4-2翻译作文
Part Ⅰ
Directions：For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 189 words.
本题得分：--/15分
The Most Important Factor for Success
1. 成功的因素很多（如勤奋、能力、外界环境、机遇等等）
2. 我认为最重要的因素是
3. 我的理由
你的答案
未作答
参考范文
The Most Important Factor for Success
There are many factors that can bring success such as diligence, capability, chances, etc. Among the factors, I think diligence is the most important one.
Successful people are all diligent. As we all know, Thomas Edison, the most famous inventor in the world, had a large number of inventions. That was becau he was diligent. When his experiments failed, he tried again and again. It was said that before he successfully invented the light bulb, he had done the same experiments over one thousand times. Therefore, diligence contributed a lot to Edison's success.
Although sometimes people achieve their success easily, I don't think it can last long. They, without diligence, won't work hard to maintain their success. Sooner or
later they will lo it. In my opinion, diligence is the most important factor to achieve success.
范文点评：
此作文是一篇涉及成功因素话题的论述文，考生需要根据所给提示进行写作。本文语言规范、地道，结构清晰。作者首先开门见山，第一段指出自己认为勤奋是决定成功最重要的因素。第二段通过爱迪生的事例，指出只有勤奋和不断努力，才能在无数次的失败之后获得成功。最后一段延续第二段的话题，说明不靠勤奋得来的成功是不会长久的。
Part Ⅰ
Directions：For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 187 words.
本题得分：--/15分
Renting an Apartment off Campus
1. 现在大学生在校外租房的现象很普遍
2. 这种现象产生的原因
3. 我的看法
你的答案
未作答
参考范文
Renting an Apartment off Campus
Nowadays, an increasing number of college students would rather rent an apartment off campus than live in a dormitory. This phenomenon has raid considerable concern among parents and college faculties about living off campus, which is caud by the following reasons.
To begin with, living conditions of an apartment off campus may be better than tho of a dormitory. A rented apartment is often equipped with an independent washroom and a shower equipment which may be of great advantage over the school dormitory. In general, a typical dormitory often accomodates four or six, or even eight students and it is too crowded and noisy for tho who prefer private space as well as quiet circumstances. In addition, instead of being regulated by dormitory rules, students may enjoy more freedom in a rented apartment.
If college students intend to rent an apartment, I think they should give top priority to safety. It is important to make a survey of the surroundings first to ensure the curity. Besides, when they tend to enjoy the freedom, they should have a better n of lf-control and make good u of their time.
范文点评：
作文是一篇涉及校外租房话题的论述文，考生需要根据所给大纲进行写作。本文语言规范、地道、结构清晰。作者首先指出了当下大学生校外租房的普遍性；第二段通过to begi
n with 和in addition的使用，清晰地列举出校外租房相对于住宿舍的优势：公寓房条件要比宿舍好，而且学生可以享有更多的自由。最后，作者给出了自己的建议，如果想要校外租房，首先要考虑的就是安全问题。
A Reply to a Stresd Friend's Letter
1. 说明已收到来信，清楚了解朋友的压力及原委
2. 宽慰朋友并提出建议来帮助朋友减轻压力
A Reply to a Stresd Friend's Letter
Dec. 25, 2010
Dear Li Ming,
As we know, taking the college entrance examination has far-reaching significanc
e to our lives, but I don't think it's necessary to feel verely stresd about it.
Believe it or not, feeling stresd always has a negative effect on you. You may lo appetite and may not want to go over the subjects in the following days before the approaching examination. Conquently, it will in turn distract you from your revision work, which is of great importance.
