BookⅡ Unit3 Computers
BookⅡ Unit3 第7课时 写作
【考点要求】想象类作文的书面表达。
【教学目标】学会想象类作文的书面表达。
1、santa monicasignal__________ _____ 2、type_________
3、2016年2月13日with the help of____________ 4、in a way _____________
5、appearance________ 6、explore______________
一、如何写想象性作文?
这类写作没有固定的结构或格式,不给糖就捣蛋英语内容也不受限制,你需要放飞想象的翅膀,可以对你理想中的未来事物的形态、构造、性质、功能等进行大胆的设想cgi是什么,并进行科学的描述。
[黄金表达]
1.引入:首先引出你要写的事物。
...plays a very important role in our daily life.
...is of great importance/help/u in our daily life.
2.陈述背景知识:介绍它什么时候产生,以及至今为止
有哪些主要发展阶段。
Since the earliest times ...
The history of ...goes back to ...
Over ...years ago ...
By the beginning of this century ...
After this ...
3.目前的状况
Recently, there has been renewed interest in ...
Recent developments in this field include ...
Other exciting developments have been …
4.前景
Many experts predict that ...
Some forecasts predict that ...
The field of ...has enormous potential.
5.结论
总结要点,再次强调它为什么那么吸引人,高考培训引人关注。
In conclusion ...
Thus, it can be concluded that ...
Obviously,we can draw the conclusion that …
二、佳作观摩
假定你设计出了一款新机器人dalmatian——家用机器人,请你介绍一下其主要功能。可参考下面的内容:
1.可以在固定的时间做饭pale,做饭时间可以根据个人需要进行调整;
2.可以陪老人聊天、下棋、做运动等;
3jk罗琳名言.及时处理突发事件,例如在老人突然病倒时及时拨打求救电话等。
注意:1.词数100~120;
2.内容可适当发挥,注意行文连贯。
①Here is a new type of robot — the houhold robot. ②It can help us in many ways.
③Firstly, it can watch over the old while we are not at home and can also accompany (陪伴) the old in having a chat, playing chess, and doing exerci.
④Secondly, it can cook meals at a fixed time which can be adjusted according to individual needs.
⑤Thirdly, it is very easy to deal with the difficulties we meet. ⑥For example, if an old man falls ill all of a sudden, all at once the robot can give the doctor a call for help.
⑦In a word, it would be of great help for you if you own such a robot.最新韩国电视
3、亮点分析
第一段:开篇点题总领全文,引出写作的话题与内容;
第二、三、四段:分别进行细节描述,每一段介绍了一种具体情况;
最后一段总结全文。
亮点一:本文想象合理,段落层次分明,语句运用通顺,结构完整,句与句之间使用了恰当的连接成分,段与段之间过渡自然,是一篇很好的习作。
亮点二:通过使用连接词firstly(句③),condly(句④),thirdly(joan osborne句⑤)使机器人的功能介绍条理化,层次分明,使人一目了然。
亮点三:通过适时举例(句⑥)来解释机器人的第三个功能,形象具体,更有助于人们对家用机器人的了解。