例句1：在中国，一些教育机构打着颠覆传统教育的标语从事线上教育。 不好：In China, some education enterpris conducted online education with a slogan of overturning traditional education. 较好：In China, some education enterpris described their work as overturning traditional education 牛肉汤粉and感观世界在线观看 conducted online education. |
例句2：相比于设备甲，我更相信设备乙。 不好：I believe device A more than device B. 较好：I believe device A would be more effective than device B. |
例句3：随着时光流逝，这些企业从市场上消失了。 不好：The enterpris faded away from the market as time went by. 较好：Over time, the enterpris faded away from the market. |
例句4：从中国教育部的统计资料可以看出，截止到2016年，中小学网络覆盖率达到87%。 中国五大银行不好：We have en statistics from the Ministry of Education of China showing that the Internet access rate of elementary and high schools in China had reached 87% by 2016. 较好：Statistics from the Ministry of Education of China have shown that, by 2016, the Internet access rate of elementary and high schools in China had reached 87%. |
例句5：看到这些成就，我逐渐坚定了职业方向，希望能为机械工程领域做出贡献。 不好：I have obrved the achievements, and I have gradually decided my directions of career development in order to make good contributions to the field of mechanical engineering. 较好：I have obrved the achievements, which inspired me to direct my career development to contribute positively to the field of mechanical engineering. |
例句6：由于他们片面理解“技术”概念，导致失败。 不好：They failed due to their partial understanding of the “technology” concept. 销售协议较好：They failed due to their partial understanding of the role of technology. |
5个月宝宝拉肚子例句7：这些技术不论软硬都是有用的。 错误：The technologies, regardless soft or hard, are uful. 正确：The technologies, whether soft or hard, are uful. |
不好：This experience was the motivation for me to pursue study in mechanical engineering. 较好：This experience motivated me to pursue study in mechanical engineering |
不好：This is an important stage during the growth of children. 较好：This is an important stage in children’s growth. |
不好：There are powerful voices to call for changes in systems engineering. 较好：Powerful voices are calling for changes in systems engineering. |
不好：Changing people’s perception of the nature of systems engineering is the key to the success of making positive changes in system science. 较好：The key to making positive changes in system science is transforming the perception of the nature of systems engineering. |
错误：Only by changing the work condition, it is possible for them to finish the project. 正确：Only by changing the work condition, is it possible for them to finish the project. |
不强调否定：The performance or the durability of the engine has not been changed. 强调否定：Neither the performance nor the durability of the engine has been changed. |
不好：I thought the reason was that I was not fluent in German. 较好：I thought this was becau I was not fluent in German. |
不好：The reason for the engineers to choo this software was that they wanted fast computation. 较好：The engineers have chon this software becau they wanted fast computation. |
饶字开头的成语修饰关系清晰性不好：鲫鱼冬瓜汤Some education enterpris described their work as overturning traditional education and conducted online education in China. 修饰关系清晰性较好：In China, some education enterpris described their work as overturning traditional education and conducted online education. |
语意连续性不好：I received support from my parents when I was young in learning math. 语意连续性较好：When I was young, my parents supported me in learning math. |
特意强调性不好：I studied in Shanghai in mechanical engineering during my four years of undergraduate study. 特意强调性较好：用醋泡脚During my four years of undergraduate study, I studied in Shanghai in mechanical engineering. |
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