高考英语作文模拟训练题20题（含范文）
一、读后续写
1．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I have kept a watch from my grandfather. When I was a schoolboy, the watch hung by my grandfather’s bed. The ca was gold. It was a splendid watch and I often stared at it longingly sitting with my grandfather. He would often ask about my progress at school. The day I told him my success in the examinations, he was overcome with pleasure.
He took off the watch and wound it. “It was given me for fifty years of faithful rvice with my firm,” he said proudly. I held the watch, feeling its weight. As I was leaving him, he said, “And you’ll not forget what I told you?” I was suddenly moved a lot.
Arriving home, my mother was to hold it in trust until she considered me old enough to look after it, but I protested so strongly that she finally agreed to hang it where I could always e it. The summer ended and it was time for me to enter the new school. I never made frie
nds easily there. One boy, Crawley showed off his posssions. His bicycle was new; his boots were of the best hide; everything, in fact, was better than ours—until he brought a watch. Crawley said his watch was absolutely the finest watch.
“I have a better watch,” I announced. “Well, show it to us, ”Crawley said sneeringly. “I’ll bring it this afternoon,” I said. “Then you’ll e.” I rode my bike home, wondering how I would persuade my mother to let me take the watch. Luckily, she stepped outside and I slipped the watch into my pocket.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I rode my bike fast to school after lunch, excitement through me.
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When I said my mother couldn’t let me bring the watch, they burst into laughter.
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【答案】Paragraph 1：
I rode my bike fast to school after lunch, excitement through me. Then suddenly a dog ran out into my path. I pulled at the brake so sharply that I fell over heavily to the ground with the handles over me. I picked mylf up, put a trembling hand into my pocket, and brought out what was my grandfather’s proudest posssion. The glass was broken, and the pointers stopped turning. I put the watch back and rode slowly to school, numb with sorrow.
Paragraph 2：
When I said my mother couldn’t let me bring the watch, they burst into laughter. “What a story!” Crawley said sneeringly. The others followed his cries. I nearly wept, for it was the saddest moment of my young life. As I sat quietly at my desk, a strange feeling stole over
me. It was not shame at my classmates’ laughing, nor was it fear of my mother’s anger. All I could think of was my grandfather’s words, “Patience and hard work.” I kept the broken watch as a good reminder since then, from which I have learned to be more patient and to work harder.
【解析】
【导语】
本文以爷爷送给作者的手表为线索，讲述了爷爷把陪伴自己50年的手表，送给了作者，并告诉作者，耐心和努力工作，这才是成功之道。作者将爷爷的话记在心间。回到家后，母亲强烈建议替作者保管，但作者强烈抗议，最后母亲同意把它挂在作者总能看到的地方。暑期结束，作者进入了一所新学校，有个叫Crawley的同学总喜欢炫耀，但是作者要和他比一比谁的手表更好。作者骑车回到家，趁着妈妈不注意，偷偷将表放入兜中。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“午饭后作者骑自行车飞快地去学校，很是高兴”可知，第一段可以描写因为一条狗的突然窜出，发生了小事故，导致作者的手表表面破裂，指针停止走动，作者只好把手表放回原处。
②由第二段首句内容“当我说妈妈不让我带手表时，他们哄堂大笑起来”可知，第二段主要描写作者面对大家的嘲笑时以及打破表面后的心理状态和作者的感悟。
2.续写线索：上学路上——遇到狗打碎了表面表指针停止走动——作者找了个借口没有拿来表——心理状态——作者感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
跌倒：fall/drop
嘲笑：laugh/tea/make fun of
放回：put back/replace
情绪类
悲伤：sad/ sorrow
愤怒：anger/rage
【点睛】
[高分句型1] I pulled at the brake so sharply that I fell over heavily to the ground with the handles over me.(运用了结果状语从句)
[高分句型2] I kept the broken watch as a good reminder since then，from which I have learned to be more patient and to work harder.(运用了“介词+关系代词”引导非限制性定语从句)
2．读后续写
Jessie had two days’leave in January this year. She surfed the Internet for cheap travel deals and found the most impressive to be a two-day trip to Dublin. Jessie had never visit
ed Ireland so she knew this was the destination for her.
She arrived in Dublin and headed for her hotel. She was excited. When she found her hotel, she paid her money for both nights in advance. The receptionist (接待员) said that was possibly the smartest thing she had done since she decided to take the trip. Jessie dropped her bags in her room and immediately went out to check out some of the sights. It was getting late as Jessie wandered in the streets and decided that even though she was starving, she would rather wait to have dinner later after having a drink.
