热点21 交通问题
交通问题无疑是今年的火爆热点之一，它与我们的日常生活息息相关。今天，选择的2020年中考英语写作预测话题是：交通问题。
【预测题目】
（一）
随着人口的增长和家庭轿车的普及，交通安全问题已成为千家万户关注的焦点。作为初中生的你是怎样去上学的呢？围绕下面的几点要求展开思考，写一篇80词左右的短文。
1. 乘什么交通工具去上学？是公交车，小汽车还是自行车？
2. 乘车时应注意哪些交通规则？
横机要求：结构完整，条理清晰，语言通顺。
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【参考范文】
Do you like riding a bike? I like it very much. I am a student in a middle school. I often go to school by bike, becau it is good for our body. It makes us healthy and saves energy. But we must obey the traffic rules. We should ride a bike slowly and ride it on the right-hand side of the road. If the traffic lights are red, we must stop. Now let’s leave cars and bus, and just cycle.
【解析】
试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文，所给提纲要点清晰，要求明确，话题内容贴近学生生活实际，考生有较大的发挥空间。动笔前要认真审题，勾勒要点，并适当发挥。行文中要注意人称、时态的变化及主谓一致问题。同时注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】
这篇短文涵盖了题目要求的所有要点内容，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。在文章的结构组织上很好地使用了简单句和复合句，使文章自然流畅。同时，使用了一些常用句式和短语，这为文章增色不少。在学习中注意积累，牢记一些常用句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。
（二）
Traffic is now becoming a more and more rious problem in Shanghai. Could you plea write a letter to the mayor to give your advice on how to solve the problem? Write at least 60 words. 上海的交通问题越来越严重，请你给市长写一封至少60个字的信提提建议来解决问题。
棒子什么意思
Suggested points:
上海一本大学有哪些学校* How is the traffic problem in Shanghai at the moment?
* How does the traffic problem affect your life?
* What good advice have you thought about on solving this problem?阿城
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【参考范文】
A letter to Mayor
Respected mayor,
I’m a student from XXX. I’m worried about the traffic in Shanghai. It’s becoming a more and more rious problem, especially during rush hour becau many people go to work in their own cars and some people don’t obey the traffic rules.
I know Shanghai is trying to solve the traffic problem in different ways. However, the problem hasn’t been solved yet. I think it’s a good idea for the government to improve the public transportation so that more and more people would like to take the subway or bus. In addition, the government had better reduce the number of cars by increasing the cost of driving.
I really hope there will be fewer traffic problems in our city.
Best wishes
XiaoH hua
【解析】
1.题干解读：该题目要求包含目前上海的交通问题怎么样；交通问题如何影响你的生活；对于解决这个问题你有什么好的建议。
2.例文点评：例文通过对目前上海的交通问题怎么样；交通问题如何影响你的生活；对于解决这个问题你有什么好的建议等一一讲述。语句通顺，条理清晰，词组，短语，句型等运用灵活。
3.高分亮点：词组：be worried about；a rious problem；obey the traffic rules；solve the traffic problem；in different ways；improve the public transportation；so that；In addition；the cost of driving等。
句型： It’s becoming a more and more rious problem, especially during rush hour becau many people go to work in their own cars and some people don’t obey the traffic rules./I know Shanghai is trying to solve the traffic problem in different ways./I think it’s a good idea for the government to improve the public transportation so that more and more people would like to take the subway or bus./I really hope there will be fewer traffic problems in our city.
【点睛】
首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如be worried about；a rious problem；obey the traffic rules；solve the traffic problem；in different ways；In addition；the cost of driving等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅，如however；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
