高考英语新题型---读后续写训练六篇(供山东2017级及以后的
高中学生使用)
“读后续写”试题引入的背景:
1. 2015年8月,教育部考试中心发布《普通高等学校招生全国统一考试英语科考试说明》(高考综合改革试验省份试用)(第一版),明确了考试内容和要求,考试形式与试卷结构,提供了一份参考试卷。首次提出了写作新题型:读后续写或概要写作,两种形式在不同考次不定期交替使用。参考试卷的读后续写,记叙文,试题未提供标题。
2.
2016年10月,新高考英语首考,写作第二节题型为读后续写,记叙文,试题未提供标题。
3.
2017年6月,新高考英语第二考,写作第二节题型为读后续写,记叙文,试题未提供标题。原文出处《美国读者文摘》Reader's Digest,标题是Attacked
By a Wolf! What One Smart Cyclist Did to Save His
Life。
4. 2017年11月,新高考英语第三考,写作第二节题型为读后续写,记叙文,试题提供标题A
Vacation with My Mother。
搞笑文字图片
5.
2018年6月,新高考英语第四考,写作第二节题型为读后续写,记叙文,试题未提供标题。原文出处是一外教的教育博客。
试题解读:
1.从题型设计看,《普通高中英语课程标准》(2017年版)明确了英语课程内容包含六个要素:主题语境、语篇类型、语言知识、文化知识、语言技能和学习策略。
读后续写题型能很好地检测学生的学习效果,即阅读理解的能力和书面表达的能力。
2.从评分标准看,评分原则涵盖四个方面:一是与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度;二是内容的丰富性和对所标出关键词语的应用情况;三是应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性;四是上下文的连贯性。
3.从实际阅卷看,把握的具体原则和规范如下:
(1)对原文要点的理解和呈现情况;
(2)应用语法结构和词汇的准确性;
(3)上下文的连贯性;
(4)对各要点表达的独立性情况。
读后续写训练六篇:
一、读后续写(25分)
A farmer grew some
vegetables in his garden. One day his wife was ill and he had no
money. He had to ll some cabbages and carrots in the market. The
next morning he took two baskets of vegetables to town. But it was
raining hard that afternoon and there were few people in the
street. When his vegetables were sold out, it was dark. He bought
some medicine and hurried to his village.
On
his way home he saw a person lying on the
snow. He placed his
baskets on the ground and was going to help the person to get u
p.
At that time he found it was a dead man and there was much blood on
his body. He was so afraid
that
he ran
away quickly,
寒竹篇 without taking the baskets with him.
The
next afternoon the farmer was nt to the police
station. Having shown
发觉
the baskets, an officer asked, “Are the yours” “Yes, sir.” the
farmer answered timidly(胆怯地). “Have you killed the
man” “No, no, sir.”
the farmer said in a hurry. “When did you e the dead man” “About
ven last evening.” “Did you e who killed the man” “No, sir.”
The officer brought out a knife and asked, “Have you en it yet”
“No, sir.” The officer became angry and
told the policemen to beat
him up and
nt him into prison. the officer wanted to trap the farmer into
the confession(供认),
梦见种花
but the farmer didn’t admit he was the murderer.
注意:
1. 所续写的短文词数应为150左右;
2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3. 续写部分分为二段,每段的开头语已经为你写好;
4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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The
officer was so angry that he asked the policeman to beat him up
again.
The
farmer was lucky .A few days later,
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The
officer was so angry that he asked the policeman to beat him up
again. The farmer was very afraid, he
thought he would be ntenced to death by killing people, but he
didn’t, he was innocent. He must tell people the
truth, but no one could hear his voice. he hoped that someone could
come and save him.
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The farmer was lucky .A
few days later, a young
man came to the police station with a lot of journalists, saying
that he saw the murderer. It was the
police officer who killed the man on the snow! He saw the
police office ud a knife killing the man late in the evening. he
was so frightened and ran away. But the young man thought the
farmer was innocent. So he took
the great courage to expo the real criminal. After the
investigation, the young man was right. The police
officer was nt into prison and the policeman who beat up the
farmer was fired, and the brave young man was regarded as the hero
by the villagers
二、 读后续写(25分)
I was responding to a call from a small
brick flat in a quiet part of town. I
assumed I was being nt to pick up some party-goers,or
someone who had just had a fight with a lover,or
a
worker heading to an early shift at some factory for the industrial
part of town.
When I
arrived at 2:30
a.m., the building was dark except for a single
light in a ground floor window. Under such
circumstances, many drivers just honk(按喇叭) once or
twice,wait a minute,then
drive away. But I had en too many weak people who depended on taxis
as their only means of transportation.
爷爷去世 Unless a
situation smelled of danger,I always
went to the door.
This
pasnger might be someone who needs my
assistance,I
reasoned to mylf. So I walked to the door and knocked. “Just a
minute,” answered a frail,elderly
voice. I could hear something being dragged across the floor. After
a long pau,the door
opened. A small
woman in
her 80s stood before me. She was wearing a print dress and a
pillbox hat ,like
somebody out of a 1940s movie. By her side was a small nylon
suitca.
自带光芒
The
apartment looked as if no one had lived in it for years. All the
furniture was covered with sheets. There were no clocks on the
walls, no equipment on the counters. In the corner was a cardboard
box filled with photos and glassware.
“Would
you carry my bag out to the car?” she
said. I took the
suitca to the cab,then
returned to assist the woman. She took my arm,and we
walked slowly toward the cab.
She kept
thanking me for my kindness. “It's nothing,” I told
her. “I just try to treat my pasngers the way I would want my
mother treated.”
注意:
1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右;
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3.续写部分分为二段,每段的开头语已经为你写好;
4续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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Having
given me an address, a hospice , she asked.
“Could you drive through
downtown?”
Paragraph 2: we drove in silence to the address
she had given me , and it…
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Having
given me an address, a hospice , she asked.
“Could you drive through
downtown?” Asked why we didn’t take
the shortest way, the small woman
told me it was the last chance for
her to visit the city. We drove
through the neighborhood where she and her husband had lived.
Besides, she asked me to slow in front of a
particular building
or corner and would sit staring into
the darkness, saying nothing. At last, s
he said she was tired and
wanted to go to the hospice.
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we drove in silence to
the address she had given me , and it was a low building,
where the old lady would live the rest of her
life. Two nurs who must have been expecting her came out
to the
cab as
soon as we pulled up. I opened the trunk and took
the suitca
to the door and the woman was
already ated in a wheelchair. When she
asked how much she owed me, without thinking, I said nothing and
bent to give her a bug . It was my
assistance that helped
one of weak
people realize her
wish.
三、读后续写(25分)
My fiance (未婚夫) and I
were excited about shopping for our first home. But our funds
were limited,
and none of the hous in our price range emed
satisfactory.
One
agent recommended a hou in particular.
Although her description sounded wonderful, the price
was beyond our
range, so we declined. But she kept urging us to have a
look at
least.
We finally did and it
was love at
first sight. It was Our Home, small and charming, overlooking a
quiet lake. Walking through the rooms and talking with the owners,
a nice elderly couple, we felt the warmth
and happiness of the marriage within that
home. As perfect as it was, the price remained too high for us. But
every day, we would sit by the lake, looking at the hou and
dreaming of what it
would be like to live there.
Days later, we made
a(n) offer—far
below the asking price. Surprisingly, they didn’t
laugh at us. They renewed their
offer instead.
It was also much more than we could afford, but
far less than the original asking
price.
The next day, we got
a disappointing message that another buyer had
offered a much higher price. Even so, we decided to talk with
the owners directly. We made our final
offer, which still was thousands of dollars less
than the other buyer’s bid. We knew
it, but we had
to try. Nobody
knew if we could get it.
注意:
1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右;
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3.续写部分分为二段,每段的开头语已经为你写好;
4续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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We
went to the owners’ home after we made our final
offer, the other buyer came to visit
苏醒近义词 the owners, he said the price he offered was much higher than ours,
he begged the owners to ll it to him, then the owner asked the
buyer, “why do you want this hou?” the buyer said
,” becau it is near the city, I
want to buy it for investment. I can rent it to earn
money…” the owner thought for a while
and then looked at him and said, I’m sorry,
sir, I can’t ll my
hou to you, becau I am looking for someone who truly loves my
hou, not just for money.”
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The
owner looked at us and said, “ I want to ll my hou to
you!” then he
explained: He’d en us sitting by the
lake all tho times; he knew how much we loved the place and that
we’d appreciate the years of work they had put
into their home; he realized he would take
a loss by lling it to us, but it
was worthwhile; we were the people they wanted to live there. He
told us to consider the difference in the price “an early wedding
prent.” That’s how we found our home and how I learned
that when people are kind they are not strangers, only
friends we haven’t yet met.
四、读后续写(25分)
A friend of mine, named Jack, received an expensive car from
his brother as a Christmas prent. On Christmas Eve when Jack came
out of his office, a street urchin(顽童)was walking around the
shining car. “Is this your car, sir?” he asked. Jack answered, “Yes, my brother gave it to me for
Christmas.” The boy was surprid. “You mean your brother
gave it to you and it did cost you nothing? Sir, I wish…”He
hesitated(犹豫),Jack thought of cour he knew what the boy wanted,
but what the boy said surprid him greatly. “I wish,” the boy went on, “that I could be a brother like
that.” Jack looked at the boy in surpri, and then he
said again, “Would you like to take a ride in my
car?” “Oh yes,
I’d love to
,”the boy answered.
After a short ride, the boy turned and with his
eyes shining, said, “Sir, would you mind driving in front of my
hou?”
Jack
smiled a little. He thought he knew what the boy wanted. He wanted
to show his neighbors that he could ride home in a big car. But
Jack was wrong again. “Will you stop where tho two steps
are?” the boy asked.
注意:
1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右;
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3.续写部分分为二段,每段的开头语已经为你写好;
4续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。