中考英语满分作文解析：天津卷
2019年
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假如你是晨光中学的学生李华，平时坚持用英语写日记。请根据以下要点，描述你星期三放学乘地铁回家路上看到的事情，并表达自己的想法。
(1)一个男孩不舒服，开始呕吐，一位穿着漂亮的女士帮着擦拭地面，男孩表达感谢。
(2)地铁到站，有人挤向座位，有人下不去车，有人因此争吵。
(3)你认为….
参考词汇：开始呕吐 begin to vomit 挤向座位 push towards the a 争吵 have a quarrel
要求：
(1)词数：80～100个.
(2)日记格式和开头已给出，不计入总词数
(3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥
Wednesday
When I took the underground back home from school，I noticed.____________________________________
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2019年天津中考作文体裁以应用文和记叙文为主，今年的中考作文体裁和2015、2016、2018年考查的都属于一个类型，即先描述一件你亲眼所见道德类型的事情，然后针对这件事情发表自己的看法，提倡积极正能量的好人好事，批评负能量的行为，可见夹叙夹议类型的文章仍然是中考比较青睐的一种话题。写作时要围绕内容提示写出事件的过程，不可与所给内容不符，胡编乱造。在写作这类试题时，要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，设想几个承上启下的连词，将主要句型、关键词语草草记下，形成提纲，切忌结时构分散，废话连篇，严重跑题。
Wednesday
敕勒歌教案When I took the underground back home from school, I noticed two things around me．
The first thing I met is about a boy. The boy didn't feel well. He began to vomit. A beautiful girl saw the boy. She helped him clean the floor.小鸡炖榛蘑 Then the boy thanked her for helping感恩所有的遇见. The cond thing is about the underground. When the underground got to the station, a lot of people pushed towards the at. So some people couldn’t get off the underground. Some had a quarrel becau of this.
In my opinion天真的妻子, the girl did a good thing and we appreciated her action in this society. As for the underground. It shows your quality there. If you wait in a line，others will get off the underground easily. If all of us can do in this way, our world will be more beautiful.
【名师点评】
这篇作文能够仔细审题，按照题目中给出的提示，采用日记的形式来写，形式正确。文章要求将自己当作李华来写，人称为第一人称。这篇作文中的内容符合题目要求，主要是描
述你星期三放学乘地铁回家路上看到的事情，并表达了自己的想法肝宁片。作者用一般过去时简单介绍了两个事件发生的过程，第一个事件一个男孩不舒服，开始呕吐，一位穿着漂亮的女士帮着擦拭地面，男孩表达感谢。第二件事地铁到站，有人挤向座位，有人下不去车，有人因此争吵。最后作者发表了自己的观点，In my opinion, the girl did a good thing...赞扬了女士的高尚品质，乐于助人。同时呼吁人们遵守规则，做一个有道德素质的人，让世界更美好。这篇作文围绕题目提示，写出了所有要点；时态准确，并能围绕内容适当发挥。层次清楚，用词准确、句子通顺、行文连贯，为一篇优秀的作文。
【写作亮点】
本文的高分句型主要有以下三个：（1）高分句型一：She helped him clean the floor. help sb. do sth. 帮某人做某事。这句话意为：她帮助他打扫干净地面。（2）高分句型二： the boy thanked her for helping.thank sb. for ...因某事感谢某人。这句话意为：男孩对她的帮助表示感谢。（3）高分句型三： 交换爱If you wait in a line，others will get off the underground easily. If all of us can do in this way，our world will be more beautiful. If引导的条件状语从句，遵循"主将从现"原则，即主句用一般将来时，从句用一般现在时态。表达了作者对地铁上一些人做法的批评，呼吁人们遵守规则，希望世界将会变得更加美好。
2018年
怪味花生的做法请你根据以下内容提示，以＂The Story of Li Hua＂为题，为学校广播站英语专栏写一篇短文，介绍发生在你班同学李华身上的一件事。
（1）上周五放学后李华乘公交车回家，看到有人在吃橘子，并把橘皮扔在车上。
（2）李华把橘皮捡起，放进垃圾桶。
（3）乘客用手机拍了照片，发布到网上。
（4）老师知道后表扬了李华，李华说这是他应该做的。
（5）你觉得……
参考词汇：果皮peel 垃圾桶dustbin 发布post 表扬prai
要求：
（1）词数：80—100个。
如何调理低血压
（2）短文的题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
The Story of Li Hua
Last Friday, when my classmate Li Hua took a bus back home from school. ___________________________
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2018年天津卷中考作文延续了2016年的专栏投稿，在考试形式上没有什么特殊的变化，都是根据所给材料提示展开写作，文体为记叙文，话题是发生在身边的人和事，贴近生活，而且所给故事具有教育意义。这次的题目学生不会感到陌生，需要注意的是时态应该选择一般过去时，注意布置好文章结构和段落。罗列过程中不仅要注意时态、人称及短语、句型等的正确使用，更要注意拓展内容的准确性。
The Story of Li Hua
Last Friday, when my classmate Li Hua took a bus home from school, he saw that someone was eating an orange. To his surpri, that man just threw the peel on the ground after he had it.
Without thinking twice, Li Hua picked up the orange peel and threw it into the dustbin directly. All of the process was taken photos and posted on the Internet by a pasnger. As a result, our teacher knew his good behaviour and praid him becau of what he did at the class meeting. Li Hua was very humble and said he just did what he should do. We were all impresd by his words.
As far as I am concerned, the man who threw the orange peel around was not a good example, but luckily Li Hua t a good one for us. We are suppod to mind our behaviours and protect the environment around us all the time.
