. be rooted to the spot (因为惧怕或吃惊而)钉在原地 6. abruptly 突然地 7. stand (stood) still站住不动
8. imagined what sb had done想象下某人做啥 9. the sudden situation 突如其来的情况
二．不知所措 (茫然/紧张/害怕)
→ Heart beating wildly, she had no idea what to do. As a few conds pasd, an idea came into her mind.
心在狂跳，她不知道该怎么办。随着数秒后，她的脑海里出现了一个想法。冬瓜炖鸡
独立主格句式: 独立主语1非谓语动词，句子主语2+谓语动词。
→ (高分替换词+比喻+名从+时间独立主格句式) →-ing/-ed , sb. did
Heart beating wildly出厂检验报告模板 like a beast, she was at a loss what to do next. A couple of conds slipping away, an idea struck her like lightning.
1. 她的脸颊因尴尬而灼热，她不知道该怎么办。(前半句“五官”用:独立主格)
Cheeks burning with embarrassment, she wondered what to do.
2. 顿时，她的大脑一片空白，不知道该怎么办。(前半句“大脑”用:独立主格)
All of a sudden, her mind 折垃圾桶going blank, she had no idea what to do.
3: 被所发生的一切吓坏了，他站原地不动，不知道接下来怎么办(非谓语)。
Terrified by what had happened,益母草的作用及功效 he was rooted to the spot, not knowing what to do next.
→配套词汇及短语：
1. wildly adv.狂乱地 2. like a beast像猛兽般地 3. like lightning像闪电般地(时间)
4.slip away溜走 5. (be) at a loss不知所措的 6. Mind going blank,..大脑一片空白
7. Heart beating (racing)...心狂跳 8. Cheeks burning,... 脸颊在燃烧般....(不知道)
9. wonder what to do 想着怎么办 10. a couple of一些（人或物)
三．感激(感激+感悟）
→Choked with overwhelming gratitude, Mac bowed low to them repeatedly, without who help he couldn't have gone through it.(独立结构) Mac被巨大的感激之情所哽咽，一再向他们深深鞠躬，没有他们的帮助，他就无法度过难关。
→It was this unique experience that reminded Mac of the value of strangers' help, inspiring him to spread this kindness to others.(强调句) 正是这个独特的经历让Mac想到了陌生人帮助的价值，激励他将这种善意传播给他人。
→-ing/-ed , sb. did ，without .
→It was that , -ing .
提炼:→ Choked with overwhelming ..., sb2, without who help sb1 couldn't have done sth.
→It was this unique experience that reminded sb of the value of sth, inspiring him to do sth.
[2022全国1卷the forest run] David完成跑步，明白勇气的重要(用以上模板)
1. David因巨大的兴奋而哽咽，他紧紧地抱着我和他的教练，没有(我们的)指导，他就无法完成跑步，他坚持这样说。Choked with overwhelming excitement, David hugged me and his coach tightly, without who guidance he couldn't have finished the run, as he 关于元宵的诗句古诗insisted.
2. 正是这次独特的经历让大卫想到了勇气和信心的价值，激励他从此勇敢地应对挑战。
领导升迁祝福语It was this unique experience that had reminded David of the value of courage and faith, inspiring him to address challenges bravely ever since.
→配套词汇及短语：
1. overwhelming adj.巨大的 2.gratitude n.感激 3.repeatedly adv. 一再地
4.go through sth 度过（难关) 5. value陈皮山楂茶 n.价值,重要性 6. be chocked with(+情绪n.) 因......而哽咽
7. bowed (low) to sb向某人(深深)鞠躬 8. couldn't have done sth本不能做到(虚拟语气但实际做了)
8. 提醒某人做某事 remind sb of sth (使某人想到某事) 9. inspire sb to do sth激励某人做某事
四．激动 (情绪+肢体+语言)
→Overwhelmed by wild joy, I ro to my feet and punched my fist in the air, shouting out loud, "I made it!”.
被狂野的喜悦所淹没，我站起来，在空中挥拳，大喊道:“我做到了!”
1. 惊慌失措, 我跳了起来，尽可能大声地尖叫:“救命!”
Overcome by a n of panic, I ro to my feet, screaming as loud as I could,"Help!".
2. 被一阵紧张所支配，我跳了起来，问自己说:“我该怎么办?”
Dominated by a flush of nervousness, I jumped to my feet, asking mylf,"What should I do?”
[2021全国1卷 Mother's Day Surpri]
“成功了! 我们做到了! Jeff 大喊大叫，她在空中挥舞着拳头。
一种温暖的感觉充满了她们的心，因为这对她们来说真的是一次难忘的经历。
不管怎样，她们胜利完成了一个愉悦的惊喜。
“It was a success! We made it!”, Jeff shouted as she punched her fist in the air.
