热气球壁纸高考英语读后续写“自由八股文”
大部分这个套路只能在大量实践中才能总结出来。这个模板中的每个句子都是非常讲究的，请看下面的例子，可以说能应用在任何场合下（后面还需要不断润色）。十四个左右的句子：
1.无灵主语；
2.独立主格；
3.分词作状语；
4.形容词短语作状语；
5.定语从句；
6.what和it句型；
7.倒装句；
8.强调句；
9.状语从句
10.感叹句
自由八股文模式：
（1）情绪：消极情绪（有时积极）
（2）细节：进一步解释描写
（3）转折：个人的努力或借助外界
（4）转机：事情似乎有了转机，并抱有希望，感到欣慰
（5）失望：但是问题还是没有解决或出现了新问题
（6）新法：突然有了一个想法（一句话说明这个想法）
（7）结局：过了一段时间；事情有了最后的转折
（8）总结：点题，呼应前文
例子：
（2016年10月，浙江高考）
One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom. “I’m going to find a better spot for us to camp” and walked away.
With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she turned around, hoping to e the lake. To her surpri, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost.
“Tom! ”she cried. “Help!”
No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confud she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.
Jane ro at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落）somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.
As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter.Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to e her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blou, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为l50左右；
2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1：
But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.
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Paragraph 2:
退一步海阔天空
It was daybreak when Jane woke up.
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夫妻旅游途中吵架，妻子独自离开，迷路在树林里，直升飞机来了几次援救但没有看见她，她感到很失望。
予人玫瑰手有余香
But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.
续写 | 八股文思路 |
1. A wave of terror swept over her. | （情绪） |
2. Her heart pounding fiercely and her palms sweating, an inner voice told her that she had to find a safe place. | （细节详述情绪） |
3. Tired and terrified as she was, Jane plucked her courage to feel the way. | （转折：个人努力） |
4. Luckily, it didn’t take long before she found a cave. 5. Sighing with relief, she felt a glimmer of hope, saying to herlf, “Tomorrow is another day.” 成文章 | （转机：成功，希望来了） |
6. With that, she went to sleep, in who dream her husband kept her company. | （衔接句） |
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It was daybreak when Jane woke up.
1. Hungry and disappointed, she found not any helicopter overhead, at a loss what to do. | (主要问题) |
2. It suddenly dawned on her that she should find a big open area first. | （突然有了办法） |
| 形容很多 3. Having gobbling down some blackberries, she can’t wait to t off. | （开始做） |
4. After what emed a century, such an area did come into sight. | （成功了） |
5. Her face brightened up. | （感受） |
6. What a coincidence that meanwhile, a helicopter was flying towards her. | （结果解决问题：无巧不成书，欢喜） |
7. Upon its landing, out dashed her husband who hugged Jane tightly, tears welling up in their heart. |
8. It was at that moment that they decided not to quarrel any more but learned to compromi. | （总结） |
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2.泗洲塔（六一儿童节来历2018年6月，浙江高考）
It was summer, and my 贵州风味dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.
We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul, my dad’s friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.
His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. "The day starts at dawn on my farm," he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze(吃草). I was impresd to e my dad and Uncle Paul riding hors. They looked really cool.
