新高考英语二轮复习之读后续写细节技巧提升练
Day 04 感动与温暖
描写“感激”与“感动”
核心积累 | 形容词/副词 | thankful, grateful, moving, moved, gratefully, touching, touched |
名词/动词 | gratitude, appreciation, move, appreciate, thank, touch |
固定短语 | tears of gratitude/appreciation |
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1.按要求利用表“感激与激动”的表达完成以下各句
①彼得差点撞上一辆过路的汽车，这时一位过路人把他推到了安全的地方。
Peter was nearly knocking into a passing car when a pasrby 宝洁公司招聘pushed him to safety.
②感激的泪水顺着彼得的脸颊流下，他感激地说：“今天你救了我。我对你感激不尽。”
Tears of gratitude rolled down his cheeks. Peter said thankfully, “You've saved me today. I couldn't thank you enough.” (简单句)
With tears of gratitude rolling down his cheeks, Peter said thankfully, “You've saved me today. I couldn't花祭 thank you enough.” (with复合结构)
③看到陌生人之间这般彼此关照，实在令人感动。
It was very moving to e how much strangers could care for each other. (形容词)
④当他接过一个小男孩给的鲜花时，他感激地微笑起来。
He smiled with gratitude as he accepted the flowers given by a small boy. (介词短语)
⑤人群被深深地感动了，于是更大声地拍手。
Touched/Moved deeply, the crowd clapped their hands even more loudly. (非谓语动词作状语)
⑥了解事情的经过后她的母亲流下喜悦和感激的泪水。血氧饱和度多少正常
Knowing what had happened, his 七字墓碑对联精选mother shed tears of joy and gratitude. (名词，简单句)
2.将以上各句合并成小短文并背诵成文，注意使用合适的衔接过渡词汇
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【参考范文】
Peter was nearly knocking into a passing car when a pasrby pushed him to safety. With tears of gratitude rolling down his cheeks, Peter said thankfully, “You've saved me today. I couldn't thank you enough.” It was very moving to e how much strangers could care for each other. He smiled with gratitude as he accepted the flowers given by a small boy. Touched deeply, the crowd clapped their hands even more loudly. Later, knowing what had happened, his mother shed tears of joy and gratitude.
描写“宽慰”与“温暖”
核心积累 | 形容词/副词/名词 | warm, warmth, relief, relieved |
固定短语 | to one's relief, a feeling of warmth |
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1.按要求描写人物的“宽慰”、“温暖”之情
①看到一辆车靠近，爱丽丝松了一口气。
Alice 越南胡志明felt relieved to e a car approaching. (形容词)
②当司机微笑着让她搭车时，她松了一口气。
When the driver with a smile offered a ride to her, she gasped with relief. (介词短语)
③爱丽丝终于上车了，一种温暖和解脱交织的感觉涌上心头。
Alice finally got in the car, and a mixture of warmth and relief flooded over her. (名词作主语)
④爱丽丝到了她办公室所在的大楼。她如释重负地松了口气。
Alice reached the tall building where her office was. She breathed a sigh of relief. (简单句)
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Reaching the tall building where her office was, Alice cad转图片breathed a sigh of relief. (非谓语动词作状语)
⑤当她感谢陌生人的帮助时，感激的泪水涌上了她的眼睛，但他只是暖暖地一笑。
Tears of appreciation welled up in her eyes as she thanked the stranger for his help, but he just重眸 smiled warmly. （副词）
⑥她在寒冷的天气里感到了温暖，相信处处都有好心人。
She felt warm in the cold day, and believed there was kindness in every corner. (形容词)
2.将以上各句合并成小短文并背诵成文，注意使用合适的衔接过渡词汇
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【参考范文】
Alice felt relieved to e a car approaching. When the driver with a smile offered a ride to
her, she gasped with relief. Alice finally got in the car, and a mixture of warmth and relief flooded over her. Reaching the tall building where her office was, Alice breathed a sigh of relief. Tears of appreciation welled up in her eyes as she thanked the stranger for his help, but he just smiled warmly. She felt warm in the cold day, and believed there was kindness in every corner.
【综合演练】
1. 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一个完整的短文。
“Number 7, Jobie Nymble, takes the lead,” cried the announcer. “Just one more hurdle and…”Cheers erupted.
“Jobie Nymble from Riverside Middle School takes first place in the girl's 100-meter hurdles!”
“County championships, here we come,” screamed Jobie, patting her worn neon-green track shoes. They were bursting at the ams, but she didn't care. They were her lucky s
hoes and she loved them. “Next Saturday, we're taking home the gold,” Jobie whispered to her lucky track shoes, excitedly retying them. Pop! She sighed as she stared at the broken-off piece of shoelaces dangling between her fingers.
“Don't forget, guys,” chirped Marisol, one of her teammates. “My birthday party is next Friday at Hidden Park.”
“Beep. Party recorded in calendar,” joked Jobie in her best robot voice.
