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60-year-old Richard Oln had retired from his work. He was very interested in adventure and hunting. This time he hunted on a sparly(稀少地)populated land. In the cold winter, he tried a new place and forgot to bring his cell phone, the only time on the trip. He trekked(艰苦跋涉)more than half a mile with two dogs to a harvested wheat field.
Eyes fixed on the horizon in expectation of another rabbit, Richard stepped on the thin snow on a canal(沟渠). Suddenly, the snow collapd(坍塌)and he dropped four feet to the bottom.
Trapped in the canal Richard couldn't move at all, his left leg ba脾胃不好如何调理
dly hurt. Using his shotgun as a crutch(拐杖), he spent an hour and a half climbing the canal but slipped and slid back down when he was partly up. This time, one of his feet got stuck between two rocks. Richard told himlf that if he didn't get himlf out of that canal, he wasn't going to have a very good night.
Richard worked his foot free and climbed more slowly and cautiously out of the canal. Richard immediately realized the difficulty of the task before him. The accident occurred about , and it was nearing with the road far away as the sun was tting.
Richard f玉佛吊坠
ocud on crawling(爬)to safety. Even with his gun supporting him, hopping(单足跳跃)was impractical. Instead, he sat down and pushed himlf backward less than 40 inches at a time with his good leg. He was determined and sure that he must hold on. He was tired out and had more frequent breaks. Temperatures dropped overnight, and snow melted and his gloves and boots got wet. His hands and feet soon were completely numb(失去知觉的).
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划递增公式
线的关键词语;
3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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Richard's dogs had been playing in the field and eventually came up to him.
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However, gleams(微光)of daylight remained-Richard saw the venth car.
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【答案】One Possible Version:
Richard's dogs had been playing in the field and eventually came up to him. With veral loud barks and wagging their tails right and left, the two dogs wandered, back and forth, emingly at a total loss what to do. Suddenly, the boom of a vehicle from the distant road broke the silence and captured their attention. Without any slightest hesitation, the dogs charged desperately to the road, roaring along the way. Seconds emed to stretch into hours when Richard squeezed out his last strength to crawl along. But with six cars speeding by and the daylight fading out, a wave of frustration and helplessness gradually swallowed him up.
However, gleams of daylight remained-Richard saw the venth car. Howling wildly like crazy, the dogs managed to stop the car and after them rushed the puzzled driver to exa
mine what was in store for him. Hardly had he caught sight of Richard when he realized what had happened. With the assistance of the stranger, Richard was ultimately rescued and rushed to hospital. All the way he stroked the two dogs, proud to be blesd with the loyal companions and feeling the warmth they brought in the cold winter.