大学英语四级作文范文30篇

2024年4月1日发(作者：骆玉笙)

范例一

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: Attend Your Class Regularly 。

You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chine.

1. 现在大学校园里，迟到、早退、旷课是常见的现象

2. 保证学生的出勤率对大学教育的重要性

3. 作为一个大学生应该怎样做

Attend Your Class Regularly

Nowadaysit is a very commonphenomenonthat some university students are late for or even abnt from

class. And still there are some students who slip out of the classroom before the class is over. Class

attendance has becomea thorny problem to both the students and teachers.

In fact, it is very important for the students to attend their class regularly. First, it will ensure you to catch

up with the teachers in your learning. That is very helpful to you if you want to do a good job in your study.

Second, attending class regularly is a way of showing respect to your teachers ,too. Your teachers will feel

bad if the students do not attend their class, which, in turn, will affect their teaching and be no good for the

students. Third, attending class regularly will help to form a good habit of punctuality, which is of great

importance for the students to do a good job in the future.

Therefore, we university students should form the good habit of attending our class regularly from now

on. And some day we 'll benefit from it.

2008 年元月四日，中国政法大学爆“杨帆 点评：2008 年元月三日，中山大学博士发帖称遭导师虐待；

门”事件；近几年，中小学老师或打学生或猥亵学生、体罚学生等各类新闻不断曝光，进而引发了师生 关系的大讨论。本范例题为四级考试传统的问题解决型的写作，与校园生活密切相关。

范例二

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: Students ' Rating of Their

Teachers 。You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chine.

1. 学生给老师打分已经普遍

2. 人们对其持不同态度

3. 我的看法

Students ' Rating of Their Teachers

Nowadays, it has becomeas commonin colleges and universities for students to grade teachers

as for teachers to grade students. In some universities students

only source of information on teaching effectiveness..

This, however, has caud great controversy. Some are in favor of the rating system, They hold that since

students attend the teachers ' class every day, they should have their opinion

' rating has even become the

about their teachers ' effectiveness. Others, on the contrary, are strongly against it. They believe that there is

much more to teachin g than what is shown on students ' rating forms.

Students should not be expected to judge whether the materials they u are up to date or how well the

teacher knows about the subject. The judgments require professional knowledge, which is best left for t he

teachers ' colleagues.

I think students ' rating of their teachers is necessary, but it should be conducted in

a way that can really shed meaningful light on teachers ' performance. Instead of rating the

teachers ' knowledge on the subject, students should be asked to estimate what they have learned in a

cour, and to report on such things as a teacher 's ability to communicate with students, his or her

relationship with students, and his or her ability to arou students

in the subject.

点评：越来越多的高校采取让学生给老师打分的形式来了解教学反馈，并以此作为促进教学质量的有效 手段。对此做法，管理部门及教学双方褒贬不一，看法迥异。本范例题为校园生活热议话题，值得关注。

范例三

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic On a Harmonious

Dormitory Life. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chine:

1. 宿舍生活有时会出现不和谐的情况 ;

2. 一个和谐宿舍生活的必要性 ;

3. 如何创造和谐的宿舍生活。

On a Harmonious Dormitory Life

Dormitory life is an indispensable part of college life. But sometimes the harmony in the dormitory be

disturbed in one way or another.

As is known to all, a harmonious dormitory life is important to college students and benefits all the

members. On one hand, we can have a good rest and put our heart into study. On the other hand, we will have

a good mood and enjoy being together.

There are veral ways to create and maintain a harmonious dormitory life. Firstly, you have to evaluate

your life-style and try to get rid of your dirty habits, if there are any. Secondly, when an annoying situation

aris, you'll just have to learn to tolera te each other and co- exist. Thirdly, you 'll have to share with each

other and make good friends.

In conclusion, we should try our best to build a harmonious dormitory life for the sake

of good study and good life. 点评：“和谐”成为我们当今社会词频概率最高用词，就社会而言，倡导建立和谐社会；就家庭而言， 提倡建设和谐家庭；就校园来讲，则要建立和谐校园；和谐两字似乎无所不在，大学生宿舍生活同样需

' interest

要和谐。本范例题与四级考试热点密切相关，又为典型的校园生活主题，值得关注

范例四

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write A Brief Introduction to the University. You should

write at least 120 words according to the following guidelines: 假设你是一名学生志愿者， 要给来你们学校参观的外国朋友介绍学校情况。 内容应包括学校历史、 规模、 教学现状以及未来目标等。

A Brief Introduction to the University

Distinguished guests,

Welcome to our university. Before you start to look around, allow me to give you a brief account of the

school.

Founded in 1927, our university is one of this city 's earliest universities of liberal

arts. It is staffed with an excellent faculty, and has a total enrollment of over 10,000 students. In the past years,

it has turned out numerous well-qualified students and found its graduates active in professions of all walks of

life.

Since its establishment, the university has always steered itlf toward the objective that its students have

an overall healthy development. Not only does it provide the students with basic academic cours, but it

manages to expo them to the up-to-date knowledge. Besides, students are free to participate in colorful campus activities and social practice, which are

intended for broadening their mind and developing their potential talent.

Currently, both our faculty and students are making every effort to improve the quality of our education in

the direction of a first-rate university. Thank you. 点评：近几年，随着我国顺利加入世贸组织以及经济全球化步伐的加快，许多国内高校纷纷与国外大学 合作办学，教育走向国际化成为人们关注的热点，也是大学生门比较关心的热点问题。本范例题为热议 校园生活话题，与 2004 年旅游景点介绍 2006 年考查的名校校园开放如出一辙。

范例五

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to a friend who will come to your city to e

you. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chine: 假设你是李明 , 你的一个朋友张伟准备到你所在的城市来旅游，但你有事不能接待。写封信给他，解释 你不能接待的原因，并说明你所做的安排。

A Letter to a Friend

Dear Zhang Wei,

I ' m glad to know that you are coming to my city during the summer vacation.

However, I'm afraid there 's somebad news. I'mplanning to take part in an international

conference to be held in another city during the time of your visit. All the top scientists in my field will show up

at the conference. More importantly, I 'm lucky enough to have been

lected to give a speech on behalf of my rearch team at the Conference . I really can't miss it.

I understand that it 'll be your first time to this city and I 'm your only friend here.

I've asked my roommate to meet you at the airport, and you can stay in my room. He is a very nice person and

he will show you around the city. Hope you two will get on well and have a nice holiday!

Yours, Li Ming 点评：本范例题与 2001年 6月考查的 A Letter to a Schoolmate 类似，所不同是写作提示有所不同，

2001年 6 月作文题是写信对校友来度假表示欢迎并在信中提出建议和注意事项， 而本范例题是对朋友来 访不能接待，同时在信中说明原因及具体安排，内容不一，但话题相仿，写作思路相似，值得关注。

范例六

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: Living alone

or Living with Roommates?You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chine.

1．有人认为大学里应独自生活 2．另一些认为大学里应与别人同住 3．你的看法

Living alone or Living with Roommates

Nowadays, there has appeared a heated discussion among the college students as to whether they

should live alone outside the campusor live together with other roommates in the students ' dormitory.

Opinions are divided over the matter.

Tho who are in favor of Living alone maintain that it is very convenient to live by themlves. They can

enjoy absolute freedom in a room of their own. They can have their own timetable without disturbing others.

They are also free to equip the room with a personal computer so that they can have easy access to the

Internet.

But others argue that living with roommates has attractions of its own. With veral students sharing the

same room, each person 's experiences can be greatly enriched. They can learn a lot from talking to one

another. By learning to tolerate the differences between individuals, they can become more mature.

As far as I 'm concerned, I prefer to live with roommates becau I love the feeling of belonging. Besides,

it is a lot cheaper to live in a dorm than to rent an apartment outside

the campus.

点评 ：本文与校园生活密切相关，也是近年来出现的现象，人们对此的看法各异， 2003 年后，四级作文

考查加大了学校生活类题目的考查，因为这类题材不存在地域的差异，不同地域的同学都有话可说。本 范例题即为校园生活类话题，与刚考完的四级作文话题类似，符合命题者出题思路，值得引起重视。

范例七

Direction: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic :Cell

Phones .You should write no less than 120 words and ba your composition on the outline below:

1. 描述上图所示的手机用户数的变化情况

2. 出现这种情况的原因

3. 对此现象作出评价

Cell Phones

As is shown in the chart, cell phones are becoming increasingly popular within China. In 1999, the number

of cell phones in u was only 2 million, but in 2002, the number reaches 5 million. And in the year 2005, the

number has suddenly soared to 9 million.

There are manyfactors contributing to this development. Firstly, a cell phone has no wires and can be

carried everywhere easily. Secondly, a cell phone is something wonderful that we can have fun with news,

games, music and chat through nding short messages. Thirdly, the drop in price and the simultaneous

improvement in the functions have madeit possible for an average person to make u of cell phone.

The wide u of cell phones has mad e them more and more indispensable in people 's daily

life. The functions of the cell phone have madecertain people reluctant to parate themlves from their cell

phone. 点评：随着我国经济的快速发展，人民的生活水平不断改善，通讯业的日新月异的发展，使得手机使用

普及化，成为人们日常生活的必需品，对此的利弊人们看法各异。本范例题为热点话题，同样是年轻人 较熟悉和经常讨论的话题，值得关注。

范例八

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic

Advertiment. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chine:

1. 广告的作用

2. 广告的形式多样

3. 广告的夸张性

Advertiment

Advertiments are forcing their way into people 's lives. People refer to advertiments in their daily lives

becau they are consumers. The advertirs are usually manufacturers,

retailers and salesmen. Their merchandi needs to be advertid to bring it to the attention to the customers.

Thus nearly every product is advertid in some way. To a large extent, good advertising leads to success

while bad advertising can mean failure.

There are many ways to adverti and ‘ads' come in different forms. Newspapers carry

advertiments. Some products are publicized on TV and radio which bring them into notice of a wide

audience. Billboards also carry advertising. Advertising is a big industry now and many agencies have been t

up to furnish a variety of forms..

However, advertising is not always truthful. A product is often misreprented. The advertir exaggerates

the benefits of the merchandi he wants to ll. Thus, he misreprents the truth. The consumer falls victim to

such advertising. Millions of people have bought advertid products and have been dissatisfied with them 。

点评：这是一篇说明文，用说明的表达方式来解说事物，阐明事理。写好说明文，不仅要抓住特征，注 意条

理，而且要巧妙运用说明方法，像下定义、举例子、作比较、分类别、列数字、打比方等

范例九

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: A

Letter to the President of the University about Improving the Sports Facilities on Campus. You should write no

more than 120 words, and ba your composition on the outline given below in

Chine: 假设你是李明，请你写一封信给校长，建议改善本校体育设施状况，内容应涉及体育设施对大学生的重

要性，对目前学校体育设施的状况可以表扬，可以提出批评建议，也可以兼而有之。

A Letter to the President of the University

Dear Mr. President,

I amwriting this letter to you to express myconcern about the sports facilities on campus. I have noticed

that our university has very limited resources in terms of opportunities to participate in sports, especially given

that the number of students on campus is increasing every year.

As we both know, sports are very important for the sound growth of young people. If they have access to

quality sports facilities, young people are able to choo a healthier lifestyle, to boost lf-esteem and

confidence, and to build a positive outlook and n of achievement.

My proposal is to build a new sports area. It should be designed with soccer players, basketball players,

and ping-pong players in mind. It should have a different ction for each activity and be available to students

all year round. I believe such facilities will meet our sporting needs.

Thank you for your reading this letter.

Yours faithfully,

Li Ming 点评：本范例题仿真度颇高，为校园生活话题，与在校大学生日常生活密切相关，是最近几年侧重考查

的题材。 2002年 1 月考查了就本校食堂状况给校长写一封信 .

范例十

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Blog. You should write at

least 120 words bad on the chart and outline given below: 下图是 2007年 1-10 月中国博客服务人均月度有效浏览时间及增长率，描述变化，说明原因。

Blog

This histogram shows the number of people using blog rvices from January to October in 2007. From it

we can e that the number of urs incread monthly from January to August, except February. After two

peak months, July and August, the number dropped slightly in September, while in October it picked up again.

Possible reasons for the changes are first, in February Chine people celebrated the most important

festival —— Chine NewYear. This means more people spent more time with their families and friends, and

therefore they didn 't have as muchtime for surfi ng online. Secondly, college students are the main urs of

blog rvices. While in July and August ，they had summer holidays, which enabled them to have more spare

time reading and writing blogs. Thirdly, with improvements of blog rvices and the influenc e of some “star

bloggers ”, most of whom are

celebrities, blogs are becoming an important way for people to express themlves and communicate with

others. So more and more people are starting to u the rvices, which help explain the overall increa

shown here.

点评：这是一篇图表题。 可以看出，整体呈增长趋势。但是，二月和九月有所下降。所以，分析的时 候要照顾各个方面。整理

范例十一

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic College Students ' Job

Hunting. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below.

1. 近几年出现了大学生就业难的现象

2. 产生这种现象的原因（如大学生追求的目标过高，专业不对口等）

3. 如何解决这一问题（改变就业观念，大学生再培训等）

College Students ' Job Hunting

In recent years, college students find it increasingly difficult to get a job. It sounds strange since young

college students are usually intelligent, well-educated phenomenon, aspirant and eager to bring their talent into

full play. Then what underlies the strange

phenomenon?

There are veral reasons for this. To begin with, nowadays college students aim too high. All they want

are “good” jobs which could offer good salary, comfortable working conditions, high social status among

others. Conquently, most college students are unwilling to accept vacant jobs they consider not “good”

enough. Another reason is that there is a big gap between the majors some students study in school and the

demands of vacant jobs. So companies think some students are not fit for the jobs.

Solution to the problem requires efforts on both the society and the students. The companies should value

the students, talent and knowledge while the latter should not merely aim at

material gains. They should be down-to - earth in building up their career. Furthermore, they should face their

weak points so as to improve themlves and be more competent.

点评：本范例题为社会热点话题。近年来大学生就业难日益成为各级政府及社会各方面关注的焦点，媒 体也广泛报道了大学生就业形势严峻， 呼吁全社会共同努力；此外，该范例题也与大学生就业密切相关， 也是四级作文选题重点之一。

范例十二

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of traffic jam. You

should write at least 120 words following the outline given below.

1

•在现代社会，城市交通问题变得越来越严重

2

•城市交通问题的表现以及对人们生活的影响

3•解决的方法与措施

Traffic Jam

There is no doubt that traffic congestion becomesa growing worry for the residents of most urban areas.

Some major roads are regularly choked with traffic in rush hours. The limited transport capacity contributes

largely to the vexing problem. How to solve the headache?.

The existing solutions to traffic jam mainly aim at creating metro bus systems and broadening major

roads. Widening the existing roads can solve traffic snarls on some level. Soaring car ownership

compoundsthe chronic annoying problem, so we must sharply reduce the heavy reliance on cars and drive a

shift to the mass transportation. It is a cheap and good way. Wecan create a system of customized bus routes

and highlight the development of subways, trolleys and light

rail. The effective combination of the solutions will enable the urban areas to posss a smooth traffic.

点评：交通话题一直是四级作文命题话题之一。 1990年 6月考查过 Howto solve the problem of Heavy

Traffic,1994 年1月考题 The World Is Getting Smaller and Smaller 也与交通有关，近年来，随着 私家车的日益增多，城市交通拥堵凸显，出行难越来越成为人们关注的焦点。

范例十三

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic Environmental

Protection. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below.

1. 全球变暖对地球环境造成了很大影响

2. 引起全球变暖的原因

3. 我们需要采取的措施

Environmental Protection

No one，regardless of race, religion or nationality, can deny that the world we live in is becoming

increasingly intolerable becau of the effects of global warming. According to many experts, even greater

impacts are still on the way.

There are numerous caus for this problem. On one hand, human-related emissions of carbon into the

atmosphere is causing, and will in the future cau, significant global warming according to the theory. On the

other hand, the lack of knowledge about the importance of protecting environment hinders the solving of the

problem.

It is urgent that immediate and effective actions should be taken right away. First, more trees need to be

planted to help improve and beautify the environment. Besides, stricter laws concerning global warming and

irresponsible u of fuel resources have to be put into effect and achieved good results. In a word, there is a

long way to go before we can take a comfortable world for granted again . 点评：环境问题也是四级作文命题重

点话题之一。大学英语 （Q 吧）四级考试曾经考过 Make our Cities Greener. 近年来，全球气候异常，造成许多自然灾害的频繁，保护环境刻不容缓，已成为全社会乃至全 人类共同关注的热点。

范例十四 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30

minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Credit Cards. You should write at least 120 words following the

outline given below in Chine:

1. 越来越多的人使用信用卡， 信用卡有哪些好处

2. 信用卡的弊端

3. 你自己的观点

Credit Cards

Personal credit cards are becoming more commonin China. Banks and other financial institutions are

encouraging their customers to change the way they buy things. Credit cards, otherwi known as “plastic

money ”, are being offered on very good terms to encourage the change. Consumers will be able to “buy

now, pay later ”, and many e this as an advantage.

But people need to be careful. There are dangers associated with credit cards. Somepeople find it very

easy to exceed their budget. They are tempted to purcha goods that they do not really need, and can

become quickly overburdened by debt. The credit cards often charge a high rate of interest, which exacerbates

the problems for the people.

However, ud wily credit cards can improve the quality of people 's lives. They can give people

access to moneyto meet sudden unplanned expens. Properly handled, they can let people control their

expenditure and the monthly statements provide a record of where their moneyhas gone.

点评：这是一篇议论文， 关于信用卡的利弊。可以分成三部分： 第一部分，信用卡的好处，比如说应 急等；第二部分，信用卡的一些弊端，比如说鼓励一些无用的消费；第三部分：你自己的观点，理性使 用。

范例十五

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Pet Raising . You

should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chine:

1有些人喜欢养动物作为宠物。

．2

有些人反对圈养动物作为宠物。

．

3你的观点。

．

Pet Raising

Nowadays, with the improvement of

the people 's living standard, some people form

of raising small or domestic animals as pets. Somerai small dogs or cats as their

a habit

pets while

others rai various birds or fishes as their pets.

However, some people object to the idea of raising animals as pets. To them, animals have their own right

to live a natural life like human beings. On the other hand, the way people rai animals as pets have a

negative influence on the surroundings ,for example, dogs' chasing people on the street and so on. What 's

more, some animals will transmit some dias.

In my opinion, I do not like the idea to rai animals as pets. We should not deprive them of their natural

right. In this way, we will live in a peaceful world in harmony with the other living creatures.

范例十六

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic How People Spend

Their Holidays. You should write at least 120 words, and ba your composition on the table and the outline

given below:

1、根据上表，简要描述 1990年、 1995年、 2000年某城市人们度假方式的情况及其变化；

2、请说明发生这些变化的原因；

3、 得出结论

How People Spend Their Holidays

As is clearly shown in the table that there was a dramatic change in the way people spent their holidays

between 1990 and 2000. Especially, in 1990, 63% of people spent their holidays at home, while the figure

decread considerably to 24% in 2000. There are three reasons for this phenomenon.

To begin with, with the development of market-oriented economy, people earn by far more moneythan

they ud to, making it possible for them to afford traveling expens. In addition, people realize the

importance of getting well-informed about the outside world in this modern

era to develop their potential. For example, a traveller may encounter or talk with someone of a different

cultural background so as to broaden his vision. Last but not least, by traveling outside, people are clo to

nature, which is not only beneficial to both their health and peace of mind. In short, more and more people take

the occasion of holiday to travel outside and relax themlves.

As far as I amconcerned, I prefer to go traveling instead of staying at homeduring holidays. On the one

hand, I love meeting different people and take in some fresh ideas. On the other hand, it is agreed that the

world is becoming a global village. No one could confine himlf within his small circle of families or relatives. In

brief, I have benefited a lot and will benefit more from traveling during the holidays. 点评：该篇作文属图表作文，命题思路与四级真题图表作文一致，仿真度高。本范例题关于人们旅游度 假方式的变化，也是社会热点话题， 2006 年 1 月就考过名校校园该不该成为旅游景点话题； 2004 年 6 月也是关于旅游景点的介绍。

范例十七 Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30

minutes to write a composition on the topic: Social should write at least120words following the outline below in

Chine.

a) 社会实践的作用

b) 可能产生的问题

c) 提出建议

Social Practice

Social practice has been more and more popular in universities and colleges. Students are

asked to enter society and get some idea of it. Surely social practice has many advantages. Firstly, social

practice can offer students a chance to contact society and meet different kinds of people. In this way students

can gain some valuable social experience, which will be uful to their future career. Secondly, students can

apply what they have learned in class to practical work, thus knowing themlves more clearly. Thirdly, social

practice can bring them some financial reward and make them more independent of their family.

However, someproblems may ari if no correct guidance is made. For example, somestudents get overly

interested in social practice and want to work full-time and earn money, thus neglecting their studies. And some

students are likely to get in touch with the dark side of society, which will affect their future studies.

In order to carry out social practice smoothly, students should first know its objective.

They should put their studies in the first place and e social practice just as a uful supplement, so they

ought to try to strike a balance between social practice and their studies. 点评：本篇文章属于解释性说明文。就业市场的竞争要求大学生具有丰富的社会实践，才能适应就业市 场的竞争，所以现在在校大学生参与社会实践活动频繁，但如何处理好学业和社会实践的关系成为人们 关注的话题。本范例题与大学生生活密切相关，也是四级作文关注的重要话题。

范例十七 Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30

minutes to write a composition on the topic: Social should write at least120words following the outline below in

Chine.

a) 社会实践的作用

b) 可能产生的问题

c) 提出建议

Social Practice

Social practice has been more and more popular in universities and colleges. St tudents are asked to

enter society and get someidea of it. Surely social practice has manyadvantages. Firstly, social practice can

offer students a chance to contact society and meet different kinds of people. In this way students can gain

some valuable social experience, which will be uful to their future career. Secondly, students can apply what

they have learned in class to practical work, thus knowing themlves more clearly. Thirdly, social practice can

bring them some financial reward and make them more independent of their family.

However, someproblems may ari if no correct guidance is made. For example, somestudents get overly

interested in social practice and want to work full-time and earn money, thus neglecting their studies. And some

students are likely to get in touch with the dark side of society, which will affect their future studies.

In order to carry out social practice smoothly, students should first know its objective.

They should put their studies in the first place and e social practice just as a uful supplement, so they

ought to try to strike a balance between social practice and their studies. 点评：本篇文章属于解释性说明文。就业市场的竞争要求大学生具有丰富的社会实践，才能适应就业市 场的竞争，所以现在在校大学生参与社会实践活动频繁，但如何处理好学业和社会实践的关系成为人们 关注的话题。本范例题与大学生生活密切相关，也是四级作文关注的重要话题

范例十八

Directions:

1． 上图所示为我国吸毒者年龄分布情况，请描述其变化

2． 请说明发生这些变化的原因

3． 这一变化对社会和个人的影响

As can be en from the graph, there have been sharp changes in the age distribution of drug addicts. To

be concrete, the teenage addicts only madeup 10 percent of all the drugsters in 1982 while the ratio ro up to

65 in 2002.

The caus for them are not hard to find. First , teenagers ' fearless curiosity about

everything new has led some of them into this marsh. Second, many of the young addicts turned for the first

time to drugs for escape either from their failure in the national entrance exams or from their parents ' breakup.

And above all, our education in the harmfulness of drugs has

been far from adequate to build teenagers ' sound resistance to drugs. To sum up, the caus

mentioned above must call for more of our concern, and effective measures should be taken to check the

trend.

Obviously the drastic change will exert great impact on individuals and the whole society.

For one thing, drug-taking does great damage to the health of drug urs.. For another, some drug urs

commit robbery or even murder their parents and relatives to get money to buy drugs, which pos a great

threat to the social curity and the social stability. Therefore, it is high time we did something to put an end to

this trend. 点评：该范例题为社会热点话题，四级考试命题作文常考题材。本文属于图表作文的写作。根据四级图 表作文命题规律， 第一段文章描述了图表中所反映的我国吸毒者年龄的分布最近二十年的变化情况， ；第

二段说明了产生这种变化的原因；最后一段陈述了吸毒无论是对个人的身体健康和社会的安全和稳定都 构成了巨大的威胁，呼吁全社会共同努力消除这种不良现象。

范例十九

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic : How to Keep Psychologically

Healthy? You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chine.

1． 心理健康问题往往是导致疾病的原因

2． 分析人们产生心理健康问题的原因 （ 可从失业、压力过重、缺乏支持、缺乏人际交往能力等方面分析 ）

3． 你认为人们应如何保持心理健康

How to Keep Psychologically Healthy?

One in four people will experience some kind of mental problem in the cour of a year.

When you fail to manage the problems, they are likely to cau various mental illness.

The cau of mental health proble ms often vary a lot from one ca to another. In today 's society, a

good number of people are suffering from heavy pressure. Others lack communication skills. In addition, a lot

of people are ignorant of psychological knowledge about how to keep mentally fit.

There are a lot of ways to curb mental health problems and keep psychologically healthy.

Firstly, find the real cau of your mental health problem and e whether you can do something about it.

Secondly, learn to relax yourlf and take exercis to relea the pressure. Lastly, you may find it helpful to

talk to your partner or friend about your problem, or ek support and advice form a psychological consultant 点评 ：据报道北京高校 100 多万名在校大学生中，已经有 14 名自杀身亡。而去年全年，北京自杀死亡 的学生为 19 人。社会对于大学生心理健康问题越来越关注， 如何保持心理健康成为社会关注话题。 本范 例题与校园生活联系紧密，是四级考试关注度较高的话题，值得重视。

范例二十

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composi-tion on the topic Aid Education in

should write at least 120 words f-ollowing the outline given below in Chine:

1. 每年，高校许多大学生受到鼓舞去贫困地区支教。

2. 支教活动的意义。

3. 我的看法。

Aid Education in China

Each year, college students, encouraged to aid students in the poverty-stricken areas,

volunteer themlves in poor villages for a year and try to improve education in poor areas.

Aid-education has been beneficial in two aspects. On the one hand, college volunteers are really devoted

to the cau. They have opened the eyes of students in underdeveloped regions to the outside world by

bringing them new knowledge and thoughts. As a result, they are extremely well-received by the children there.

Onthe other hand, college students have received a rigorous training by adapting to the harsh living conditions.

They are enjoying the appreciation and no- distance friendship from the children. What

greatly

moving and tireless spirit of the children.

In my opinion, China 's educational development can 't be isolated from each individual and we college

students should take the lead in respon to the appeal for offering aid to children in poor areas.

范例二十 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should write at least

120 words following the outline given below:

1. 现在某些高校校园禁止车辆驶入，

2. 这种规定的考虑，

3. 谈谈你的看法。

inspired by the

' s more, they are

Should cars be allowed into College Campus?

With the rapid development of our national economy, private cars have becomein large number; of cour,

quite a few cars are heavily driven into College Campus.

In a significant way, the cars do not take up students ' places for study, but actually

affect their daily life and study-- for instance, this crowd of cars may make noi and emit filthy gas to choke us

to death. And the campus is jammed with lines of cars and ems to be parking lot instead of an academic

institute. So cars have been strictly prohibited into many College Campus. It ems that this is not

convenience to some persons, indeed, but this is for the sake of our safety. Thus whensomeoneenjoys

convenience from modern tools, don't forget that it is dangerous to the students in the College Campus.

Therefore, I agree that cars are not allowed into College Campus.

By and large, with the price of cars falling significantly, cars will enter average families, and most Chine

will enjoy a luxurious lifestyle in their life. However, they are still prohibited to drive their cars into College

Campus, which , I think, is a hard truth in the eyes of most people. 点评：随着人们物质生活的提高，私家车发展迅猛，越来越多的私家车停放在校园，由此产生了一些问 题，如空间被占、噪音污染、环境污染等，为此许多学校禁止车辆驶入校园，本范例题与

校校园是否对外开放相仿，值得关注。

范例二十二

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic : Information Security. You should

write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chine.

1. 信息安全问题日益重要

2. 信息安全事故可能导致的危害

3. 如何做到信息安全

Information Security

The human beings are stepping into the information society. The information industry develops very

rapidly, so do the hackers, trick-playing teens, exploring children, fraudsters, and rious white-collar criminals.

Thus, information curity becomesan impending important issue.

In ca of information breach, the victims ---- government department, an organization or

an institution, or a company will inevitably suffer great or small loss. Government may be threatened with

national curity. Companies may lo opportunities to develop new projects. And the public 's and urs '

confidence will be damaged.

Then how to deal with this issue? Technology is only a partial solution to information curity. What's

more important is that organizations and companies should promote the awareness on information curity to

its staff. However, since no system can ever be 100 percent cure, a prevention-only approach to information

curity managementis not enough. Companies and organizations should adopt a dual approach to information

2006年 1 月名

curity management by combing prevention and detection techniques. 点评：随着我们步入信息社会和计算机应用的普及，利用计算机犯罪案件不断上升，信息安全事故频繁 发生，媒体也不时有大量相关报道，如何保护信息安全成为人们关注的焦点，本范例题为社会热点，值 得关注。

范例二十三 Directions: Suppo you were Li Ming. You want

to apply for a job as a personal cretary to the General Manager of a trading company. Write a letter to the

Human Resources Department of the company . You should ba your composition on the outline given in

Chine below.

1. 简要介绍自己并说明应征该职位

2. 告知公司为什么对此感兴趣

3. 简述你为何是合适人选

An Application Letter

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am Li Ming, a would-be graduate from Ninjing University. My major is English. Through the job

advertiment, I have learned that you are hunting a qualified individual for a personal cretary to the General

Manager of your esteemed company. I am fully convinced that I am the right person for the job.

I realize that my future boss is extremely busy. However, it is exactly the challenge of my prospective

position that attracts me. I am sure that my honesty, carefulness,patience,experti , commitment and

extensive knowledge will produce an excellent

job performance.

Next month, I am going to graduate from the English Department of Nanjing University, and I have over

two years of cretarial experience. I have enclod the details of my academic record, skills, and language

abilities. Thank you for your time in considering my application. Yours Sincerely,

Li Ming 点评：本文属于书信体应用文，要求写一封求职信。找工作是四级命题作文关注的话题之一， 2001年

1

月和 1995年 6月都考查了求职面试的话题，本范例题要求写一封求职信，既与求职话题相关，又是书信 体作文，符合四级作文命题思路和考查重点。

范例二十四

Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: No pains,no gains You

should write at least120 words following the outline below in Chine.

1. 为什么说“不劳就无获”

2. 试举例说明

No pains, no gains

Nearly every civilization has its own equivalent to the proverb “ No pains, no gains. ”

It meansthat nothing can be gained without painstaking efforts and that no knowledge or skill can be acquired

without sweat or toil.

You don't have to look very far too prove the truth of the proverb. Darwin's great discovery was not the

work of a momentbut was preceded by years of patient, arduous obrvation. Mozart was not an accomplished

pianist at the age of eight as the result of watching countless hours of TV. Nor did Edison make himlf the

greatest inventor in the modern world by spending his spare time on going to parties or bars. His words

success come from sustained endeavor.

Although it is an old saying, “ no pains no gains ” has its profound and realistic significance in our

college studies. To acquire knowledge in a particular field and to attain any academic goals, great exertion and

persistent effort are undoubtedly required becau we all know that “No pains, no gains. ” 点评：该范例题与四级 1997年 1月作文命题类似，属于论证道理性的解释性说明文写作，已有多年未 考，值得关注。根据此类作文命题规律，第一段对这一格言所蕴涵的意义做了解释和界定。第二段举例 说明了其哲理性；最后一段说明它的现实意义，重述主题。

范例二十五

Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: Lectures or

Discussions. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chine.

1．一些学生赞成讲座式教学 2．另一些学生偏爱讨论式教学 3．你的看法

Lectures and Discussions

There is a heated debate over the role of lectures and discussions in the classroom. Some people believe

that lectures can help students learn more quickly. In contrast, others hold that discussions can stimulate

students to learn by themlves.

Tho who hold the first opinion suggest that students attend more lectures. In their view, by giving

lectures teachers help students master the knowledge they 've accumulated over years of study and rearch.

However, others think that in a discussion, the teacher usually guides the students instead of dominating them.

They argue that to get involved in a discussion, students have to develop their ability to analyze problems

independently.

In my opinion, I stand on the side of neither idea. First of all, either method has its disadvantages.

Furthermore, each student has his or her preference. Thirdly, lectures ate preferable to discussions in the

teaching of science subjects, and on the contrary, discussions are preferable to lectures in studying the

humanities. Therefore, we should adopt different teaching methods according to different subjects.

点评：2007年 12月考查了大学生选修课话题， 再次证明四级作文命题自 2003年以后侧重于校园生活话 题，该范例与校园生活联系紧密，为四级作文命题经常关注的话题。本文属于对比观点加作者态度型的 议论文写作。

“Genius is 99 percent perspiration and one

percent inspiration ,reveals the cret of thousands of successful men and women. All accomplishments and

范例二十五

Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: Lectures or

Discussions. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chine.

1． 一些学生赞成讲座式教学

2． 另一些学生偏爱讨论式教学

3． 你的看法

Lectures and Discussions

There is a heated debate over the role of lectures and discussions in the classroom. Some people believe

that lectures can help students learn more quuickly. In contrast, others hold that discussions can stimulate

students to learn by themlves.

Tho who hold the first opinion suggest that students attend more lectures. In their view, by giving l

ectures teachers help students master the knowledge they 've accumulated over years of study and rearch.

However, others think that in a discussion, the teacher usually guides the students instead of dominating them.

They argue that to get involved in a discussion, students have to develop their ability to analyze problems

independently.

In my opinion, I stand on the side of neither idea. First of all, either method has its

disadvantages. Furthermore, each student has his or her preference. Thirdly, lectures ate preferable to

discussions in the teaching of science subjects, and on the contrary, discussions are preferable to lectures in

studying the humanities. Therefore, we should adopt different teaching methods according to different subjects.

点评：2007年 12月考查了大学生选修课话题， 再次证明四级作文命题自 2003年以后侧重于校园生活话 题，该范例与校园生活联系紧密，为四级作文命题经常关注的话题。本文属于对比观点加作者态度型的 议论文写作。

范例二十六

Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: My View on Online

should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chine.

1. 目前网络教育形成热潮

2. 你认为这股热潮形成的原因

3. 你对网络教育的评价

My View on Online Education.

Being online is no longer something new or fresh in our life. To someextent, it has become part of our

daily life. We can do a lot of things online, such as arching for information and communicating with friends far

away. But recently another helpful online activity has become very “in ” . That is online education.

Why could online education be so popular within such a short period of time? Among other reasons, the

quick development of the Internet should be an esntial one, which makes all our dreams of attending class in

the distance possible. Another underlying reason is the quick development of both society and technology.

Today, modern science and technology is developing with fantastic speed. To catch up with this development

we all feel an urgent and strong desire to study. However, due to the great pace of modern society, many

people are too busy to study full time at school. Online education just comes to their aid.

Personally, I appreciate this new form of education. It 's indeed a helpful complement to

the traditional educational means. It can provide different learners with more flexible and versatile ways of

learning. Best of all, with online education, we can stick to our jobs and at the same time study and absorb the

latest knowledge. 点评：英特网的迅速发展改变了人们的生活和学习、工作方式，现代生活节奏快、工作忙导致人们没时 间全日制的学习，网络和远程教育正好满足了人们的学习需要，许多大学生利用因特网学习知识，它成 为传统教学的有益补充。本范例题贴近时代，也与大学生校园生活相关，值得重视。

范例二十七

Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic:

Pollution: An Increasing Concern in China You should write at least120 words following the outline below in

Chine.

1． 中国的污染的现状

2． 造成污染的原因

3． 解决的办法

Pollution: An Increasing Concern in China

It is reported that ten big cities in China are being ranked among the top twenty cities with the highest

pollution index in the world. This means it is high time we did something to bring the situation under control.

Manyfactors are contributing to the deteriorating situation: industrial wastes pumpedinto the air, the lakes

and rivers; a increasing number of automobiles crowding into the streets;

the widespread u of plastic bags etc.

To myview, stiffer laws and regulations must be implemented to check pollution. Industries that relea

wastes without permission should be heavily fined. Cars should be equipped to minimize the exhaust they

relea into the air. And the u of plastic bags and disposable meal boxes should be banned. What 's more,

the media should play an important role in implanting a n of environmental consciousness into people '

s mind.

If everybody works toward a common goal of making the environment better, we can create a cleaner and

lovelier world for us and for the coming generation. 点评：该范例题为社会热点话题，也是四级命题作文经常关注的环境问题，值得引起重视。本文属于解 释性说明文的写作，主题是“污染” 。

范例二十八

For this part, you are required to write a composition about 120 words on the topic: Changes in People ' s

Daily Expens. Your composition should be written on the following table and

Chine given below.

1. 描述图表中人们每天开支变化情况

2. 请说明发生这些变化的原因

3. 结合图表对未来作出合理的范例

Changes in People 's Daily Expens.

What is shown in the table above indicates that dramatic changes have taken place in the people 's daily

expens from 1995 to 1999. The expens on food have declined by 30% while

tho on clothing and recreation have incread respectively by 9% and 7% . The statistics of ri and fall

em to exist in isolation but cloly related to one another .

There are two factors accounting for the changes. Development in economyis an esntial one in the

five years. The incread income resulting from economic growth plays an important part in the less expen

on food. Hence, a small percentage of total income is enough to cover food expen. Another one is the

changes in life style. Whenfood prents no worry to the average, people begin to focus more of interest on

handsome appearance and happy leisure time . As a result of such a shift, spending on clothing and recreation

increas year after year.

From the analys madeabove, we maycometo the conclusion that people 's living standards have been

constantly improved between 1995 and 1999. With the further growth in economy and more changes in life

style, the tendency indicated in the table will continue in the better direction . 点评：该范例题属于图表作文写作，与社会生活密切相关，与 1991年 6月份四级考试人们饮食结构的 变化图表作文写作类似。根据四级图表作文命题规律，第一段描述人们 1995到 1999年日常开支所发生

的巨大变化；第二段分析产生变化的原因；最后一段依据图表所示变化作出了合乎逻辑的范例。文章紧 扣主题，条理清楚，语言连贯，表述准确规范，结论合理。

范例二十九 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30

minutes to write a composition about an opening speech. You should write at least 120 words following the

outline given below in Chine:

1. 表明你的身份和事件

2. 对到场领导老师的支持予以感谢并阐述体育运动所带给大家的好处

3. 宣布运动会开幕并预祝此次运动会取得成功 .

An Opening Speech Ladies and Gentlemen,

Goodmorning! I amOscar, the spokesmanof the Students ' Union. Onbehalf of the Students ' Union, the

main organizer of today 's sports meeting, I welcome you all to the beautiful stadium. After two months '

preparation, our annual sports meeting is he ld on schedule.

Thanks to the support and help from our school leaders and teachers. Though they have many school

responsibilities, they have taken time off to take part in our sports activities. Let's give them a big hand.

Through sports, we can not only develop our physical prowess, but also promote social and emotional skills,

and even intellectual skills, which will matter in our future lives substantially. So hope everybody here cherish

this opportunity and enjoy it.

At last, best wishes for the success of the sports meeting and best wishes for the good results of our

athletes. It is my pleasure to announce the open of the sports meeting. Thank you and good luck!

点评：本范例题是一篇开幕词，与 2005年1 月竞选学生会主席演说词相仿，运动会也是在校大学生校 园生活必不可少的一部分，是在校生比较熟悉的话题，有话可说，便于发挥。

范例三十

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Choosing an

Occupation. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chine: 1. 选择职业是一个人要面对的众多难题之一。

2. 需要花时间去选择职业。

3. 选择职业时可以向多人寻求建议和帮助。

Choosing an Occupation

One of the most important problems a young person faces is deciding what to do. There are some people,

of cour, who from the time they are six years old “know” that they want to

be doctors or pilots or fire fighters, but the majority of us do not get around to making a decision about an

occupation or career until somebodyor something forces us to face the problem.

Choosing an occupation takes time, and there are a lot of things you have to think about as you try to

decide what you would like to do. You may find that you will have to take special cours to qualify for a

particular kind of work, or you may find out that you will need to get actual work experience to gain enough

knowledge to qualify for a particular job.

Fortunately, there are a lot of people you can turn to for advice and help in making your decision. At most

schools, there are teachers who are professionally qualified to give you detailed information about job

qualifications. And you can talk over your ideas with family members and friends who are always ready to listen

and to offer suggestions.