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1.Line graph codeproject------------------------Exp1-3-----------------------P2-4
2.Bar chart---------------------------Exp4-5-----------------------P5-6
3.Table-------------------------------Exp6-8-----------------------P6-8
4.Pie chart---------------------------Exp9-11----------------------P9-10
5.F影视培训班low chart-------------------------Exp12------------------------P11-12
6.Map---------------------------------Exp13-----------------------P12-13

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Example 1
The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries .
Summarize the information by lecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The version of teacher  Answer 1
The graph shows the increa in the percentage of people aged 65 or more in Japan, Sweden and the USA.
In 1940 the proportion of people over 65 years stood at only 5% in Japan, approximately 7% in Sweden and 9% in the US. However, while the figures for the Western countries grew to about 15% in around 1990, the figure for Japan dipped to only 2.5% for much of his period, before rising to almost 5% again at the prent time.
In spite of some fluctuation in the expected percentages, the proportion of older people will probably continue to increa in the next two decades in the three countries.A more dramatic ri is predicted between 2030 and 2040 in Japan, by which time it is thought that the proportion of elderly people will be similar in the three countries.
Overall, it indicates that the percentage of elderly people in all three countries is expected to increa to almost 25% of the respective populations by the year 2040.
Example心境平和 2
The graph below shows the number (thousands) of people taking part in four kinds of sports in a particular region between 1985 and 2005 .
Summarize the information by lecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
NOTE
giada①表将来:
...%... Be (is/was) predicted to increa/decrea
    Be expected to ,,,
    Be planned to ..
    Be projected to ...
星期三的英语
②Introduction 改写题目
Origin:The graph below shows the number (thousands) of people taking part in four kinds of sports in a particular region between 1985 and 2005 .
Rsimimevi:①The line graph reflects how many people participated/joined in four types of sports in a specific area from 1985 to 2005.
②The line graph illustrates how the number of people who joined in four types ......changed during 1985, to 2005.
③line graph步骤
第一段改写
分两段主体段,主体段抓细节描写,不能主观臆断添油加醋,看到什么说什么
按照从左到右,从上到下的顺序描写
不要一条一条描写,必须先分类。尽量分两类或三类,一类一主体段
分类的依据很多,如同是上升或下降趋势
最后一段得结论。结论尽量不要像开头那样笼统,也不要像具体内容那样详细。
注意时态,单位
The version of teacher  Answer 2
The curve of tennis overtook that of rugby after 1995 at 190thousand ..
Main body 写作顺序 分段特征
Rugby + tennis :
The curves of rugby and tennis illustrate totally opposite trends. The former/latter curve began at 240 thousand, the largest figure in 1985, and from then on, it experienced a dramatic decrea/decline/downtrend throughout the whole period and ended at 50 thousand as the same as badminton. Converly/in contrast, around 150 thousand people played tennis at the beginning of this period, besides, the latter curve ro slightly,overtaking that of rugby after 1995 at rough 190 thousand and reaching the peak at 230 thousand by the end of the period. 
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As for the number of basketball and badminton, they display a similar tendency. Both of them remained the same at 75 thousand and 50 thousand respectively/, with the former figure surpassing that of rugby after 2004/.
Conclusion
Overall/in summary, the number of tennis took the lead in 2005 , while a minority of people would like to choo other three kinds of sports.
NOTE
Native expression
①有一个平缓的上升            The curve had/experienced a steady increa/growth : adj. + n.
平缓地上升                The curve incread steadily ....
多数的---少数的                Major---minor
②起点                        stand at , begin at
③上升                        go up , increa , ri to , jump , climb up , grow
④下降                        go down , decrea , dilp to , decline , plummet
⑤波动程度:波动:            dramatic , sharp , remarkable , significant , shark
anonymous proxy平稳:            slight , moderate , gradual , steady , stable
⑥交点:                    bbc听力下载overtake , surpass , exceed
⑦终点:                    end at

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