三段式的基本结构
• 第一段
第一句:Vividly depicted in the above picture is/are+名词,
第二句:Nothing can be more illuminating and enlightening/instructive/striking/thought-provoking/far-reaching than this graph.
第三句:It’s so enlightening and striking that whoever in front of it can’t help being illuminated.
第四句:What on earth can be inferred from the above table/chart/graph.
○ 修饰词汇:
Clearly/apparently/evidently/conspicuously
第一段备选句:What is Vividly depicted in the above picture is/are+名词,
• 第二段作分析与评论(分析利弊或原因):
○ Study it further,we can easily learn that what the illustrator actually aim to is that+句子/is the verity of+名词/is the significance
○ many reasons can be found: …
○ veral factors could be responsible for it, but the following ones are most crucial /critical: …脾肾两虚怎么调理
+ 各种原因
随着社会的发展的高级表达:with the process of reform, opening-up and socialist modernization 随着改革开放和社会主义现代化进程的推进
, which has attracted extensive attention of the society.
indeed, its implication distinctly conveyed should be given deep consideration.
城镇化 urbanization
○ 分析弊的模板:it has been universally acknowledged that ______will not only do harm to______but also be detrimental to______, which is extremely urgent to address before things get wor.
新郎誓词不利于个人的成长与成功:do harm to the growth and success of individuals.
阻碍和谐社会的建设:hinder/prevent the construction of harmonious society
○ 分析利的模板:it has been universally acknowledged that ______will not only be beneficial to/be helpful to/promote/enhance/improve______but also contribute to______, which derves our attention and advocation.
注:两面性的利弊都分
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○ 首先:primarily = to begin with = to start with = first of all
○ 其次:condly what's more
○ 最后:finally
○ 相反:as a striking contrast
○ in comparison 相比较而言
○ 因此:as a conquence = conquently = hence = accordingly
○ furthermore
○ on the one hand, on the other hand
○ in addition = besides
○ apart from that
○ furthermore
○ what's more
○ above all
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第二段备选句
○ when it comes to TOPIC, viewpoints vary.
○ there is no denying that …
○ there is a widespread concern that …
○ what is conveyed in the drawing is most meaningful and thought-provoking.
○ study it further, we can easily learn that what the graph actually/virtually aims to mirror is by no means/ on no account/ under no circumstance simple. It is indicative of a exceedingly/distinctly familiar scene/phenomenon in our society for the time-being:______
○ on the other side of the coin, however, …
○ perhaps more importantly … 或许最重要的是……
• 举例子
○ numerous examples can be given to illustrate the above viewpoints, but the following one will suffice: …
高级写法1:A convincing example occurring to me goes to Jack Ma,a distinguished business leader,who attributes his achievement to his good cooperation ability with others./......
高级写法2:
○孕妇腰酸背痛引用名言奋斗的近义词as sb puts it:自己的话
○引用谚语it is reported that
○引用报道just as an old saying/proverb goes:
最后一段:
最后一段可以下结论,也可以提建议
•(可以做起始句)nowhere in history has such a phenomenon been concerned so much as in our society today. It should be noted, of cour, that uptting parallels are too numerous to list; And similar stories frequently hit the headlines of mass media.
• 提出措施:
○ effective countermeasures should be taken to curb /limit /forbid /ban /support /advocate /publicize ……
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○ the problem is evident, and what ems crucial and urgent is to find out approaches to address it.
○ much can be done
○ 万能措施:first of all, a publicizing educational campaign should be carried out to enhance people’s awareness about the significance /harmfulness of
○ 万能措施:above all, we individuals, should object to/ oppo to doing/ advocate doing sth in our daily life.
○ 立法:The current state of affairs may have been encouraged—though not justified—by the lack of legal penalty. Conquently, if necessary, relevant laws and regulations should be laid down to prevent/ forbid/ limit/ curb this problem.
○ on the one hand……
○ on the other hand……
○ for one thing … for another thing质疑问难
• 下结论:
○ bad on the factors discusd above together with data fetched from the table, we can easily draw a conclusion that …
○ taking into account/consideration all discussions prented above, we may reasonably reach to conclusion that …
○ there are good reasons to predict that …
○ sustainable and harmonious society. 可持续的和谐的社会
○ contribute to the achievement of Chine Dream as soon as possible. 有助于中国梦的早日实现。