劳动教育活动总结Simon’s IELTS Writing Task 1
Question types
1.Line graph
2.Bar chart
3.Pie chart
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5.Diagram-comparing
6.Diagram-process
Essay structure (4 paragraphs )
1.Introduction
One ntence : Paraphra the question
2.Overview
2 ntences :The main , general things
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3.Details
4.Details
3+4: Why 2 paragraphs ?
This makes you organize or ‘group’ the information better
(or put the overview at the end)
No conclusion!!
Line graph ( Line graph show numbers changing over a period of time )
You will not e a graph with only one line .
You will almost definitely e 2/3/4/5 lines.
Your job is to compare the lines , not describe them parately.
Frist , make a very general comparison .( Summary / overview paragraph )
Second , compare the lines at specific point . (‘details’ paragraphs )
For example ：4 lines
You can’t describe everything
Write at least one thing about each line.
你看不到只有一条线的图形。
生活目标你会看到2/3/4/5条线。
你要对这些线条进行比较，而不是单独描述它们。
首先，做一个非常一般的比较。（总结/概述段落）
第二，比较这些线条的特定的节点。（‘细节’段落）
Paragraph 1 : Introduction
The graph below shows electricity production (in terawatt hours ) in France between 1980 and 2012 .
改写：The line graph compares the amount of electricity produced in France using four differdent sources of power over a period of 32 years.
这个折线图比较了法国在32年间使用四种不同电源的发电量。
Paragraph 2 :Overview—2 ntences , 2 main points.
It is clear that nuclear power was by far the most important means of electricity generation over the period shown . renewables provided the lowest amount of electricity in each year.
很明显，在所示期间，核能是迄今为止最重要的发电方式，可再生能源每年提供的电力量最低。
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Paragraph 3 : D电池鼓包etail — 2 paragraphs , compare the lines
In 1980 , thermal power stations were the main source of electricity in France, generating around 120 terawatt hours of power . Nuclear and hydroelectric power stations produced
just under 75 terawatt hours of electricity each, and renewables provided a negligible amount . Just one year later , nuclear power overtook thermal power as the primary source of electricity .
1980年，法国的主要电力来源是火力发电站，发电量约为120太瓦每时。核电站和水力发电站每台发电量不到75太瓦每时，可再生能源的发电量微不足道。仅仅一年后，核电就取代了火电成为主要的电力来源。
Important tip when describing numbers:
You can’t write : Nuclear was 75 terawatt hours of electricity.
Nuclear produced 75 terawatt hours of electricity
You must write : Nuclear power was ud to produce 75 terawatt hours of electricity.
Nuclear power station produced 75 terawatt hours of electricity.
Paragraph 4
Between 1980 and 2005 , electricity production from nuclear power ro dramatically to a peak of 430 terawatt hours . By contrast , the figure for thermal power fell to only 50 terawatt hours in 1985 , and remained at this level for the rest of the period . Hydroelectric power generation remained relatively stable , at between 50 and 80 terawatt hours , for the whole 35 year period , but renewable electricity production saw only a small ri to approximately 25 terawatt hours by 2012 .
从1980年到2005年，核能发电量急剧上升到430太瓦时的峰值。相比之下，在1985年，火力发电的数字下降到只有50太瓦时，并在之后保持在这个水平。水力发电在整个35年期间保持相对稳定，在50至80太瓦时之间，但可再生电力产量到2012年，仅小幅上升至约25太瓦时。
Vocabulary： paraphrasing改写 comparing比较 describing changes描述变化
Amount of electricity produced 发电量
Source of / provided / generating来源/提供/产生
Means of electricity generation发电方式
Over a period of / over the period shown在所示期间内
By far the most important到目前为止最重要的
a negligible amount可忽略的数量
nuclear power overtook thermal power核电超过火电
as the primary source of electricity作为主要的电力来源
ro dramatically to a peak of急剧上升到
by contrast相比之下 the figure for……的数字
remained at this level,remained stable 保持在这个水平，保持稳定
saw only a small ri只看到一个小的上升
Bar chart
Bar chart can show numbers changing over a period of time .This type of bar chart is the same as line graph.
However! Bar chart don’t always show time…
They often only compare numbers
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So , your job is to compare the bars.
First , make a very general comparison ( summary / overview paragraph )
Second , compare specific numbers ( ‘details’ paragraphs )
Bar chart question
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1Introduction
2Overview
3Details
4Details
Paragraph 1 : Introduction—paraphra the question第1段：引言
The chart below shows global sales of the top five mobile phone brands between 2009 and 2013.
改写：The bar chart compares the number of mobile phones sold worldwide by the five most popular manufacturers in the years 2009 , 2011 and 2013.
这张条形图比较了2009年、2011年和2013年五大最受欢迎制造商在全球销售的手机数量。
Paragraph 2 ：Overview—2 ntences ，2 main points概述
It is clear that Nokia sold the most mobile phones between 2009 and 2011 , but Samsung
became the best lling brand in 2013 . Samsung and Apple saw the biggest ris in sales over the 5-year period.
