二年级课本
2016专四作文
【篇一：2016年专四作文辅导】
新考纲要求及题型调整说明《关于英语专业四级考试（tem4）题型
调整说明》（2015 年版）的测试要求为：能在45 分钟内根据所给
的作文题目、图表或阅读材料等，写一篇200 个单词左右的短文。
能做到内容相关、充实、语言通顺、用词恰当、表达得体。本部分
为命题作文，文章体裁主要属于说明文、言论文或记叙文的范围，
以测试学生的基本书面表达能力。材料以两种形式出现，一类给出
关于某一话题的两篇文字材料、观点相反，要求在阅读材料的基础
上发表自己对该话题的观点，材料总长度为300 词左右。第二类给
出一至两份图表材料和一份相关介绍的文字材料，要求对图表进行
描述并进行合理分析，文字材料为150 左右。评分标准分项评分：
内容阐述能力、篇章组织能力、语言运用能力。内容阐述能力：对
所给材料进行准确的缩写和充分讨论。篇章组织能力：考查学生对
缩写和讨论部分的组织安排，要求顺序合理、过渡自然、段落划分
合理等。语言运用能力：考查词汇、语法和丰富和准确性，还包括
书写规范如拼写准确性、标点运用、卷面整洁等。
题型分析1.两篇文字材料的写作所提供两篇文字材料都是关于同一
话题，但观点对立。因此，首先要对所给材料正反两方的观点进行
综述（summary），考查学生对观点中的重要信息的辨别、概括和
转述的能力，其次要求学生要提出自己的观点，考查论辩能力——
提供同意或反对的合理论据和逻辑推理能力——说服类的语言表达
能力。注意事项：第一，概括错误。新的四级写作要求学生对所提
供的材料进行概括，通常在概括能力方面，学生容易将材料原文的
主要信息未加以转述、原词照搬到自己的作文中，或者在概括过程
化痰水果
中未能对观点的主要信息进行归纳总结，将不重要的信息包括过来。第二，内容不充实。评分标准的要求是“内容相关、叙述清楚、前后
一致” ，在论述过程中由于思路不清或时间安排不合理等原因，造
成内容空洞或论据不充分。例如：should private car owners be taxed for pollution? ......truly, the private cars have caud many problems. according to a recent rearch, many emissions among all the greenhou gas are from the private cars. the painful experiences in the past have taught us to live in harmony with nature and manage to avoid any
incidents that may have an adver effect on the environment.
besides, the contaminants nt by the cars are very harmful to our health. the pollutants will have a persistent impact on
human body and are likely to cau a number of dias. above all, in recent years the number of private cars is growing at an 修正后： ......to start with, the emission from cars contributes to the environment pollution. according to the study, the total gas emission of the private cars amounts to 30~60% among all the greenhou gas, which leads to the deterioration of the whole ecosystem, such as climate change, acid rain and greenhou effect. so it is the private car owners who should pay for the pollution, and it’ll be fair to u the tax revenue levied on their cars to treat air pollution. in addition, tax for pollution will be a good way to solve traffic jams which are becoming more and more vere due to the soaring number of private cars. with oil price becoming higher and higher, additional tax for pollution is surely a burden. then tho who want to buy cars will consider more when deciding to buy a private car. conquently, the increasing rate of the number of the private cars and then the traffic jam can 第三，语态、时态等错误较多、
衔接不自然、句子质量不高。这些问题都是由于语言基本功不扎实
引起的。例如：“why are you always lack of money? ” “as far we u money ”
2003 2004 2005 2006 2007 2008 2009 2010 2011 2012 2013 2014 2015the importance of keeping a
good mood will phones kill letter writing? my idea of a university arts festival saving money or spending tomorrow ’s money is it wi to make friends online? the benefits of volunteering will tourism bring harm to the environment? should college students hire cleaners? should private car owners be taxed for pollution?
the dragon boat festival the advantages of being careful with
money in daily life should english majors study maths? how i deal with stress?情绪手机校园生活观念网络交友志愿者社会话
题校园生活社会话题（环保）传统文化校园生活校园生活校园生
鲁滨逊漂流记简介
活从这16 年考题来看，标黑色的写作立场已经事先确定，考生无需
在作立场判断，这类不妨称之为“说明文” ；标红色的则需要考生在
写作的第一段表明立场，方便下文就这一立场进行论证，这类可以
称为“议论文” 。样题解析（两篇文字材料的写作）：part iv
writing there is recently a debate about the influence of technology on our life. does it make our life easier or more difficult? the following are the supporters’ and opponents’ opinions. read carefully the opinions from both sides and write your respon in about 200 words, in which you should first summarize briefly the opinions from both sides and give your view on the issue. mark will be awarded for content relevance,融资费用
content sufficiency, organization and language quality. failure
to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks. yes technology and digital media can be a great help to no technology promis to make ourreaching out to other people and spreading your message to a lives easier, freeing up time for leisure very large platform. “social media removes all distances: pursuits. but the rapid pace ofgeographic, social, hierarchical. you can reach anyone, at any technological innovation and the split time, and communicate in real time. thus, a permanent link of cond processing capabilities ofcommunication has been created,” said j ulien maldonate, a computers that can work virtually nior manager at deloitte. nonstop have made all of us feel rushed.
amina belghiti, partnerships manager at facebook, we have adopted the relentless pace of describes
地球的形状和大小how technology has taken the universal the very machines that were suppodcommunication method of storytelling and transformed it, in a to simplify our lives, with the result way that now more stories can reach more people through that, whether at work or play, people do social media platforms than ever before. she recommends that not feel like their lives have changed for people find their digital media voice, tell sharable stories, and the better. drive engagement. the indispensability of technology it is suppod that technology helps us communicate easier and quicker. just as julien maldonate points out, digital media makes people from different places, different social backgrounds and class communicate in the same media platform. and messages or stories can reach more readers or audiences by mass media. however, some people claim that when technology is running more and more rapidly, it quickens our life pace and has not bettered our lives. for example, cretaries have to reply to instant messages immediately when their blackberry beeps at mid-night; phone
urs always fix their eyes on their cell phones and are ready to answer any ring calls. in fact, life does not become easy and relaxing, instead it becomes much busier and quicker.
although technology has made our lives more complex, it is an integral part in our lives. machines in factories and farms have freed us from manual works. houhold appliances, such as washing mach
ines, vacuum cleaners and microwave ovens, have made our houwork much easier than ever before. i
believe most people are not willing to give up using cellphones, the internet or other information technologies, becau they do bring about much convenience on our daily life. in addition,, technology plays an increasingly important role in our society. owing to the application of technology, it has brought advancements in agriculture, industry, engineering,
architecture, and so on. advancements in technology have led to the evolution of newer and faster modes of transportation and communication. the development of technology has boosted rearch in fields ranging from genetics to extraterrestrial space. so, technology has touched every
aspect of life, making it easier, better and different. obviously technology does make our lives more complex. however, without technology we may be living in a primitive society
where most people have to live a monotonous life. (301 words)练习一：
【篇二：2016专四作文模板及句型】
2016专四作文模板及句型
搞笑灯谜exposition 型
supporting details
．表示原因 （第一段引起下文或第二段理由段引出理由） 1）the reasons for this are as follows ．
2）the reason for this is obvious ．
3)．a number of factors are accountable for this situation.
4) a number of factors might contribute to (lead to )(account for ) the phenomenon(problem).
5). the answer to this problem involves many factors.
6). the phenomenon mainly stems from the
死心塌地的意思7). the factors that contribute to this
8). the change in ...largely results from the
9). we may blame ...,but the real
10). part of the explanations for it is that ...
11). one of the most common factors (caus ) is that ...
12). another contributing factor (cau ) is ...
13). perhaps the primary factor is that …
14). but the fundamental cau is that ...
2．表示好处（第一段引起下文或第二段理由段引出好处）
1）it has the following advantages．致青春2
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2）it does us a lot of good
3）it benefits us quite a lot．
4）it is beneficial to us．
．
5）it is of great benefit to us
3．表示坏处
1）it has more disadvantages than advantages．
2）it does us much harm．
3）it is harmful to us．
4．表示重要、必要、困难、方便、可能（结尾段）
1）it is important（necessary，difficult，convenient，possible）
【篇三：2016年专四备考详细计划】
2016年专四备考详细计划
--- 2016年新题型专四备考时间表
专四备考应提早动手，充裕的复习时间总会带来不错的分数。以下为2016年专四备考详细计划，希望考生们参考借鉴认真复习。
根据惯例及预测，16年改革后专八考试时间为：16年3月13日（周六），专四考试时间为：16年4月16日（周六）。正常情况下，各校都会安排英语专业及相关可以参考tem考试的同学在十一月及十二月进行报名，请各位务必关注校内教务通知。由于每年寒假前后总是考试最扎堆节日最热闹的时刻，各种纷扰之下，专四专八备考最容易不了了之。按我们的培训经验，通过吃些大一大二的老本来通过专四考试，可能性有，不过，裸考过专八，难度略大，再加上很多人对
尽快启动备考，才是2016新题型改革完全没底，王道。
另外，以我的经验，求职过程中，最好用，能够最快速打动更多中国hr面试官的英文能力认证，就是专八。
