感人的英文专题09读后续写-新高考英语写作精讲+解题演示
1.(2023秋·海南高三期末统考)I always believe in the saying: Things will eventually sort themlves out. In the face of difficulty and trouble, I can always persuade mylf to do my work first without enough conditions.
Yesterday, we just moved into a new hou and spent all our money. So we had to go through the rest of the month until my husband got paid.
Today, my daughter, Laurie, went to school. After a while, out-of-breath and tired, our little girl ran back a block becau she’d forgotten to tell me that it was her turn to bring cupcakes for the class-—today! I answered her with a promi to reach her classroom at noon with the cupcakes. She ran to school again, happy.
Two minutes later, imagining Laurie’s trusting smile when I delivered on the promi, I arched in the boxes for baking tins and the mixer. I confidently t them on the counter and then opened the refrigerator, only to discover there were no eggs! How would I make cupcakes without eggs?
I tried to figure out how I could fix the problem. Could I borrow some from neighbors or friends? Could I
buy some on credit(赊账)? It was almost 9: 30 and I was running out of time. A little voice inside me whispered, “Start to do your work first! Things will eventually sort themlves out.” “Okay,” I said to mylf, “I have to try my best to keep my word to my little girl and the worst result that might happen is that I bake ‘cakes’ with no eggs.”
The next step was an act of faith. I turned on the oven and measured all the materials as my little son lined the tins with paper cups. We’d just finished making the frosting(糖霜)when I heard the mailman clo the box at the front door. Of cour! The mailman could nd us a refund (退款)check or something in the mail! I rushed to the door to get the mail and was shocked by what I found.
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There, just under the mailbox, were two boxes of eggs! _________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________
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The phone call was from my friend Bonnie. __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】
There, just under the mailbox, were two boxes of eggs! I looked up and down the street and saw no one. Leaving the egg mystery for the moment, I raced into the hou and got tho cupcakes finished, cooled, frosted, and delivered shortly before noon. Laurie waved and smiled as the teacher clod the door, and I walked back home wondering about the mysterious eggs. I had two-dozen eggs left, so I decided to make some more cupcakes and then the phone rang.
质量体The phone call was from my friend Bonnie. She asked whether I had found some eggs at my front door. About 8:00 or so that morning she met my daughter and learned I would make some cupcakes. She knew we had just moved and that money might be tight for me at that moment. So she bought the most expensive material so that I could keep my promi to my daughter. After hearing that, I expresd my heartfelt thanks to her and told her what had happened. One hour later, I appeared in front of Bonnie’s door, carrying some cupcakes.
【简要分析】
【原文解读】
本文以人物为线索展开，主要讲述作者一家在搬入新家后，花光了所有的钱。所以在女儿提出那天轮到她给班里的同学们做纸杯蛋糕时，作者发现家里竟然连一个鸡蛋都没有了。但是作者想到了一句话“事情最终会自行解决的”，于是就打算做没有鸡蛋的蛋糕。
【续写线索】
收到鸡蛋——吃惊——做纸杯蛋糕——送去学校——接到电话——明白鸡蛋来历——感谢朋友
【段落续写】
由第一段首句内容“就在邮箱下面，有两箱鸡蛋！”可知，第一段可描写作者立即用这些鸡蛋做好了纸杯蛋糕并给女儿送到了学校的事情。
由第二段首句内容“电话是我朋友邦妮打来的”可知，第二段可描写这些鸡蛋原来是朋友邦尼送来的。
【亮点句型】
1.She asked whether I had found some eggs at my front door.(由whether引导的宾语从句)
2.So she bought the most expensive material so that I could keep my promi to my daughter.
(由so that引导的目的状语从句)
2.(2023秋·广东深圳高三期末统考)One day last June, I picked my son up from after school care to take him to the cond of his twice-weekly boxing class. He was tired and hungry and didn’t feel like going. “Can you drive me to the dam (大坝), Mom? I want to find something fun there,” he begged. The Colliery Dam is a pleasant attraction in our town. Beautiful big trees with birds calling, a freshwater rervoir (水库)filled with fish, and acres of paths to wander. But I insisted I had decided that it was important that he finish what he started, and that it was equally important to teach him that sometimes we have to do things even when we don’t feel like it.
Effectively, I was ignoring an eight-year-old’s request for some rest. He went to school five days a week, as
well as before and after school care; he had a tutor once a week, two boxing class and gymnastics on the weekend.However, I felt it justified in that he’s a very active boy and needs ways to get out all his energy.
But on this particular day, he was not going to let me ignore his feelings, however hard I tried. He even declared that he would never go to the boring boxing class and instead take the painting cours he had been longing for. As usual, I rejected, claiming that’s an activity for girls. As we got in the hot car for a 15-minute drive to boxing, he returned to a three-year-old--he screamed and cried and kicked my at.
We pulled into the parking lot, both of us worn out, annoyed and angry. My son took off his at belt and curled (蜷缩)into a ball on the floor. What was I doing? Why was I so determined that he go to boxing? Was I worried that his abnce would reflect badly on me as a parent somehow? Wouldn’t it actually teach him that I heard he was tired and hungry and needed a break and that it was just as well that boys took painting class? “Put on your at belt,” I said. “We’re going to the dam.”
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When we arrived at the dam, I noticed the tension disappear from both of our bodies. ____________
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My son has now quit boxing and is taking painting once a week. __________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】
When we arrived at the dam, I noticed the tension disappear from both of our bodies. “The trees and plants can talk to us if we just listen,” I said. And we both listened. We reached the water’s edge and rolled up our pants and walked in. We built a big hou out of bits of wood, and just sat and enjoyed the peace without saying a word. When we left an hour later, my son was a different person. He was laughing and joking, light and airy as the gentle wind.
My son has now quit boxing and is taking painting once a week. We have decided that weekends are for resting and playing in nature, and not for any more class. He has been in good mood since we came back from the dam: he is helpful, generous and agreeable—in fact, we both are. I am so grateful that I got out of my own head that day and listened. We both learned the importance of a “nature break” that day, and we continue to value the breaks as an important part of our overall health and well-being.
【简要分析】
【原文解读】
本文以人物为线索展开，主要讲述作者在8岁的儿子放学后又去送他上拳击课时，儿子想要作者带着他去看大坝，而且还表示以后都不去拳击课而是要去上绘画课。作者就想方设法说服他，可他就是不愿意。
【续写线索】到达大坝——玩耍——身心放松——做决定——儿子情绪好转——感悟
【段落续写】
由第一段首句内容“当我们到达大坝时，我注意到我们两个身体的紧张感消失了”可知，第一段可描写作者和儿子到达大坝之后的感受。
罗汉果作用由第二段首句内容“我儿子现在已经退出了拳击，每周都要画画一次”可知，第二段可描写作者和儿子现在的情况。
【亮点句型】
巴勒斯坦
1.When we left an hour later, my son was a different person.(由When引导的时间状语从句)
2.We have decided that weekends are for resting and playing in nature, and not for any more class.
(由that引导的宾语从句)
3.(2023秋·山东潍坊高三期末统考)It was an early winter morning. Joan was sleeping soundly when the phone rang in the living room. She rolled over and glanced at the clock on the wall—it was already nine
o’clock.Every weekend morning, her mother had to work part-time in the cafe. Although Joan was still sleepy, she knew she had to get up. After all, she didn’t expect her brother Mike, who was sleeping like a log, to hear the phone. She quietly went over to the living room. When she picked up the receiver, on the other end came the warmhearted greetings,“Good morning, my Dear!”Recognizing the voice from her father, Joan was immediately surrounded by a n of joy and the sleepiness swept away.
Joan’s father was a aman, who rarely came back. Working on the a was really hard.Born in a not-rich family, Joan and Mike felt the stress of life but they were happy to enjoy the family atmosphere. At school, they were straight-A students throughout the academic career and actively in
volved in school activities. They became the pride of the school and the envy of the students.
“Good morning, Dad, what’s up?”Joan said in an easy tone.“I have been very nice recently, my baby. Today is your mother’s birthday, and I have ordered her a cake online and it should come to the hou in one and half an hour. Do remember to take the cake.”
Hearing her father’s words, Joan felt a little ashamed. How she could forget Mum’s birthday!She took a glance at the dirty clothes piled on the sofa and the oily floor that hadn’t been mopped(拖地)for a few days—There was two hours before her mother came back. She calculated they had enough time to prepare a surpri for Mum.
如何清理c盘垃圾Thinking of this, she felt full of excitement.“Well, Dad, now I’m going to wake Mike up.We will give Mum a surpri !”
Joan hung up the phone with Dad, and hurriedly went to Mike’s room to share him her Big Cleaning plan. After listening to Joan, Mike readily accepted her idea.
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The Big Cleaning plan began. _____________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________
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With the cake placed on the table, Mum came in. ______________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________
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The Big Cleaning plan began. Joan collected the clothes from sofa and then put them in the water of a basin. After pouring in some washing liquids, she began to wash them by hand. Realizing the clothes were clean enough, Joan gently squeezed water out and hung them to dry. Meanwhile, Mike was busy mopping the floor back and forth with all his strength, really aware of what hard work his Mum had at home! They had just finished the cleaning when the express boy came to the door.
With the cake placed on the table, Mum came in. “Happy birthday, Mum!”, they greeted in chorus. Confud and surprid, Mum stood frozen. When Mum realized what had happened, a warm curre
nt ro in her heart. Staring at the clean floor and the washed clothes, she could hardly contain her excitement and hugged them tightly, “It is the best birthday gift I have ever had!” Mum said emotionally. Just then Joan took out her smartphone and took a happy video named Mum’s Birthday and nt it to Dad.
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