高三英语新题型读后续写不同主题分析--乐于助人
板块一--例文迎老爷（与人为善）
“Hurry, Marcus!” Millie called to her brother. Marcus caught up just as the school bus arrived. The doors opened and they got their first look at the new bus driver, Mr. Cross. There was no smile on his face. He just nodded at them as they climbed the steps. Millie wondered if he ever smiled. “I miss our old driver,” she whispered.
The bus traveled two more blocks, then stopped in front of a hou with no one in sight. “Hey, we don’t usually stop here,” whispered Millie. Mr. Cross opened the bus doors.
Millie waited to e who would get on, but nobody did. Still, Mr. Cross nodded his head, the way he had when she and Marcus boarded the bus. Then he clod the doors.
“Did you e that?” Millie said. “He just opened the doors and nodded at someone, but nobody got on!” Marcus agreed. “That was strange.” The bus continued on the route, and the usual kids got on. Mr. Cross nodded at each one.
During school that day, Millie kept thinking back to what had happened that morning. It didn't make n. At the end of the day, when she and Marcus got on the bus to go home, Marcus said, “I think I figured it out. He probably stopped to pick up a ghost kid!”
“A ghost kid?” Millie gulped (倒吸气).
“Maybe Mr. Cross can e ghosts,” Marcus said.
“No,” said Millie. “That’s silly.” But as they rode home, Millie thought about it. What el could it be? Why el would he open the doors?
The next two days, the same thing happened. The bus stopped and the doors opened. Smileless, Mr. Cross nodded, and the doors clod. Millie began to panic. This time she decided Marcus was right. “Who is this ghost kid? What if he’s sitting next to us?” They gathered courage to find out the truth.
On Friday morning, the bus stopped at that hou again. Their hearts raced.
注意:
1. 富贵盈门续写词数应为 150 左右:
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。
When Mr. Cross opened the doors and nodded to nobody, they went forward to him.
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Hearing the story, in relief, they decided to visit the hou and e what can be done.
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【答案】When Mr. Cross opened the doors and nodded to nobody, they went forward to him. Millie said, “Excu me, Mr. Cross, who gets on at this stop every morning?” Mr. Cross replied, “I am afraid that there are some misunderstandings between us. I have an old friend who lives in the old hou at the end of this block. Every day at this time, she will wave at me in front of the hou. I can also e her in the distance and know that she is healthy and safe. I am so tall that I have to nod my head to look outside. ”
开拓进取的意思
Hearing the story, in relief, they decided to visit the hou and e what can be done. As approaching the hou, they saw an old woman sitting on a chair with a dog next to her. They introduced themlves to this old woman. From then on, they often came to help the old woman with some houwork on weekends. With the generous help of Millie and Marcus, the old woman no longer felt lonely. She often told them some old stories and they became good friends.
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇记叙文。米莉和她的弟弟马库斯乘坐的校车换了司机，新司机开车每次过两个街区都会停下来，并没有任何人上车，司机都会点一下头。米莉和马库斯既害怕又纳闷。终于有一天，他们决心弄清楚这件事情。
【详解】本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知，米莉和她的弟弟乘坐的校车换了司机，新司机叫克罗斯，他们觉得新司机很陌生，脸上没有笑容。更令他们害怕的是，
校车每次过两个街区，克罗斯先生就会把车停下来，并没有任何人上车，但是司机都会点一下头。他们很诧异，弟弟马库斯猜测说，克罗斯先生在那一站接上来的是“鬼孩子”，米莉并不这么想，但是也很害怕。接下来的几天都是这样，他们忍不住了。终于有一天，他们鼓起勇气，决心把这个事情弄明白。
续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：当克罗斯先生打开门，对着无人的地方点头示意时，他们向他走去……因此，接下来应该续写，司机克罗斯先生是怎样把这个事情跟米莉姐弟解释清楚的。原来是一场误会，克罗斯先生有一位老朋友就住在这附近，这位老朋友是个老妇人，年龄大了，自己孤独的住在这里。每次到车到这的时候，老妇人都会出来和他挥挥手，他也能从远处看看她，看到老朋友是健康的、安全的，他就放心了。
第二段开头是：听到这个故事，他们松了一口气，决定去这个房子看看能做些什么……本段续写他们认识了住在房子里的老妇人，并且经常在周末的时候来帮助老人做家务，他们也成了很好的朋友。
迷人的乳沟【点睛】本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：wave at，in front of，in the distance，no longer等高级词汇；定语从句I have an old friend who lives in the old ho
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u at the end of this block；结果状语从句I am so tall that I have to nod my head to look outside；运用了With the generous 的with复合结构等高级句式。
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版块二---读后续写精彩词句集锦
助销表人物日常活动
1.常常发生的事：a frequent occurrence
2.费时的：time-consuming
3.让某人记忆犹新：remain fresh in one ’ s memory我们不是最好的
4.一件身心有益的事情:an enchanting mental and physical business
5.省钱省时间：be less time-consuming and more economical
6.辛劳的任务：an arduous/a painstaking/a laborious task
7.需要紧急处理：require urgent attention
8.值得珍藏的经历：a truly memorable experience
9.回忆高中生活的美好时刻：recall the sweet moment of one's high school life
10.经受起起落落：go through ups and downs
11.自动电话：a dial/an automatic telephone
12.长途电话：a long-distance telephone
