⾼中英语读后续写积累素材积累（⼀）
树⼈中学2019学年第⼀学期⾼⼀故事续写积累（⼀）
⼀、环境描写素材
环境描写分为客观和主观两种⾓度：客观为从环境事物本⾝⼊⼿，主观则从观察者⾓度描写。通常在描写时主客观交替进⾏，主观描写⽐重稍⼤。
客观环境描写：
Part 1 环境描写的adj要求：有声，有⾊，有质感，有味道
the blue sky(蓝天）the songs of birds（鸟鸣）the thundering clouds（电光闪雷鸣）
the fragile flowers (娇嫩的花）;（the dark,raining evening ⾬夜交加的夜晚）the green grass（青草） the fragrant ros（艳丽的玫瑰）; the tting/rising sun(落⽇/冉冉升起的太阳）…
Part 2 环境描写verb （vi&vt）要求
⼀)．Wind （blow/click/howl/wail/roar）
1.A gust of wind blew and parted the drooping branches of the weeping willow like a curtain,…⼀阵风吹，吹起了弯柳的低垂枝条，就像卷起的窗帘。
2.The wind, soft and cold, clicked through tree branches and stirred the bushes that sprinkled the slope.风，轻柔却寒冷，轻点着树枝，搅动着斜坡下的灌⽊丛。
3.A cool breeze blew through the quiet park.凉爽的微风吹拂着寂静的公园。
4.A cold breeze wafted through my hair. (冷风吹拂过我的头发）
The wind was perfect for kite flying, blowing just hard enough to give some lift.
（今⽇正是放风筝的好天⽓，强劲的风⼒带动了风筝的上升。）
⼆)．Water (flow/travel/move/meander/enter)
声⾳：1.At one point, the faint sound of water tumbling through the valley.
在某处，潺潺的的⽔声在⼭⾕中奏响。
颜⾊2.The water was deep blue and sunlight glittered on its looking glass-clear surface.⽔是深蓝⾊
的，阳光在透明的玻璃表⾯闪闪发光。
3.A little way off was a small brook, rushing and sparkling along between green bank.
离此不远，有⼀条⼩溪，在绿⾊的河岸间奔腾闪耀。
4. It murmured in a soft voice like a little innocent girl whispered to her loving mother. 似乎它在温柔低语，就⼀位天真少⼥对着她那慈爱的母亲细细私语。(action, sound, colour)
三)．Sky (stand/ appear/turn)
1.The sky was a curdled gray burdened with lumps of clouds.
天空是浓浓灰⾊，伴着拥挤朵朵云
2.Blue skies stood tall and far 蓝蓝天空⾼⾼耸⽴
主观环境描写：
1.Sb found sth adj/doing/done某⼈发现某物（状态/动作/被）...
2.Sb saw/heard/felt/smelt sth doing/done 某⼈看到/听到/感到/闻到某物（状态/动作/被）
3.It was so adj that we find/feel 它是如此....以⾄于
4.Sth kept sb spellbound/amazed/景物使我如此陶醉/惊讶/
sth held sb entirely in their power景物让我完全惊呆了
5.It looked/emed/appeared/felt like …景物看起来像…
绿萝的资料⼆、场景描写的素材（来⾃原著：追风筝的⼈）
Within an hour, the number doubled, and red, blue, and yellow kites glided and spun in the sky. A cold breeze wafted through my hair. The wind was perfect for kite flying, blowing just hard enough to give some lift, make the sweeps easier.
（放风筝的场景描写，从各个⾓度，⽴体描述）
空中已经挂着⾄少⼆⼗来只风筝，如同纸制的鲨鱼，巡游搜猎⾷物。不到⼀个钟头，这个数字翻了⼀番，红⾊的、蓝⾊的、黄⾊的风筝在苍穹来回飞舞，熠熠⽣辉。寒冷的微风吹过我的头发。这风正适宜放风筝，风速不⼤，恰好能让风筝飘浮起来，也便于操控。
2.The water was a deep blue and sunlight glittered on its looking glass-clear surface. 湖⽔澄蓝，波平如镜，阳光照在湖上熠熠⽣辉。
3. Then I glanced up and saw a pair of kites, red with long blue tails, soaring in the sky. They danced high above the trees on the west end of the park, over the windmills, floating side by side like a pair of eyes looking down on San Francisco, the city I now call home. （场景、⽐喻）硕项湖
我抬起头，望见两只红⾊的风筝，带着长长的蓝⾊尾巴，在天空中冉冉升起。它们舞动着，飞越公园西边的树林，飞越风车，并排飘浮着，如同⼀双眼睛俯视着旧⾦⼭，这个我现在当成家园的城市。
neck. Creeks where Hassan and I skipped stones all spring turned dry, and rickshaws stirred dust when they sputtered by.（场景、⽐喻）
天空⼀碧如洗，阳光像烙铁般灼痛后颈。整个春天我和哈桑在溪流打⽔漂，到了夏天它们也⼲涸了。黄包车嗒嗒⾛过，扬起阵阵灰尘。
5. Somewhere, a branch snapped, an owl hooted. The wind, soft and cold, clicked through tree branches and stirred the bushes that sprinkled the slope. And from below, the faint sound of water tu
mbling through the valley.
在某个地⽅传来树枝劈啪作响声⾳，还有猫头鹰的叫声。寒风微微拂动树枝，吹过⼭坡上灌⽊丛。⽽下⾯，⽔流在⼭⾕淌动，传来阵阵微弱声⾳。
6. By three o'clock, the rain had stopped and the sky was a curdled gray burdened with lumps of clouds. A cool breeze blew through the park.（天⽓）
到三点时，⾬停了，铅灰⾊的天空阴云密布，⼀阵寒风吹过公园。
7. The sun was beginning to t, glittering red through the cracks between the ramshackle buildings.（景象）
太阳开始下⼭，那些摇摇欲坠的房⼦的裂缝中，渗出闪闪的红⾊斜晖。
三、描写时间，动作，⼼理和情感
⼀)、情感好词：
1.喜乐
① The smile on her face shone like a diamond.她脸上的笑容像钻⽯⼀样闪闪发光。
② A smile of understanding flashed across his face.他脸上露出了⼀种理解的微笑。
③ A ripple of excitement ran through them.⼀阵激动声穿过他们。
④ Laughter lingered around the room.笑声在房间⾥萦绕。
⑤ His eyes twinkled with pleasure.他的眼睛闪烁着快乐。
⑥ A wild gaiety（快乐） took hold of her.⼀种疯狂的快乐控制了她。
⑦ Unforgettable were her eyes that shone like diamonds and lips held in a steady smile.令⼈难忘的是她的眼睛像钻⽯⼀样闪闪发光，嘴⾓保持着稳定的微笑。
描写心情好的唯美句子⑧ I was wild with joy.我欣喜若狂。
⑨ I was plead beyond description.我⾼兴得难以形容。
⑩ She wore a shining smile on her face.她脸上带着灿烂笑容。
Her smile lit up the whole room.她的笑容照亮了整个房间。
She shed tears of joy.她⾼兴得流下了眼泪。
Her eyes were sparkling like diamonds.她的眼睛闪着钻⽯般光芒。
She was overflowing with happiness.她洋溢着幸福。
Her flushed face was shining with excitement.她激动得满脸通红。
Joy welled up inside her.她⼼中涌起喜悦。
I was floating on air.我漂浮在空中。
Amument gleamed in his eyes.他眼睛流露出愉快神情。
2.愤怒：
① I was ized by anger.我充满了愤怒。
② He was fuming with rage.他⽓得⼤发雷霆。
③ His anger boiled over.他的愤怒爆发了。
④ He could hardly/scarcely contain his rage.他⼏乎控制不住怒⽕。
⑤ He was breathing fire and fury.他充满着怒⽕。
⑥ His voice trembled with anger.他的声⾳因愤怒⽽颤抖。
⑦ He gave me a look of burning anger.他愤怒地看了我⼀眼。
⑧ He glared at me with burning eyes.他⽤灼热的⽬光怒视着我。
⑨ He flared up at the word.他⼀听到这个字就勃然⼤怒。苹果树的特点
⑩ His face clouded with anger.他⽓得脸⾊阴沉。
3.悲伤烦恼
①He stood silently, tears rolling down his cheeks.他静静地站着，眼泪顺着⾯颊流了下来。声明怎么写
② I feel like I am floating in an ocean of sadness.我漂浮在悲伤的海洋⾥。
③ Her hands were shaking. She was on the verge of tears.她的⼿在颤抖。她快要哭了。
④ H earing the news, so desperate was he that he drowned sadness in wine.听到这
个消息，他绝望地把悲伤淹没在酒⾥。
⑤ She burst into tears and ran out of the room.她突然哭了起来，跑出了房间。
⑥ She sobbed, hiding her face in her hands.她掩⾯哭泣。
⑦ I tried to fight back tears. /My eyes were filled with tears.
我努⼒忍住眼泪。/ 我的眼⾥充满了泪⽔。
⑧ A frown（皱眉）now stood on his face.他皱起了眉头。
⑨ They sat there with glum looks on their faces. 他们坐在那⾥，带着⼀脸忧郁。
⑩ The news cast a cloud of gloom over his face.这消息使他脸上蒙上了⼀层阴影。
He brimmed over with 他满是悲伤……
新年短信
They were immerd in sorrow.他们沉浸在悲痛之中。
清蒸海鱼的做法
The days he was in low spirits.这些⽇⼦他情绪低落。
4.害怕：
①He turned to me, with his eyes full of horror.他转过⾝来，眼⾥充满恐惧。
②Fear slowly creeps upon her.恐惧慢慢地蔓延到她⾝上。
③She was struck with 她感到恐惧……
④She was choked by fear.她因恐惧⽽窒息。
⑤Her face turned pale and stood there tongue-tied.她脸⾊苍⽩地站在那⾥，⾆头打结。
⑥A flood of fear welled up in him. / Fear flooded over him.
他⼼中涌起⼀阵恐惧。/ 恐惧淹没了他。
⑦Her heart beat so violently that she felt nearly suffocated（窒息）.
她的⼼跳得厉害，⼏乎窒息⽽死。
⑧She shook all over, feeling like sitting on pins and needles.
她浑⾝颤抖，觉得如坐针毡。
5. 感动：
① Touched deeply/immenly, we…被深深感动，我们……
农业银行企业② Tears filling her eyes, she offered her heartfelt gratitude.她热泪盈眶，表⽰衷⼼感谢。
③ With tears streaming down her face, 泪⽔顺着她的脸颊流了下来，……
读后续写第⼆段参考范⽂：
The farmer was lucky . A few days later, a young man came to the police station with a lot of journalists, saying that he saw the murderer. It was the police officer who killed the man on the snow! He saw the police officer ud a knife killing the man late in the evening. He was so frightened and ran away. But the young man thought the farmer was innocent. So he took the great courage to expo the real criminal. After the investigation, the young man was right. The police officer was nt into prison and the policeman who beat up the farmer was fired, and the brave young man was regarded as the hero by the villagers.
