四级英语分数分配
读后续写微技巧之“动作描写”
Part 1·构造动作链条的句式
拟办意见一、A, B and C（连词连接动词们）
She 复旦大学简介rushed forward, bent down and gathered her son into her arms.
The singer glanced at the audience, took a deep breath and began to sing.
二、使用非谓语
（1）-ing现在分词，凸显主动，同一对象同时发生不同的动作。
The old man sat under the sunt, reading the newspaper and listening to the radio.
（2）-ed过去分词，凸显被动
Deeply moved by the story, the children began to cry.
Part 2
一、“笑”动作描写
1. smile v.&n.微笑 smile at sb./sth. smile with relief（宽慰）
摇太阳舞蹈视频smile sweetly 嫣然一笑；force a smile 强颜欢笑
smile from ear to ear 笑得合不拢嘴
give a charming（迷人的） smile
crack a bright smile 绽放明亮的笑容；
中国象棋大战2. laugh v.&n. 大笑
laugh a hearty laugh 开怀大笑；roars of laughter 大笑
laugh behind their hands 用手捂着嘴笑；
财务部门工作总结explode with laughter=roar with laughter哄堂大笑；
burst into laughter=burst out laughing突然大笑起来；
3. grin v.&n. 露齿而笑，咧着嘴笑
grin with delight 高兴的咧嘴而笑；grin from ear to ear 笑得合不拢嘴
4. giggle=chuckle v.&n. 咯咯笑
giggle at sb/sth 傻笑...；a fit of the giggles 一阵笑声
5. mock v.嘲笑 mock=laugh at=sneer at=make fun of
二、“哭”动作描写
weep-wept 抽泣；sob-sobbed 啜泣；cry 大哭；wail 哀嚎、恸哭；squall v.嚎啕大哭
burst into tears=burst out crying 突然哭起来
fight back tears抑制住泪水be clo to tears 快要哭了
tears roll down/stream down one's cheeks 泪水顺着脸颊淌下来
tears cloud/fill/well up/brim（溢出，充盈） one’s eyes 泪水模糊/溢出双眼
(His face/cheeks) be in tears=be filled with tears=be brimming with tears=be wet with tears 泪流满面
make somebody cry 让某人哭
sob one's heart out 痛彻心扉地哭
三、“说”动作描写
普通的说：tell/say/talk/chat（你们基本都会）
嘟囔，低语：whisper/murmur/mumble（含糊地说）；
whisper sth to sb in a low voice
结结巴巴地说：stutter/stammer
问与答：ask询问/answer回答/reply to回复/respond to 回复
喊叫：call/shout/yell/cry out 哭喊/scream尖叫/exclaim惊叫/howl 嚎叫/roar 咆哮
呻吟：moan 哽咽：choke 叹气：sigh
其他的说：add补充说道/ continue继续说道/acknowledge 承认说
explain解释说/ state陈述说/mention 提到说/repeat 重复说
protest抗议说//insist 坚持说/sob哭诉说/complain 抱怨说
agree同意地说/comfort安慰说/persuade 劝说
announce/declare 宣布说 promi/assure 保证说 suggest/advice 建议说
四、“看”动作描写
看：look at sb/sth；e sb/sth doing 看到sb/sth正在做
盯：stare at sb/sth (with his eyes wide open ) （瞪大眼睛）盯着glare at sb 怒目而视
瞥：glance at sb/sth；glance around 匆匆环视四周 glimp 一瞥；give a glimp of sb/sth
注意：notice sb/sth doing 注意到sb/sth正在做
观察：obrve；obrve carefully/with attention
发现：spot；sb/sth was spotted. 被发现
看见：catch sight of；lo sight of 看不见 sth came into sight. sth进入视野；
sth is out of sight/in sight. sth看不见
五、身体部位动作描写
（一）头部动作描写
1. He hung/dropped/lowered/bowed his head in shame. 他羞愧地低下了头。
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2. They nodded their heads in agreement. 他们点头同意。
3. She shook her head in disbelief. 她怀疑地摇摇头。
4. He scratched his head with a shy smile. 他害羞的笑着挠了挠头。
5. He put/held his head in his hands, greatly annoyed.他双手抱头，十分生气。
（二）脸部动作描写
1. eyes
His eyes shone/sparkled/glimmered/glittered/twinkled with+excitement/pride等表示感情色彩的名词
His eyes were wide/grew wide/widened with horror. 他惊恐地瞪大了眼睛。
2. face/cheeks
Her face lighted up/brightened with excitement, .
A bright smile appeared on/spread across/crosd his face.
His face flushed/burned/turned red with embarrassment.
He felt his cheeks burning with shame.He felt the blood rushing to his face.
Her face turned pale with fright.
His face suddenly grew rious.
His face looked a little confud.。
He had a slight frown on his face.
He kisd her on both cheeks.
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（三）手部动作描写
1. 打：pound/punch 猛击；beat连续击打；slap打耳光；tap/pat轻拍
2. 抓：ize；grasp；grab；catch/take hold of
