读后续写之优美句子
-by Lance 兰银清
要想在读后续写中拿到高分，仅仅学会读-思-写的方法还远远不够。我们平时应该多看原版英语小说，摘抄背诵优美句子并且在读后续写中加以灵活运用。只有这样，我们才能在续写中思绪飘飞，妙笔生花。
一）细节描写
细节描写: 多描写，少叙述
1.动作描写（vivid action）*****
动作要有过程，有细节；另外动词要尽量生动，具体。
1)Tim slammed the door and 学英语动画片stormed into the kitchen.
2) Oh, thank God! She presd her hand to her chest, trying to 诱人的老师电影在线catch her breath.
3) Tina patted her pockets. Nothing. “Oh, shit! Where are my keys?”
4) Seized by an overwhelming n of fear, I froze there, not knowing what to do.
5) She crept along the path, bent over swiftly and cupped her hands around the butterfly gently.
6)Tina’s eyes widened, and her lips formed a silent “Wow!”
7) She breathed into her hands to warm her numb fingers.
8)As his mother switched off the light and left the room, Michael tend. He huddled under the covers, gripped the sheets, and held his breath as the wind brushed past the curtain.
9)Tina threw herlf on the floor and kicked her legs. “I want it! I want it! I want It!”
愿意英语10) Taking a deep breath, Mary pushed open the door and stepped inside.
11) The dog trembled and looked up at me with his big, soft eyes. （from Black Don）
12) He was curled up on my rug, trembling in his sleep. （from Black Don）
2.心理描写（inner thoughts）*
1) I looked around-couldn’t e him. I thought, “He must have got out somehow.” So I opened the door. (from Black Don)
2) “ I just want to be left alone,” thought Del. But he said, “I’m Ok.”(From 脆皮南瓜饼Spanner, you win!)
3) I gave mylf a good telling off (责备). “You wimp （懦夫）!” I told mylf. “Fancy being scared of six rabbits!” A little voice in my head said: “Rabbits don’t have fiery (火红的) eyes.” （from Black Don）
4) She struggled to keep her face expressionless as her father patted Tom on the shoulder. “Yeah, of cour, Daddy’s golden child can do no wrong.”
5)All the fantastic memory came crowding in and she couldn’t help crying. “Hadn’t I quarr
eled with Tom, walked away and climbed to the high place, I wouldn’t be trapped in this awful place, confronted with the danger of dying.” (2016年10月浙江高考)
温馨提示：心理描写可以直接描写；也可以借助thought等标志词语进行心理描写
2.情感描写（emotions）**
情感常常通过具体的动作表现出来
1)Hearing the news, so desperate was she that she drowned sadness in wine.
2)Her hands were shaking. She was on the verge of tears.
3)The boy froze with terror, too scared to move an inch.
给朋友的祝福语4)The lady’s face turned pale and she stood there tongue-tied
5)He stood in the center, eyes shining and his heart thundering with excitement.
6)Seeing a big smile spread across her face, I felt so proud of what we did.
7)The little boy threw himlf into his father’s arms after being parated from him for a whole year.
8)Her tears gathered and flowed down her face.
9)Her heart ached, tears streaming down her cheeks.
10)She felt so ashamed that she could feel her face burning.
4.五感描写（five ns）*
1) Rain drummed on the windshield（挡风玻璃） and the roof of my Honda, drowning out the hum(嗡嗡声) of the engine.（sight，hearing）凛冽的读音
2) The scent of salt and brush(灌木丛) hung in the air. I lifted my no into the ocean breeze and inhaled deeply.（smell）
3) She pushed back the tent flap and wrinkled her no. Ugh. The inside of the tent smelled like sweat, dirty stockings and damp wool. No way would she stay in this rat hole.
树上的苹果
（smell）
4) Footsteps echoed behind me and the stench（臭味） of stale beer hit my no. I walked faster.(hearing，smell)
5.语言描写(language) **
1) “Don’t lie to me, damn it.” He smashed his fist down on the table.
2) Tina looked the actress up and down. “You look a lot taller on camera.”
3)“Why are the young never grateful?” wondered Mr Wopsle sadly.
4)“Third time this week!” he roared across the table.
5) She managed a forced smile, muttering “Thank you, anyway,” and turned toward the door.
6) “Dad, will Uncle Paul come to look for us?” I asked Dad in a shaking voice.
7)“I know what day it is,” Dudley repeated, coming right up to him.
8) Mike crosd his throat and spoke in low, polite tones.
6.环境描写（tting）
意面牛排1)It was cold, with an east wind blowing from the a, and it was getting dark.
2)One morning Mary woke to find bright sunshine flooding her room.
3) The rain began again that night. It beat against the window, waking Mary up. She listened as the wind howled around the hou and down the chimney.
4) We watched the small boat carry him out to the middle of the river, where the great black prison-ship stood high out of the water, held by its rusty chains.
