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试题答案
【答案】One possible version
Li Xiaohu spent too much time playing computer games and he fell behind others. As a good/clo friend of his, I must do something to help him.
First, I must tell him that playing computer games too much is bad for his health, especially for his eyes.
白杨树图片So he must give it up. I can play more sports with him after school. Maybe he will become more interested in sports than computer games.
杜若色And then I'll ask him to concentrate more on his study. Of cour, I will try my best to help him with all his subjects. I think I can do it in many fun ways and let him find much fun in studying.
At the same time, I'll ask both his parents and our teachers to help him, too. If I try the, I'm sure he will make great progress soon.
【解析】
试题分析:这是⼀篇给话题作⽂。我们要做的就是⽤正确的英语把要点表达出来,并适当发挥想象说出⾃⼰的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料,不要遗漏要点,并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本⽂主要是⽤⼀般现在时态和⼀般将来时来写,要注意主谓⼀致等问题。写作中要适当使⽤连词,注意上下⽂联系紧密,符合逻辑关系。处女和狮子
写作亮点:这篇短⽂多次使⽤连接词如First、And then,以及At the same time等,为⽂章增⾊不少。学习中注意总结,牢记⼀些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引⽤,使⽂章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。描写友谊的句子
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【答案】One possible version
表示快乐的词语Li Xiaohu spent too much time playing computer games and he fell behind others. As a good/clo friend of his, I must do something to help him.
First, I must tell him that playing computer games too much is bad for his health, especially for his eyes.
So he must give it up. I can play more sports with him after school. Maybe he will become more inter
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ested in sports than computer games.
红灯侠And then I'll ask him to concentrate more on his study. Of cour, I will try my best to help him with all his subjects. I think I can do it in many fun ways and let him find much fun in studying.
At the same time, I'll ask both his parents and our teachers to help him, too. If I try the, I'm sure he will make great progress soon.
【解析】
试题分析:这是⼀篇给话题作⽂。我们要做的就是⽤正确的英语把要点表达出来,并适当发挥想象说出⾃⼰的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料,不要遗漏要点,并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本⽂主要是⽤⼀般现在时态和⼀般将来时来写,要注意主谓⼀致等问题。写作中要适当使⽤连词,注意上下⽂联系紧密,符合逻辑关系。
写作亮点:这篇短⽂多次使⽤连接词如First、And then,以及At the same time等,为⽂章增⾊不少。学习中注意总结,牢记⼀些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引⽤,使⽂章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。

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