abab式的词专题09 材料作文（解析版）
一、长宁区
二、杨浦区
三、徐汇区
四、普陀区
五、浦东新区
六、嘉定区
七、虹口区
八、宝山区
九、松江区
十、闵行区
一、长宁区
69．Writing （作文）
Write at least 60 words about the topic “My new way(s) to汽车桌面 ” （请以“我 的新方法”为题， 写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
在你的日常的学习生活中，你习惯于老方法做某事。有一天你尝试使用新方法，结果发现效果更好。请你举例简单叙述使用什么新方法、做了什么事、介绍新方法的优点以及谈谈给你的感想。
（注意：文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名以其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）
【答案】
69．例文
My new way(s) to learn Chine
Chine is our mother tongue, but when I started middle school, my Chine was very poor. At that time, when I was learning Chine, I just memorized the knowledge from textbooks. Later my Chine teacher encouraged me and gave me some advice. Then I often took part in some activities about Chine and had a good time. I not only listened more carefully in class but also read a lot of books in my spare time. Besides, I often wrote articles and shared them with my teachers and classmates.
The change of learning methods made me more interested in Chine and my grades improved. I am very satisfied with my progress and thank my Chine teachers and students.
【解析】
1.赵子毅题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求以“My new way(s) to ” 为题， 写一篇短文。简单叙述使用什么新方法、做了什么事、介绍新方法的优点以及谈谈给自己的感想。首先要把题目补充完整，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。
2.例文点评：本文时态为一般过去时和一般现在时，人称主要为第一人称。文章紧扣题目要点，内容完整，表述准确，语言的表述符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯。
军训心得体会大学3.高分亮点：
短语：be weak in，take part in，have a good time，not only…but also…， a lot of，share sth with sb。浏览器的英文
句型：when I started middle school，I was weak in Chine. 当我上中学的时候，我的语文很薄弱．这是由when引导的时间状语从句，意思是"当…的时候"虫子英文，be weak in是一个固定短语，意思是：在某方面很差。
I not only listened more carefully in class but also read a lot of books in my spare time. 我不仅上课认真听讲，而且在业余时间也读了很多书。not only…but also…固定句型，不但…而且…。
二、杨浦区
69．Writing
In 60-100 words, make up a two-turn dialogue according to the given situation（根据所给情境编一篇 60-100词的两个轮次的对话。标点符号不占格，对话的开头和结尾已给出。）
Situation: Tome Brown, a 40-year-old P. E. teacher, saved a boy from being knocked down by a car. Crystal school reporter wanted to write an article about his good deed（事迹）. She interviewed Tom Brown.
The interview begins like this:
Crystal: Mr. Brown, May I ask you a few questions? Tom Brown: Sure. Plea go ahead.
Crystal: Tom Brown:
Crystal: Tom Brown: 揣揣不安
Crystal: Thank you for you time! It’s nice talking to you.
（注意：文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）
【答案】
69．Crystal: Mr. Brown, May I ask you a few questions?
Tom Brown: Sure. Plea go ahead.
Crystal:When and where the accident happened?
Tom Brown: At about 8:30, I was walking on Ocean Road when a boy on a bike pasd me quickly. The road was empty at that time so the boy kept riding in the middle.
最喜欢的一句话Crystal: How did the accident happened?
Tom Brown: The boy was listening to music with earplugs and he didn’t hear the warning. Suddenly the car speeded up and pasd the boy. Unfortunately, it hit the boy. The boy fell off his bike onto the road, but the car didn’t stop.
