AEAS －WRITING－
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(一)AEAS考试内容
AEAS考试是为想要赴澳大利亚就读中学(主要是私立中学)的学生提供特别设计和选定的综合考试。AEAS考试包括三个部分，第一部分是英语水平考试(English Language Proficiency)，第二部分是数学推理能力考试(Mathematical Reasoning Ability)，第三部分是非语言试题的综合能力考试(Non-Verbal General Ability)。
写作考试
考试时间30分钟，字数要求不少于200单词，常要求考生以青少年杂志撰稿人的身份讨论如下两种话题
●学校政策和校园生活
●青年人的生活理想和价值观
AEAS写作评分标准共分三项
You will be assd on:
●the accuracy of your language
●your u of vocabulary
●the content and organization of your text
1.语言表达的准确性，也就是语法正确，且意思表达清楚
2.词汇的运用，包括词汇的丰富程度和准确性（拼写准确和表意准确）
3.内容和文章组织，也就是话题讨论是否言之有据，且层次清楚：包括是否有
丰富的细节和例证以及运用恰当的连接词等等
AEAS写作语法常见错误
1.句子不完整
1.11个句子有两个基本成分：主语和谓语动词，两者缺一不可。
In China has more than 100 million subscribers to cable television.
1.2如果一个句子有从句，也必须保证从句完整性。
Tho who overweight or indulge in healthy diets are candidates for heart attacks.
1.3介词后面一定要加名词、代词或者从句作宾语。
A marked character of cooperative learning is that personal success only springs
from.
1.4大多数情况下，比较级后面一般要加than，并且清晰指明所比较对象。
Divorce is more common.
2.句子成分多余
2.1一个简单句通常只有一个主语，如果主语超过一个，要是用连词构成并列主语
Smoking, drinking are banned in many places of work.
2.2如果一个句子中出现多个谓语动词，要是用连词连接构成并列动词，或者在一些句
子中使用关系代词构成复合句，有一些动词后面可以跟动词作宾语或者宾语补足语。
①The media distorts reality, categories things as all good or all bad.
②It is unclear recycling can help control pollution.
③It is advertising makes us buy something on a whim.
2.3如果一个句子出现多个宾语，一般要使用连词连接构成并列宾语，但是也有一些动
词，如give或者offer等可以跟双宾语。
More people would prefer cycling, walking if conditions were right.
2.4部分名词短语可独立做时间状语，前面不能加介词。
People can travel to and from duty in every day on foot or by bike.
2.5一般来说，becau和so, although和but等连词不能同时在一个句子当中出现。
Although the crime rate is falling in many parts of the world but violent crimes are constantly rampant.
3.时态或语态使用错误
3.1情态动词(can, could, must, need, may和might等等)
情态动词一般意义表示推测的意义
can/could有能力可能
Should/ought to应该很可能
must 必须必定会
will/would有意愿以后会
may/might可以可能
3.2助动词，主要有：do（does和did），be（am、is、are、was和were），have
（has和had），shall（should）和will（would）
1，助动词后面的动词不能是动词原形，一定是动词的现在分词或者过去分词形式。
The budget of a country should be balance each year.
2，动词的语态要分清主动和被动 (着重讲被动语态)
1)Trade is consisted of the exchange of goods and that of rvices.
2)Consumer confidence will improve, which is crucial to an economic recovery. 3，如果谓语动词是由动介或者动副短语构成的且位于句尾，那么后面的介词或动词不能省略。
At the nursing home, elders can be well cared.
4.前后不一致
4.1动名词和不定式做主语的时候谓语动词用单数
Raising standards of literacy are the government’s priority.
4.2当主语后跟着with、together with、coupled with、combined with、as well as和
like等词引导的短语时，谓语动词的数跟前面主语的数保持一致。
Overworking, coupled with poor diet, lead to physical degeneration.
4.3不定代词anybody、anything、everybody、everything、nobody、nothing、
somebody、something、each或none等做主语的时候，谓语动词用单数。
Even if somebody fall sick, everything go on as usual.
4.4定语从句中动词的数应该与先行词的数保持一致。
Parenting, which are a stressful job, has been increasingly valued by society.
4.5由what、whether、how、that或where等词引导的主语从句，主语的谓语通常用
单数。
How we can cope with massive technological change in the 21st century are an interesting issue.
4.6The number of+名词的复数，后面谓语动词用单数；a number of+名词的复数，后
面的谓语动词用复数；a huge amount of+不可数名词，后面谓语动词用单数。
A significant number of young people has been leaving the countryside for urban
areas.
5.谓语动词适用错误
5.1及物动词后一定要加名词或者具有名词性质的成分做宾语，构成主语+谓语动词+宾
语的基本句型。
I will discuss in some detail.
5.2不及物动词后面不能直接加名词或者具有名词性质的成分做宾语，如果要加宾语，
则需要在宾语前面加介词。（不及物动词没有被动语态）
The accident was similar to one that was happened last year.
5.3如果谓语动词是动词词组，这个时候也要分辨清楚动词词组是及物还是不及物，从
而判断是否有被动语态。常见的不及物动词词组有depend on、rely on、survive on、
