吃团圆饭作文
高中英语写作模拟训练题20题(含参考答案)
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一、读后续写
1.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The e-mail request came into Ekiben restaurant late on a Thursday afternoon in March. Brandon Jones, the man who nt the e-mail didn't actually want the food himelf. He was writing on behalf of his mother-in-law, Shirley, who loved the broccoli(西兰花)dish with fresh herbs and cucumber vinegar. He went on to explain that she was now in the final stage of lung cancer at her home in Vermont and that he was hoping to get the recipe(烹饪法)to make it for her there. Steve Chu, one of the restaurant's co-owners, read the e-mail and quickly replied, "Thanks for reaching out," he wrote. "We'd like to meet you in Vermont and make it fresh for you."立春有什么习俗
Brandon was shocked. "I emailed back, saying, 'You do know that this is Vermont we're talk
ing about, right?'" says Brandon. "But Chu responded, 'No problem. You tell us the date, time and location and we'll be there."
For the past six years, every time Shirley visited Baltimore, the first place she wanted to go was Ekiben so she could order that dish. "She loves that broccoli, and I really wanted her to have it one more time," Brandon says.
"She had always told us, 'When I'm on my deathbed, I want to have that broccoli,'" recalls Brandon's wife, Rina Jones. That Friday after work, a day after receiving Brandon's e-mail, Chu loaded his truck with a hot plate and a cooler and then headed for Vermont with his business partner, Ephrem Abebe, and an employee. They stayed overnight in a tent and drove the next day to the small town where Shirley lived.指南针为什么不叫指北针
As soon as Chu and his team pulled into the parking lot, they got to work. They pulled down the gate of the pickup, fixed the hot plate on the truck's power port, and started cooking and deep-frying. In addition to broccoli, they made tofu with peanut sauce and fresh herbs and some steamed rice. After neatly boxing everything up, they knocked on t
heir customer's door.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡上的相应位置作答。
"Go ahead and answer," Rina told her mother.
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The Jones invited Chu and his team to join them for dinner.
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【答案】Possible Version
"Go ahead and answer," Rina told her mother. No sooner had Shirley opened the door than she was attracted by the familiar smell. With her mouth widely open, she recognized 25端口
Chu and his coworkers immediately and kept saying, "I can't believe that you drove all the way up here to cook for me!" So happy and touched was she that she couldn't contain herlf. As for Chu, he was glad to e his loyal customer.
五指毛桃别名The Jones invited Chu and his team to join them for dinner. They thanked them but said they needed to get back. Chu also refud to take any money from the family. "It was an honor to help fulfill the family's wishes," Chu said. Rina was happy that her mother was able to enjoy her beloved broccoli with remarkable kindness one last time. On eing her mother crying about their generosity, Rina burst into tears as well and said, "I'll carry that positive memory with me forever."
【解析】
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开,主要描述巴尔的摩(Baltimore,巴尔的摩市,也译作巴的摩尔市,美国马里兰州最大城市,美国大西洋沿岸重要海港城市)Ekiben饭店收到了一封来自
于Brandon Jones的邮件,他说他的岳母Shirley,已经到肺癌晚期了,但是很想吃Ekiben饭店的一道菜——配有新鲜蔬菜和黄瓜醋的西兰花。于是,Ekiben饭店的的合伙人之一Steve Chu带着设备,跟合伙人Ephrem Abebe和一个员工就去了佛蒙特州(Vermont,美国东北部新英格兰地区一州),为Shirley做了她想吃的西兰花和其它几样菜品,然后敲开了她的家门。
【详解】
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“去开门。”可知,第一段可描写Shirley打开门后看到Steve Chu他们时的情况。
②由第二段首句内容“Jones一家人邀请Chu和他的团队跟他们一起吃晚饭。”可知,第二段可描写他们邀请一起吃晚饭之后的场景。
2.续写线索:Shirley开门——看到熟悉的饭菜和Chu——很激动——邀请一起吃晚饭——Chu他们拒绝——Shirley一家人很感谢Chu他们
3.词汇激活
行为类
①辨认出:recognized/pick out
时光老人
②实现梦想:fulfill one's wishes/realize one’s dream
情绪类
①高兴:happy/glad
②感动:touched/moved
【点睛】
【高分句型1】No sooner had Shirley opened the door than she was attracted by the familiar smell.(由No sooner…than…引导的部分倒装结构)
【高分句型2】I can't believe that you drove all the way up here to cook for me!"(由that
引导的宾语从句)
努力的近义词【高分句型3】So happy and touched was she that she couldn't contain herlf.(由so…that…引导的部分倒装结构)电脑怎么一键还原系统
2.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
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