专题六 写作第二节——读后续写
新高考命题探究——以浙江卷3年高考为例
项目 卷别 | 写作文体 | 命题类型 | 材料词数 | 主题范围 |
2020·模拟卷 | 叙事类记叙文 | 半开放法国简介 | 330 | 人与自我·我和流浪狗的故事 |
| 红曲米的食用方法 2018年6月 | 故事类记叙文 | 半开放类 | 320七堇年 | 人与自我·父亲带儿子去体验农场生活 |
2017年11月 | 故事类记叙文 | 半开放类 | 338 | 人与自我·和父母一块去旅游的故事 |
2017年6月 | 故事类记叙文 | 半开放类 | 344 | 人与自我·和朋友一起骑车游玩，野外遇到狼的故事 |
泡脚中药2016年10月 | 故事类记叙文 | 半开放类 | 332 | 人与自我·野外游玩，女主人迷路在野外独自过夜的故事 |
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综合分析上表并结合最新考纲和2020年模拟卷，我们可以大胆预测2020年新高考读后续写会有以下命题特征：
1.写作文体
写作文体仍然会继续考查叙事类文体，所选材料一定具有更强的故事性、逻辑性的特点。
2.命题形式
要求考生依据所给材料内容和段落开头语进行续写(150词左右)，将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。所给的段落提示句均是故事情节发展的过程句，对续写故事的发展有提示、引导和限制作用。明年续写部分的设置会更合理，这样才能更好地激发学生的想象力，学生都有话可说，有内容可写。
3.主题范围
主题范围将仍然围绕人与自我、人与社会、人与自然三大主题，内容来自学生的实际生活或是学生关心的话题。续写话题将会更加彰显人性光辉，体现人与自然和谐相处的文章出
现的可能性非常大，因为这样的文章更适合考查学生的逻辑思维、评判性思维和创新思维能力。
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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
(2020·模拟卷)Though it is one of the faded memories of my life today，there are times when I remember his face clearly，especially his eyes.As he had yellow spots on his eyes we called him Spotty.He would have been a stray(流浪)dog，until he came to me.
I was ven years old.My dad had just got a new job in Nasik.We had moved into a rented hou.It was raining very heavily on the day we moved.
It was a cold dark night.We had our meal and went to sleep.Somehow in the midnight I h关于茶的知识
eard some strange sounds outside the main door.I gathered courage and looked out through the window and I was really amud with what I saw outside.
There was a small puppy lying on an old doormat which my mother had put outside the door.It was wet and trembling.At first it was difficult to e the little one.It was the yellow spots on its eyes that made me realize its prence.
It was trying to get under the doormat to avoid the cold air outside and it had managed to get in as I could e only its head outside the doormat.Was it sick or injured?
I felt pity for the poor soul.I went in and came out with an old towel.I went near the innocent one and held it in my hand and wiped the puppy till he had become dry.I took him into my room and made a bed for him with a woolen blanket and a small pillow.He emed very healthy and comfortable in his new bed as he went to sleep immediately.
The next morning，everyone in the family came to know about the unusual guest.“Shall we keep him with us？”I questioned my mom.
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Like any other parents would，my parents first totally refud my idea but my sister and I convinced them to keep Spotty.
Slowly Spotty got on with everyone and became one of the family members.
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Days pasd on and one evening when Spotty returned from his long walk，he appeared very exhausted.
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Almost a year later，one midnight we heard Spotty barking breathlessly.
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Days平淡的网名__pasd__on__and__one__evening__when__Spotty__returned__from__his__long__walk，he__appeared__very__exhausted.He came to my room and sat near me.It was then that I saw his hind leg was injured and was bleeding.I called out my mother and she quickly tied a bandage around his leg and gave him food to eat.I was very upt.But the next day，Spotty was up to his usual pranks though he limped a bit.After this incident my relation with Spotty became more inten.I really admired him a lot for his courage.
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Almost a year later，one midnight we heard Spotty barking breathlessly.We came out an
d saw that he was barking continuously heading somewhere.After some time Spotty became quiet.I patted him on his back and came inside.The next day morning，my heart skipped a beat when I didn’t e Spotty.I arched for him in each and every corner but he was nowhere.And this time he had gone and would never come back.I cried and waited for him.We waited for one long week.But there were no signs of him.Then one day my Dad got transferred to Mumbai.We shifted back to Mumbai.What would have happened to Spotty？Would he have died？The were the only questions in my mind，but they all remained unanswered forever.
B
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
(2018年6月·浙江高考)
It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before.He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.
We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico.We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon.Uncle__Paul,__my dad’s friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.
His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle.My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm__hou listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby.Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast.“The day starts at dawn on my farm，” he said.After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze (吃草).I was impresd to e my dad and Uncle Paul riding hors.They looked really cool.
In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a hor ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me.I wasn’t going to take a hor ride by mylf anyway.So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our hors, and headed slowly towards the mountains.“Don’t be late for supper，” Uncle Paul cried, “and keep to the track so that yo
u don’t get__lost！”“OK！”my dad cried back.After a while Uncle Paul and his farm hou were out of 高原反应的原因sight.It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene.It looked like a beautiful woven (编织的) blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.
