考研英语写作小黄书诵读串讲
朱伟 2015年16-17日
如何拉长句子?
理论上，一个句子只要“主谓宾”保住了，想写多长就可以写多长，因为其他加上去的东西，不管怎么加，加在哪个位置，都是修饰。什么是修饰，就是有它没它，句子意思都不会发生实质改变。
如何加修饰? ——一句话，在后面做文章。
It is unveiled by a recent survey initiated by China Daily that in China, 40% more or less of undergraduates investigated feel helpless in the face of whether to graduate for a job or to pursue a higher degree.
图表作文结构——三段论
What-Analys-Conclusion
▲What：描写数据(先写总的趋势，再写重大细节，如最低点、最高点、转折点)
【开头】In this chart, we can figure /Elaborately and luminously, the two pie charts display the proportion distribution/the quantities’ ,
下面请看这幅图表：
选择这幅图表，一是因为我们觉得奢侈品消费是今年的重点，但更重要的原因则是这幅图表实际包含了两种最典型的图表模式——有时间跨度的动态变化图和静止时间点上的占比图。对于这两种不同的图表，描述细节时的所用句型也各有特点。
我们先写动态变化图。请注意英汉语言词序排列的不同：重阳节诗词
【分析】根据图表，奢侈品从2007年的8 billion 增加到2011年的14 billion。同时，增长率从7.5%增长到13.8%(增长幅度为6.3%)。
【英文描述】According to the chart,it ro steadily from 8 billion US dollars in 2007 to 14 billion in 2011.By comparison,over the same period of time,the growth rate skyrocketed from 7.5% to 13.8% (by 6.3%).
【分析结论】（1）描述动态变化用的都是类似句型，变化的常用词为“增加”“减少”，如：
有错必纠增加：increa，ri，grow等；
减少：decrea，drop，decline等。
还可以在动词旁边加上副词表示增加或减少的程度，如：dramatically，gradually，slowly 等。
（2）静态占比图一般要用到“占……比例”，推荐词为：make up,take up,account for,occupy等。如：
①在所有品牌中,Richemont and Louis Vuitton高居榜首，各占10%。
Among the sales of all the brands, Richemont and Louis Vuitton are at the top of the list, accounting for 10% respectively.
②相比之下，Gucci是第二大部分，占9%。
By comparison, Gucci is the cond biggest part, making up 9%.
▲Analys：分析规律，对比(内外因分析，内就是找自己的原因，外就是找社会、媒体的责任)
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慈母多败儿是什么意思【引句】I intend to make some further analys as follows.
译：我想作如下深入的分析。
【分析结论】Actually, it is hardly necessary for us to think twice before figuring out this truth of
译：事实上，我们很容易发现一些事实……。Conclusion：大胆下结论，预测趋势【结尾】
(1) As discusd above, it is not surprising In my opinion, this trend that the number of (n.) dramatically/steadily/slightly/gradually ris/turns down/ levels (领域/地点) will continue for a while in the foreeable future.
译：通过以上分析，我们发现……这不足为奇。我认为，关于……的数据戏剧性地/缓慢/轻微增长/下降/平稳的趋势在可预见的未来将继续下去。
(2) Considering the above analysis, we may reasonably arrive at a (句子). The tendency that (n.) will continually play critical (领域/地点) may be irreversible.
译：鉴于以上分析，我们可以得出结论：……。以后……在……领域继续扮演重要角色的趋势不可逆转。
预测范文
.预测范文1. 大学生每天花在互联网上的时间母亲小传
the average time college students spent on line per day
Evidently shown as the cartoon is, the time spent on Internet by college students shocks us badly. Nearly 50 percent students burn more than 4 hours surfing on line every day. Also, the time allocations from 1-2 hours, 2-3 hours to 3-4 hours take in share of 11%, 18% and 22% respectively. Merely 1% students “enjoy” their virtual time for less than 1 hour per day.
湖北旅游必去十大景点The reasons for college students’ addiction to Internet are complex and, luckily, never too good to be encouraged and never too bad to be discouraged. On one hand, the degree-pursuers are eager to lump together some information available via “.com world” in order to complete a great academic job, for example, to apply for a highest score of their graduation thesis. On the other hand, there are still some errant youths who has indulged themlves in a virtual life compod of many nonn social networks as well as on-line games.
Thus, it’s very reasonable for us to divide this phenomenon into two pieces. Above all, the technology is welcomed to enlarge uful databas to help students do academic works. Meanwhile, to restrain undergraduates from abusing themlves is a critical social issue waiting to be ttled.
预测范文2. 电子图书阅读终端设备对比（网购永远是命题热门，请参看后面的附录“网购”）Directions：
1)The two pie charts below show (a) the three main types of e-book readings, and (b) the proportion that each type of terminal handles in 2009 and 2010.
2)Using the information from the charts, write a short report, which describes the situation in 2009 and compares it with the situation in 2010.
3)Write about 160 words on the ANSWER SHEET.
Elaborately and luminously, the two pie charts display the proportion distribution of the three main types of e-book readings, which change their shares over the period from 2009 to 2010.
In 2009, 48% of e-book readings were promoted by mobile phones, 46% by laptops and 6% via other outlets. Then after only another 365 days, the share of mobile terminals ro sharply by 12% to 60%. Meanwhile, the turnovers contributed by laptops decread symmetrically by just over 11.5% to 34.5%. Actually, it is hardly necessary for us to think twice before figuring out this truth of matter that the proportion of mobile phones’ upsurge is almost equivalent to the one of laptops’slides, which predicts a whole new business trend in the foreeable future, that is, portable mobile terminals, due to their much lower prices as well as convenience, will surely take more market shares in competition. Also, there are still some other outlets holding more or less steady proportion, with a slight drop in share of only 0.5%.
Considering the above analysis, we may reasonably arrive at a conclusion that mobile phones, with their shares having reprented well over 50% of the total cake, are taking more of e-readings than other terminals. The tendency that mobile phone will continually play a critical role in our daily e-reading may be irreversible.
译：这两个饼状图详尽而清晰地表明了从2009年到2010年期间三种类型电子图书阅读的分布状况。
2009年，有48%的电子图书通过移动手机阅读，46%的电子图书通过笔记本电脑，6%的电子图书经
过其他渠道。然而，仅仅过了一年，移动手机阅读者迅速上升至60%，涨幅为12%，与此同时，电脑阅读者减少了11.5%，从46%降到34.5%。实际上，我们很容易发现，移动手机用户数量的涨幅几乎等同于电脑用户数量的降幅，因此可以预言：移动手机用户数量的上升将是不远将来的一种新的商业趋势，也就是说，由于移动手机更加低廉的价格及其方便性，便携的手机终端肯定将在未来的市场竞争中占有更多的市场份额。不可否认，还会或多或少存在其他一些渠道，不过其占有率变化很小，降幅不过0.5%。
鉴于以上分析，我们有理由得出结论：移动手机阅读者将远超其他终端用户，其占比将超过全部的一半以上。移动手机在我们日常电子阅读中将继续发挥重要作用，这一趋势是不可逆转的。
蔚什么什么风预测范文3 中国的老龄化现象（也可以成为为什么要全面放开“二胎”的理由，因为老年
人太多了，而青年劳动力却不足。）
It is described by the chart that the aging problem has shown an irreversible trend in China. As we can e, the proportion that elders above 60 years old take in the whole population has rin up steadily by 0.4%-0.8% on average every year from 11.6% in 2007 to 13.7% in 2011, which has brought a heavy burden to our social curity system.
Generally speaking, the aging society is the strongest proof of a country’s sound development. It is hardly difficult for us to figure out this positive sign in developed countries. However, what we should not ignore is the complicated situation in our motherland. First, China is a vast economic and political entity with the huge population. If there are too many olds but relatively less youngsters, we don’t have enough labors avail able to keep our development sustainable. Second, China’s social curity system, involving insurance mechanism, health care policy, etc., is still in a low-developed level, which can barely meet the needs of vast majority of niors.
Thus, we still have a long hard trail to blaze. Considering that the aging problem is termed as a critical factor to social stability, we have all reasons to be rious about it. Also, our government should reform the curity system immediately to build up a n of justice and equality.
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