读后续写:主旨升华句(脱险型)
读后续写中会遇到火灾,水灾,森林迷路等内容的故事,如果涉及到对生命造成了一定的威胁的情节,把这种类型的文章归为“脱险”型。在往年高考真题中,曾经就考过三次:拍摄北极熊遇险;父子骑马迷路;骑车游玩遇狼脱险。
主旨句一:入门句
That day was so unforgettable that it would stay in my memory forever.
那天是如此难忘,它将永远留在我的记忆。
遇到危险并且最终成功脱险的经历,想必对我们每个人来说一定是一生中难忘的经历。所以这个句子使用的场合还是挺多的。句子中使用了so...that的句式结构:如此......以至于。unforgettable是一个形容词,表示“无法忘记的”。
主旨句二:中级句
Only then did I realize that it was bravery that can conquer whatever difficulty came i
n the way. 直到那时,我才意识到,正是勇敢才能克服一切困难。
遇到危险后,勇敢面对,才能解决问题。这个句子突出了“勇敢”这个核心,这在“脱险型”的故事里,是非常恰当的。这句话使用了倒装的结构和强调结构结合的方式,也属于高分亮点句。
主旨句三:高级句
It was this unique experience that made me understand whatever difficulty we are faced with (= we may face), we mustn’t give up our hope.
“正是这种独特的经历使我理解了我们所面临的任何困难,我们不能放弃我们的希望。”
这个句子也是把强调句,定语从句,宾语从句结合在一起,句式结构比较高级。同学们不妨挑战一下?
主旨句四:综合型
即把前几种方式进行组合,我们可以记住这个组合公式:结果+难忘的经历+体悟
我们再说具体点儿,“结果”指的是获救的结果,如走出森林,获救后见到家人等。“难忘的经历”就是我们刚刚学到的第一个主旨句。“体悟”在这种“脱险型”里,无非就是突出冷静,勇敢,不放弃希望等信念的重要性。
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我们来一个例句:
Finally, we did sth. What an unforgettable experience! It turns out that there’s always a way out of any plight as long as we stay calm.
最后,我们做某事。(这里写结果) 多么难忘的经历啊! (这是一个万能句)事实证明,只要我们保持冷静,就总有办法摆脱困境。(作者的体悟,可以把“保持冷静”,换成“不放弃希望”等。)
我们看2018年高考英语浙江卷的读后续写,爸爸带儿子去朋友家农场游玩迷路的故事。文章的最后,我们可以用这句:
Finally, we went out of the forest that trapped us. What an unforgettable experience! It turns out that there’s always a way out of any plight as long as we st
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现代医院管理最后,我们走出了困住我们的森林。 多么难忘的经历啊! 事实证明,只要我们保持冷静,就总有办法摆脱困境。
我们也可以把第一句改成:Finally, we arrived home safely just in time for supper(我们安全回家,正好赶上吃晚饭),也就是说,不管怎么写,第一句是脱险后的结果。
我们再看2016年10月高考英语浙江卷的读后续写,夫妻俩野外露营,因小事发生争执,女主人独自走进森林迷路的故事。文章最后,我们也可以用上这句:
Finally, she saw her husband. As tightly as possible, she hugged him and was too thrilled to say anything.What an unforgettable experience! It turns out that there关爱男性健康’s always a way out of any plight as long as we never give up our hope. 最后,她看到了她的丈夫。 她尽可能地紧紧地抱着他,激动得说不出话来。 多么难忘的经历啊! 事实证明,只要我们不放弃我们的希望,任何困境都有出路。
2017年高考英语的读后续写,和朋友一起骑车游玩,途中遇狼的故事。我们可以这样写:
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Finally, the wolf ran away off the road and disappeared in the distance .“We are safe!”Mac said in a pleasant tone. What an unforgettable experience! It turns out that there’s always a way out of any plight as long as we stay calm.最后,狼从路上跑开,消失在远处。“我们很安全!”麦克以一种愉快的语气说。 多么难忘的经历啊! 事实证明,只要我们保持冷静,就总有办法摆脱困境。
素材积累练习:根据提示填空:
中班第二学期安全工作计划1.She tried___________________(夺枪) from him.
2.He was ____________________________ (笨手笨脚地想抓住艾尔弗雷德的手臂)and dig my nails into his flesh.
3.In sport, it’s usually men ________________________(新闻人物通常是男性) .
4.If you were you, I_________________________(要抓住我的免费索取的权利,现在)!
5.Success is now ___________________(在望).
6.She allowed __________________________(胜利从手中溜走了).
7.He___________________(马上就明白)Tephen was talking about his wife.
8.He ______________________________(设法牢牢抓住了那个金属物), get a firm grip of it and heave his body upwards.
9.Attlee was extremely intelligent and____________________________________(对局势的把握颇为高明).
10.U your mou __________________________________(拖动图片将其调整为新的尺寸).
11.He was barely able______________________________________(拖着那条中毒的腿走路 )
12.The minutes ___________________(熬过去)
时间一分钟一分钟地。
13.As far as shopping for clothes goes, ___________________(是件挺没意思的事)
14.___________________(他拖着腿), and he can hardly lift his arm.
15.I tried to ___________________(走出来)morass of despair.
16.Plea concentrate on the business at hand and ______________________(不要牵扯其他问题).
有助于长高的方法17.I don’t want to go back there and________________________(重提那件气人的事)
18.You’ll never get home______________________________________(你走这么慢).
19.He felt hot tears_______________________(掉到他的手指上)
他感觉到热泪。
20.Nancy ___________________(疲惫地瘫坐到)a nearby chair
21.Britain _________________________ (从第二位降到了)third place in the league.
22.There was ___________________(垂直深渊)just outside my window
23.If I___________________(给点暗示)he might give me a big prent.
24.Burning embers started ______________________________________(从天花板上往下掉)ppt封面图
25.He ___________________(放低了声音) and glanced round at the door.
参考答案:
1. She tried to ize the gun from him.
她试图夺他的枪。
2. He was clumsily trying to grab at Alfred’s arms and dig my nails into his flesh.
他笨手笨脚地想抓住艾尔弗雷德的手臂,指甲抠进了他的肉里。
3. In sport, it’s usually men who grab the headlines.
在体育方面,新闻人物通常是男性。
4. If you were you, I’d grab my FREE copy right now!
如果你是你,我要抓住我的免费索取的权利,现在!
5. Success is now within our grasp.
现在胜利在望。
6. She allowed victory to slip from her grasp.
她让胜利从手中溜走了。
7. He instantly grasped that Stephen was talking about his wife.