Reference to Advanced English Writing
P35
1)Leprosy is caud by bacteria spread through liquid from the no and mouth. The dia mainly effects the skin and nerves.
effect 作动词时意为“产生，招致（某种结果）；实现，完成”，但此处需要表示“影响”，故将effects → affects.
2)There is a train which leaves London at 5pm and arrives Cambridge at 6:45pm.
arrives → reach或arrives后加in。arrive是不及物动词，表示“到达”时如果后面要跟地方就要加上介词或者将其改成与其同义的及物动词reach。
3)There is so much voice outside that I can’t concentrate on my study and thinking.
voice → noi 。voice意思是“（人的）声音”，而noi指的是噪声。
4)They are far more probable to report that they don’t have the time to read the papers and have no interest in the content.
probable → likely。两者都有“可能的’之意，但是用probable时，主语只能是物或者形式主语it，而使用likely对于主语没有特别的要求。
5)Ever since the enclosures, wool and then woolen cloth had been the principle exports of England.
principle → principal。principle意为“原则”；principal可以作形容词，意为“主要的”，也可作名词，意为“校长”。此处意为“主要出口商品”，故应该使用principal。
6)The unemployment rate in the US aro to 4.5% in April from 4.3% in March due to its economic slowdown.
aro → ri。ari：没有“上升”之意，多指“产生，发生，出现”，是不及物动词；
ri：“上升、增长”，是不及物动词；
7)工作内容We must not forget that advertising makes a positive contribution to our products. Newspaper, commercial radio and television companies could not subsist without this resource of revenue.
resource → source。resource意为“资源”，source意为“来源”，此处指税收来源，故使用后者。
8)The agricultural revolution in the nineteenth century involved two things: the invention of labor-saving machinery and the developing of science agriculture.
developing → development。这里应该使用develop的名词形式development，表示“科技农业的发展”。developing的意思是“发展中的…”。此处的development与invention是并列的。
9)Many foreigners in England have considerate difficulty in making themlves understood.
动物特征considerate → considerable斗鱼是什么。 considerate意为“体贴的，周到的”，用法有be considerate
of sb；considerable意为“相当大的，相当多的”。根据意思应该用后者。
10)Having lived in Guangzhou for years, some people still can’t adopt themlves to the hot and humid weather.
adopt → adapt。adopt意为“采用，采纳；正是通过；收养”；adapt意为“使适应；改编，改写”。
11)At Duke, economy is the most popular major, attracting nearly 15 percent of undergraduates.
economy → economics。economy：经济，经济制度；economics：经济学；economic：经济的，经济上的，经济学的；economical：节约的，节省的，be economical of “节省..”。
12)The orangutan of Sumatra and Borneo shares 96.4 percentage of the same genetic make-up humans.
percentage → percent。percentage不直接跟在数词之后，常用于a percentage of sth /sb，如： Only a few vegetable-origin foods have such a high percentage og protein。而percent通常直接跟在数词之后表示百分比的数值。
13)In every home a stereo or television will fill the rooms sound and joy.
Rooms后加with 本题考查fill sth with sth 的用法，意思为“使…充满…，使…填满…”。注意还有be filled with，be full of 的用法，两个的意思同样为“填满了、充满了”。
1.Plea rewrite the following ntences in more formal English:
1)Hi, John, there’s a meeting on Tuesday at 10am. Plea come. If you can’t come, let me know as soon as possible, by phone or email, both OK.
Dear sir, we are so privileged to invite you to the meeting on Tuesday at 10 am. Plea inform us via phone or email if you are unable to attend it.
2)We don’t have enough描写声音的词语有哪些 bronze, and it is very crucial material to make our esntial parts, so I think we can’t finish the job on time.
This task may not be accomplished before the deadline due to the lack of bronze as the crucial material of the esntial parts.
3)Why is it so hard for college graduates to find good jobs? Is it becau their quality declines? Or is it becau the job market doesn’群通知怎么发t need so many of them?
Here comes a question that whether it’s the declining quality of college graduates or the shrinking market demand for them that really leads to their gloomy employment situation.
P46
1) complete→容积计算公式 completely。“be absorbed in sth.”表示“全神贯注”的意思，该结构中“absorbed”是形容词，所以前面应该用副词修饰。
2) relative→ relatively。在该句中，“relative”并不是作为形容词修饰后半句主语名词few，而是作为整个句子的状语，表示“相对而言的”。
3) 本句中三个平行成份which products to emphasize now, which to develop和which to be dropped结构模式应该一致，均采用不定式主动语态，因而to be dropped应改为to drop
4) tricked→ tricks。并列连词or连接三项成分。前两项均为名词，故tricked应改为名词tricks与前面的mistakes和misconceptions平行。
5) 本句的主语the modern footballer是view的逻辑主语，根据view的词性和句子的意思，两者之间应该是被动关系，所以只能用view的过去分词形式。
6) by → for。什么叫谚语
7) speak→ speaking。practi后的宾语要用-ing形式。
奇忠义8) cover → covering此处的cover用来修饰前面的名词a layer of varnish，可见应该使用非谓语动词形式。另外两者间是主动关系，故使用现在分词。
9) 在表达“百分之几”时，只需用基数词加上单数percent即可。
