Step Three 第13讲 第4节

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第4节 根据段落开头语,确定故事结局
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优秀日记大全My Dads Best Flower
I remember my first home was a small apartment on the cond floor with a lovely and spacious balcony.When my mom was busy in the kitchen,she let me stay on the balcony watching the kids playing in the street.On that balcony I played sometimes with my elder sister,Maria.She was ven years old and when my mom was abnt,she was like a mother to me.The balcony was a great hobby place for my father.After his work he ud to grow carnations(康乃馨) in flower boxes.His carnations were red,pink and white,and everyone appreciated them for their beauty.
He took care of them with so much love and devotion.He dealt carefully with his flowers like
a mother taking care of her baby.Many times I sat on the floor of the balcony for hours obrving him and his lovely flowers with patience.He was always doing something on that balcony.He was watering them every day,cleaning the balcony floor,changing the potting soil and when the stems were thick,strong and high enough,he started his improvement operation attentively like a doctor.
My dad took a tiny knife and with his left hand he held the stem of the carnation and measured the height.Then he made a small mark on the stem with his finger.Afterwards he made a sharp cut with the knife,just enough to fit in again of barley(插穗的芽).Then he bandaged the stem with a small bandage.His job was then to water the plants and to take care of them.No one should touch them, he said to Mom.Every day,when he came home from work he went straight to the balcony.
Mom ud to tell us,Do not touch Daddys flowers. For us it was a fascinating experience to watch how the small stems were growing and making flowers.When the carnations had grown big enough,my dad enjoyed watching them every day.We the kids did too.
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One daymy elder 西樵山游玩攻略sisterwho loved Dad very muchhad a great idea.                                                                       
                                                                       
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When my dad湿疹和热疹有什么区别 arrivedhe went as usualstraight to the幸福大家庭 balcony and saw his flowers lyin被蛇咬
g on the floor like dead 心理管理animals.                                                                       
                                                                       
材料分析
故事的内容是这样的:的爸爸在阳台上种康乃馨,并悉心照料,我们一家很欣赏这些花。爸爸再三强调不允许和姐姐碰这些花。
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