临阵磨枪系列03读后续写专题突破
1. （2022湖北八市高三联考卷）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A Precious Prent
Wrinkles of confusion spread across Angela's forehead as she unwrapped the gift from her best friend, Susan.
“L..I thought you could u it for something.^^ Susan's stammered explanation did nothing to help us understand why a twelve-by-eighteen-inchold blue carpet was being prented as a birthday gift
My heart went out to our daughter. Starting out at a new school during her freshmanyear had been a difficult adjustment. Until she met Susan, Angela had experienced little success making new friends.
The murmured “thanks" was barely heard as Angela tried hard not to allow her disappointment to show. She laid the piece of carpet on the kitchen counter, and the two girls headed outside to play with the family dogs.
The next morning, I carried a garbage bag outside. My heart sank as I lifted the lid of the garbage can and saw Susan's carpet lying there. Hesitating only a moment, I picked it up. After giving it a light brushing, I brought it into the hou and put it away in the hall clot.
“Susan invited us to go over to her hou after school tomorrow and she'd like us to meet her foster mom（养母）Several days later Angela announced as, she arrived home. Although her voice carried a so-what attitude, I nd she was plead by the invitation.
The following day we drove to the destination along the winding country road.
注意：1 ,续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式作答。
Paragraph 1.
A kind-looking woman greeted us as we approached the small farmhou
Paragraph 2.
On the way home Angela pleaded me to drive faster
【范文背诵】
Paragraph 1.
A kind-looking woman greeted us as we approached the small farmhou. The hou was shabby but neatly decorated with ud furniture. From the chat with the woman we knew Susan had long been parated from her parents and it was she who adopted little Susan. A warm light shone in her eyes when she revealed her love fbr Susan to me. I came to respect this generous-hearted woman who had opened her home to a young girl and attempted to make a difference in her life. As day light began to fade, I picked Angela up from Susan's home. Paragraph 2.
On the way home Angela pleaded me to drive foster. When we got home, Angela immediately looked fbr the carpet eagerly. She was running to the garbage can when I put the carpet on the table in front of her. In a split cond, she was oveijoyed. She jumped up, screaming in an excited voice, and wrapped her arms around me tightly. Then she gave the carpet a light brush. Watching it hang in the yard, Angela smiled with satisfaction. She called Susan, apologized fbr her behaviour and expresd her sincere gratitude. She said the carpet was the most precious birthday gift she had ever received in the whole world.
【解析】本文以一件礼物为线索展开，讲述了作者 女儿Angela的好朋友Susan送给 她一块小毛毯，作为生日礼物，令他们大为不解，Angela并不喜欢，敷衍了一句“谢谢、之 后就将毛毯丢进了垃圾箱，作者发现后，替她收了起来。后来Susan邀请Angela去她家做 客，当了解了 Susan的家境后，Angela知道到Susan生活不容易，对于自己丢掉ensuingSusan礼物 很懊悔，急忙回家寻找那块毛毯，这时作者把毛毯拿出来，Angela见到丢掉的毛毯又重新 出现，特别开心，为自己的错误行为给Susan抱歉并对她表示真挚的感谢。打开网
【详细解读】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“当我们走近那间小农舍时，一位慈祥的妇女向我们打招呼。”可知，第 一段可描写作者和女儿在Susan借物喻理家做客的过程，并描述Susan的家境。
②由第二段首句内容“在回家的路上，Angela求我开快点。”可知，第二段可描写Angela急 忙回家寻找那件丢弃的毛毯，找到后的喜悦心情，给Susan抱歉并表达真挚的感谢。
2.续写线索：谈话——回家——寻找——发现——高兴——感谢
3.词汇激活
行为类①.谈话:危楼高百尺chat/talk；②.回家：go back home/get home十四的英语；③.寻找：look fbr/ek/arch 情绪类 ①.高兴：be oveijoyed/feel delighted
②.感谢：showing her appreciation/express her sincere gratitude /be grateful 盖浇饭【名师点睛】
[高分句型 1]. I came to respect this generous-hearted woman who had opened her home
忘乎所以的近义词to a young girl and attempted to make a difference in her life.（由关系代词 who 引导的限制性定语从
句）
[高分句型 2]. Watching it hang in the yard, Angela smiled with satisfaction.（非谓语动词现 在分词作状语）
2.（2022湖南衡阳市高三一模试题）
【范文背诵】
She was more focud than ever. Soon, Micah smiled broadly, “Fve got it.” "What do we need?” I asked again. She said the baby bird needed some special bird food. Hearing this, I immediately phoned to place an order. While waiting fbr delivery, Micah added that we needed to name the bird to build a bond. "How about Chance? I think it has a good chance of making it with your help J I propod. She didn't say a word but nodded with a bright smile.
Before long, the bird food was delivered and we fed the bird “Chance“ at once. To our relief, the special food was to its taste. The following weeks, we went to feed and check on Chance every day. One day, Micah shared with me happily her finding that Chance became independent. Looking at her shining face, I was almost moved to tears. I never imagined that the bird Chance became the real chance to rebuild the emotion bridge between us. From then, I decided to accompany her more, just as what we had done to Chance. Company is the best love. （175 words）
