专题15直击2022高考英语 专项突破“读后续写”—灾难故事
(含高考英语冲刺复习计划及方法)
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阅读下面短文，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。翻浆
When I worked as a nur, I was on day duty while my workmates were on night duty. On one shift, I nd something just before going off duty at 11 am. I put down the tray(托盘） on the table and suddenly it fell off the table. At first I thought I had accidentally knocked it over, but then I felt the whole building shaking and heard patients were screaming.
I realized that an earthquake was happening. I quickly caught hold of a nearby patient, who was terribly frightened and pushed her under a bed. And then, I got under another bed mylf. As soon as the earthquake stopped, I decided to try and get the patient safely outside. I carried her out and helped her down to the grassland, where veral oth
er people had gathered.草房子桑桑
Afraid that my other workmates were in danger, I went back inside the building again. When I met Lucy ,our ward sister(护士长），I found her patient couldn't walk. We made a at for the patient by linking our hands and arms, and carried her outside together. We went back through the building to check no one was left behind in our ward(病房）.
Just then, we saw that a man doctor was calling for volunteers to go down to other wards with him to help more people. So we went together. The doctor went ahead of us and found one of the nurs partially covered with rubble（碎石），luckily still alive. Suddenly, the aftershock (余震）struck and the doctor ordered us to leave. The brave doctor intended to stay alone and risk his own life to save the nur.
注意：续写字数应为150词左右。
Paragraph 1: However, without any hesitation, we made up our minds to stay with the doctor and save the nur together.
Paragraph 2: Later in the afternoon, I had time to look around and saw some destroyed buildings.
【答案】However, without any hesitation, we made up our minds to stay with the doctor and save the nur together. 个人工作计划怎么写The doctor encouraged the trapped nur to stay calm, and in the meanwhile ,we focud our efforts on removing the bricks and the rubble that trapped her body. However, sometimes we were faced with falling rubble from time to time, despite which we continued. Gradually and slowly, we lifted the nur out of the rubble. The doctor put the nur on his back and walked out of the building with the help of us. Finally, all, including patients, nurs and doctors, were in the safe place.
Later in the afternoon, I I had time to look around and saw the some destroyed buildings. My beautiful workplace lay beyond recognition, even some in ruins. At the sight of this, I felt a weight in my chest. Suddenly, the gentle wind danced around me, which made me thought of all the people surviving the earthquake with our help. It was our teamwork that made a difference. I held the firm belief that some day in the future my
workplace would came back to life and took on a new look, where we would continue working together to save more patients.
【解析】
本文是以人物为线索，讲述一名护士在值班时碰到了地震，就想方设法把尽可能多的人救出病房和医院大楼。
鞭炮哥【详解】
1.段落续写：
runonce>素性①由第一段首句内容“然而，没有犹豫，我们决定和那位医生一起就那位护士。”可知，第一段可描述作者、护士长和医生一起救那位护士的过程。
②由第二段首句内容“下午晚点的时候，我有时间看看周围，发现了一些被毁了的建筑。”可知，第二段可描述作者在地震之后的所见所想。
2.续写线索：和护士长留下——医生鼓励被困护士——挪开砖头瓦砾——救出被困护士——
感慨劫后余生——期待震后重建
3.词汇激活
行为类
①集中在…上：focud on/fix on
②面对：were faced with/face
③继续：continued /keep on
情绪类
①保持镇定：stay calm/keep calm
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②感觉有压力：felt a weight in my chest/feel stresd
【点睛】
[高分句型1]The doctor encouraged the trapped nur to stay calm, and in the meanwhile ,we focud our efforts on removing the bricks and the rubble that trapped her body.（由that引导的定语从句）
[高分句型2]However, sometimes we were faced with falling rubble from time to time, despite which we continued.（由which引导的定语从句）
[高分句型3]I held the firm belief that some day in the future my workplace would came back to life and took on a new look, where we would continue working together to save more patients. （由that引导的同位语从句和where引导的定语从句）
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Ken Scott kicked off the covers and leapt out of bed at his home in the Rocky Mountain town of Mullan, Idaho. He’d just heard on the radio that the nearby Silver Mountain Resort had been blesd with nearly a foot and a half of new snow. As an experienced ski addict, he didn’t want to miss this big golden opportunity. The conditions are what skiers live for.
When Scott reached Silver Mountain’s locker room, he came across his friend Paul, a former ski instructor who had also been a regular on the slopes for more than two decades. Both of them were exhilarated. Before tting off, it was Paul’s routine to check his phone tightly fixed inside his parka (风 雪外套). For the next hour the pair skied on various runs under a lightly dull sky, making fresh tracks. They were both in a playful mood, laughing as they tackled the steep runs.
