2021新高考浙江联考高三英语--读后续写作文写作指导一、原题
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。September is most beautiful in Strathroy, where
people wholeheartedly enjoy the simple pleasures of life and nature.
元旦ppt
Roland was no exception. He was a magnificent German Shepherd(德国牧羊犬),a little lazy and overweight though. He loved to doze in the backyard. He yawned and stretched his body as he heard the slowly approaching footsteps of Mrs. Proudfoot. “Come have your lunch dear!” said Mrs. Proudfoot with her usual fondness for him and he wagged his tail affectionately in return.
Roland was licking the last piece of meat in his plate when the doorbell burst into music. Mrs. Proudfoot hurried to answer the door. Roland stood alert by her side.
“Good noon Mrs. Proudfoot”. It was Sam, her teenage neighbor. “My! My! You look pale! What happened?” asked Mrs. Proudfoot with genuine worry. She immediately waved him in and clod the door behind. Mrs. Proudfoot was a lonely widow, but was well loved in her neighborhood especially by kids, though she had no kids to call her own.
Once encouraged, Sam disclod his dilemma. “My friend Barry lost a rare book of school library. It costs 150 dollars, but he has only 55 dollars and his poor parents can’t afford to pay the rest. Barry is working part time but that’s far from enough.” With a dramatic sigh he continued, “If he
didn’t refund the loss before the end of term, he will be dismisd from final exams.That will ruin his future! I have to help him, whatever it takes. He is my best friend.”
“Don’t worry, Sammy. You want me to pay…” but Mrs. Proudfoot was interrupted. “No, No, Mrs. Proudfoot. This is not what I came here for. I’ll work for you. Would youfavor me to walk your dog plea? For 2 dollars a day.” He looked up with begging eyes.
Mrs. Proudfoot clapped her hands in agreem ent, “That can’t be better! I’ve been worried about Roland lately. He does need some exerci! It’s nice of you to make such an offer.”
Sam thanked her over and over, “I will start tomorrow morning.”
玩得开心的句子注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 应使5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后, 请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1: Sam arrived very early the next morning. Paragraph 2: A month later, Mrs. Proudfoot was delighted to find Roland fit and energetic.
二、写作思路
1. 确定主题：患难之交才是真正的朋友。(A friend in need is a friend indeed.) 或者是，赠人玫瑰，手有余香。(A bit of fragrance always clings to the hand that gives you flowers.) 主要人物Sam不但帮助了自己的朋友Barry，而且帮助了Mrs. Proudfoot-a lonely widow。
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2. 时空变化：时空变化较大，可以叙述环绕主题的主要事件，不必面面俱到。
蚯蚓的选择3. 续写难点：续写部分与原文在内容与语言上如何保持一致。
三、续写指导
“7+7”模式
Paragraph 1: Sam arrived very early the next morning.
1. He rang the doorbell and politely waited for Mrs. Proudfoot to answer.烩酸菜的家常做法
2. Then he could hear Roland barking and whining inside，frantic to get out.
3. Sam stood by the door, debating with himlf whether to walk the unfriendly dog to help his best friend.
4. After a while, the door flung open and Mrs. Proudfoot came out, greeting him with a beaming smile.
5. Surprisingly, the lazy dog grinned up at him and wagged his tail, eager to go out with him.
莺的词语
6. Mrs. Proudfoot put a leash on the dog, stroked his glossy head and said, “Have a good time, dear!”
7. Without saying goodbye, Sam and the dog danced around and then dashed out
of the hou.
Paragraph 2: A month later, Mrs. Proudfoot was delighted to find Roland fit and energetic.
1. Obviously, Sam’s efforts paid off—Roland was healthy and active.
2. But what plead her most was that Sam, together with the other kids, would stay with her on weekends, chatting and laughing.
为什么会猝死3. Besides, they would help her clean up the yard.
4. From then on, laughter filled her hou and she no longer felt lonely.
5. Then came the moment Sam had been looking forward to—the day he was paid for his work.
6. What a big surpri! Tears of gratitude welled up in Barry’s eyes as he knew what Sam had done for him.
7. Sam just stood there, smiling, glad that he could wholeheartedly support his friend when he was in trouble.
四.优秀范文
Paragraph 1：Sam arrived very early the next morning. He rang
the doorbell and politely waited for Mrs. Proudfoot to answer. Then he could hear Roland barking and whining inside, frantic to get out. Sam stood by the door, debating with himlf whether
to walk the unfriendly dog to help his best friend. After a while, the door flung open and Mrs. Proudfoot came out, greeting him with a beaming smile. Surprisingly, the lazy dog grinned up at him
调整心态的书and wagged his tail, eager to go out with him. Mrs. Proudfoot put a leash on the dog, stroked his glossy head and said, “Have a good time, dea r!” Without saying goodbye, Sam and the dog danced around and then dashed out of the hou.
Paragraph 2：A month later, Mrs. Proudfoot was delighted to find Roland fit and energetic. Obviously, Sam’s efforts paid off—
Roland was healthy and active. But what plead her most was
that Sam, together with the other kids, would stay with her on weekends, chatting and laughing. Besi
des, they would help her clean up the yard. From then on, laughter filled her hou and she no longer felt lonely. Then came the moment Sam had been looking forward to—the day he was paid for his work. What a big surpri!
Tears of gratitude welled up in Barry’s eyes as he knew what Sam had done for him. Sam just stood there, smiling, glad that he could wholeheartedly support his friend when he was in trouble.
