读后续写练习写作指导讲义
试题原题
读后续写（满分25分）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一 篇完整的短文。
As I was driving to the airport last week the odometer （里程表）on my truck rotated to 100,000 kilometers. This led me to pau and think about lling the truck and buying a new one, but it also made me think about all the life I'd lived in this truck, and how my bulldog had accompanied me in it, leaving me hesitating about lling it.
When I returned to Canada after nine years overas, what better way could I fit in with and immer in ruraI culture than by buying a pickup?
The day I rolled out of the dealer （经销商）and hit the first gravel road （碎石马路）千里之行始于足下in my Toyota Tacoma was exciting, until I got very nervous as rocks hit my new purcha. But all t
hat quickly evaporated when I received my first call through the truck's Bluetooth phone. It was the doctor, to say that my Dad was hospitalized in a remote location. I immediately followed the truck's GPS and got there quickly and safely. I was with Dad for his last two days. And so the first memories of my truck are images carved in my heart.
As the kilometers of my life rolled on, Lyon, my bulldog who came back to Canada with me from France, claimed the back at as an area belonging only to her. It didn't matter how short or long the trip was, she sta red at me in the review mirror all the time. Most often, I would arrive at our destination and Lyon would stay in the back at, bathed in the sun with the door open, knowing I would return. There was an overwhelming n of comfort between us in that truck.
I n the early days of truck ownership, I pa nicked at how dirty it became and any dent （凹痕）it put on. I soon realized, though, that it was part of the truck's character. Now I look at every dent and recall the story or adventure that put them there. I began to e it as character-building, much like wrinkles appearing on my face. The truck was simply aging gracefully and began, like humans, to display its experience and wisdom.
Paragraph 1:
I don't think a vehicle is just for travelling from place to place.
Paragraph 2:
But as I approached the car dealer, I stopped.
试题分析
•写作分析阿房宫赋教学设计
1.人物（角色）：
①I： 一名货车司机
@the truck： Toyota Tacoma,已行驶 10 万公里
辣鸡爪2.主题：人与自我（社会）
本文以货车里程达到10万公里后是否要卖出为主题展开，讲述了作者 跟货车的一段段历历在目的往事，特别是第一次通过汽车蓝牙接到爸爸病 危的消息，两天后爸爸去世；每次出车都会带上狗Lyon，她都会坐在后排， 享受一段段的车程以及对车的爱护（开始时，看到车身脏了或者有凹痕都 会很心疼，后来也就慢慢接受了车跟人一样也会慢慢优雅地〃变老〃等等。……
3.续写情节安排：
▼第一段：I don't think a vehicle is just for travelling from place to place.
塘角鱼粥①（与开头句衔接）多年的相处让我们成了形影不离的朋友（对前一 句进行承接表达）
②回忆曾经的往事（快乐的时光，痛苦的时刻都可以提一下）
美食文化
③（与下文开头句衔接）然而，因为旧了老了，所以不得不痛苦地告 别
▼第二段：But as I approached the car dealer, I stopped.
①（与开头句衔接）回忆再次袭来
②货车养活了一家人，提防Lyon让每次出行都很平安
③最终让它们（货车+Lyon）继续陪伴我的人生之路
下水作文
I don't think a vehicle is just for travelling from place to place. So many years of getting along well with each other has made us dependable friends, sharing great moments as well as awful memories. We've witnesd people's happiness on their face after getting what they needed. We/ve had tiring but splendid time after the long travelling, enjoying the wonderful scenery along the road and kind-hearted local people helping us. We won't forget how we got through the hardship when hit by the snowstorm. ... However, it might be the time for us to say goodbye though painful! （86 words）
But as I approached the car dealer, I stopped. A really hard decision! Memories with them flooded in once again! It was the truck that gave me the possibility to support a huge family. It was Lyon that made me concentrate on each long-time travelling. But the fact w
as that they were aging and I had to accept it patiently. Just as usual, I turned and looked at the back at. So peaceful was it that Lyon was having a sound sleep, which drew me back to the reality, letting them accompany me more kilometers of life. (88 words)
参考范文
I don't think a vehicle is just for travelling from place to place. I/ve always envisioned a vehicle as going from life event to event. My truck navigated me to more funerals, weddings, through snowstorms, and quickly home from Florida when the government called everyone back to Canada becau of COVID-19. Unfortunately, this summer Lyon had a stroke. My knees weakened as I lifted Lyon out of our truck into the vet's office wrapped in her blanket, which still remains on the back at to this day. This was a hard time. I didn't know if I could bear to live with the memories, so I drove it to the dealer. (98 words)
But as I approached the car dealer, I stopped. The warm memories with Lyon came flooding back. As the kilometers continued to roll on, Lyon could no longer jump into the b
ack at and had to be lifted in and out. Although it saddened me to e that the inevitable was coming, it warmed my heart to e her comfortable in the back at. Thinking of the, my eyes blurred and tears started to flow. I took a deep breath. This truck possd so much of the scar tissue of my life, so I did a U-turn. Once again, I'm putting my heart back into the truck and letting it navigate to accumulate more kilometers and memories on the highway of life. (113 words)
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