写作
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2020-2021上海市田家柄中学
Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic根据所给情景，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格，My favourite school club
我们学校有很多社团，根据自己的情况写一篇文章。
红谷滩湿地公园
What is your favourite school club?
Why do you choo it? (at least two reasons)
What have you learnt from this club?
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【答案】
My favourite school club
There are many kinds of clubs in our school. I like English very much, so I take part in the English Club.
In the club，we speak English as much as possible. We often listen to some English songs or watch movies. It is very uful for us to improve our listening ability. Sometimes we also do team activities. When we do the activities, everyone has to be clear about his or her role and cooperate with all other members. I really have fun working with my group members.
湿疹有传染性吗Joining the English club can not only help me enjoy my free time, but also allow me to make many new friends.
【解析】
1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，写出自己参加的俱乐部的情况，包括选择什么俱乐部，喜欢的理由以及从中学到了什么等，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要紧扣主题，本文应该用第一人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。
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2020-2021上海市松江区
77. Write at least 60 words about the topic “An/A __________ (unusual, ) experience in my life” (以《一次……的经历》为题写一篇不少于60词的短文).
U the following points as a reference.
1. What was the experience?
2. When and where did it happen?
3. Why do you think it was …?
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【答案】
A successful experience in my life
In my memory, it is full of successful experiences. The most unforgettable one happened
at school last term. I was not good at subjects and I couldn’t get good marks in some exams. I felt worried about my study so I decided to work much harder. I listened to the teachers more carefully in class and did more exercis after class. What’s more, I often asked my teachers and classmates for help. Although I met a lot of difficulties, I didn’t give up. Now l have done better in my study.
I believe that nothing is too difficult if I put my heart into it. If I meet with difficulties in my life, I should try my best to overcome them. In a word, only the person who overcomes difficulties will be successful.
【解析】1. 题干解读：这篇作文要求考生以“An/A __________ (unusual, ) experience in my life”为题，根据要点提示，谈一谈自己难忘的经历，属于话题作文。
2. 写作指导：审题可知，这篇短文应以第一人称和一般过去时为主，以一般现在时为辅来叙述。写作时需紧紧围绕提示的要点，要写出经历了什么事，什么时间、什么地点发生的，自己是如何做的，最后谈一谈自己的感受。行文注意主谓一致，保证无语法和单词拼写错误。
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2020-2021上海市上海大学附属学校
草原风光
采购框架协议54. Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “A (An) __________ weekend” (以“一个__________ 周末”为题写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格)
Suggested outlines:
1. What happened to you during the weekend?
2. How did you feel about it?
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【答案】
A busy weekend
I had a busy weekend. On Saturday morning, my friends and I went to the mountains. I
t took us three hours to climb the mountain. On Saturday afternoon, I did some reading and listened to music at home. On Sunday morning, I played chess with my friends. On Sunday afternoon, I cleaned the room and helped my mother do the houwork. I had a busy weekend but I felt very happy.风力作用
【解析】1.题干解读：题目要求写一篇有关周末的文章，字数不能少于60词，围绕提示的要点进行书写。
2.写作指导：首先把题目补充完整，然后围绕建议的两个要点进行书写。由于写的是周末所做过的事情以及感受，时态上应采用一般过去时。
奶奶的回忆四
2020-2021上海市第四教育署
58. Write at least 60 words on the topic: "Double Ninth Festival"
腊鸡腿Suggested questions:
1. Who is Double Ninth Festival for?
2. What do you think of the festival? Why?
3. What do you usually do on the day?
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