2017 春考英语作文
VI. Guided Writing
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Directions: 超越自我Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chine.
假设你是明启中学的学生王磊，你的好友李宏今年暑假将赴英国参加为期两个月的海外交流活动。如果选择主办方安排的住宿，他需要额外支付较高的费用。但他也可以通过为当地社区养老院提供每月三十小时的义工 服务，获得在养老院免费住宿的机会，李宏通过邮件向你征求意见。写一封回信，内容须包括：
1.你对此事的明确态度；
2.你的理由。
Writing 1:
Dear LiHong,
Hearing that you have access to participate in an overas communication activity in Britain which will last two months, I'm now writing to extend a helping hand, hoping that my suggestions that you should choo working as a volunteer thirty hours every month for the local community nursing home to gain an opportunity to stay in it for free may be beneficial to you to some extent.
There are three main reasons accounting for my proposal. First and foremost, only by working as a volunteer can you attain a free stay. Apparently, in contrast with the accommodation arranged by the host, you can save a substantial amount of money. In addition, staying at a community nursing home, not only can you be expod more to real life in society and enhance your social experiences, thus helping you to get more mature, but your arrival will add colors to the atmosphere and reduce the burdens there as well. Last but not least, there is no denying that the interaction with the elderly can polish up your socializing skills as well as rai your awareness to cooperate with strangers, which will contribute to your comprehensive and coordinated development. As an old saying goes, 'We can gain both things at the same
time.' So why not choo it?
I genuinely hope that you will take my suggestions into consideration. Best wishes that you will have a good time there. It is a golden chance that you will gain in summer vacation. In short, Enjoy yourlf.
Yours sincerely,
WangLei
Writing 2:
Dear Li Hong,
Ifs good news to learn that you are going to participate in the 2-month overas exchange program in Britain. And I have also learnt you are hesitating over the choice of accommodation between the two, one arranged by the organizer, for which you need to pay extra high cost and one provided by the nursing home free of charge as long as you do the volunteer job for 30 hours every month there.
From my perspective, it will be of great benefit to you if you choo the latter and my reasons are as follows. The first that immediately comes to my mind is that you can have a better understanding of Britain. By doing the voluntary work, you have direct contact with the old people there, thus expod more to local culture and people, let alone improving your spoken English. Moreover, it is a golden chance for you to be in contact with society to accumulate social experience, helping you get more mature and experienced in the future campus and work life. Of cour, it is lf-evident that you can save a substantial amount of money, relieving the burden of your parents.
My dear fellow, really hope that you will take my suggestions into account and meantime enjoy your stay there. Do share your photos and keep me posted about your life there!
2017 上海秋考英语作文bestofme
VI. Guided Writing:
Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instruction
s given below in Chine. 你是明启中学的李华，你校学生会即将组织一次徒步活动，己在校园网发布方案，征求师生的修改意见。你 需要写一封邮件，包含以下两点：
1.提出你觉得需要改进的地方；
2.需要改进的原因。
主题 | 发现上海 |
时间 批把 | 5圣诞 英语月1日（周日）下午3点 |
路线 | 从人民广场出发，途经南京东路，到达外滩（the Bund）,全程徒步，之后再徒步原路返回 人民广场。 |
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Writing 1:
Dear Sir,
Hearing the news that our Students Union will organize a walking program and has put the drafted plan on the Internet, I'm writing to air my thoughts about it as follows.
To begin with, from my point of view, the time planned is not appropriate. As is known to all, the first day of May is the first day of holiday in China so that the center city of Shanghai is sure to be crowded on that day. So the date had better be postponed till the weekend before or after the holiday, thus ensuring that we students have a good taste of beauty of Shanghai. Moreover, I hold the idea that the route should be revid. Personally, after approaching at the Bund, it's not a desirable option to go back according to the originate route. Instead, we students can go to other places of interest to go back to school, which guarantees a golden opportunity of witnessing the beauty of Shanghai.
In a nutshell, all the above thoughts are bad on my personal perspective and there may still leave something to be desired, but as far as my strong wish to contribute to the program is concerned, I would be much obliged if you could take my suggestions into account.
Writing 2:
Dear Sir,
I have learnt from our school network that the Student Union is planning a walking program in an attempt to discover more of Shanghai, which will start at 3, May 1st from People's Square, passing Nanjing Road, to the Bund and then go back the same way to where we t off.
游戏制作学校I applaud the program with the theme "Discover Shanghai,, for us students to learn more about Shanghai. However, in my humble opinion, the date and the route need to be reconsidered. First of all, May 1st is a national holiday, which will always witness as of people in downtown areas, let alone the world famous places we choo for our hike. To e and discover more of Shanghai, we can choo a weekend that does not coincide with national holidays, to ensure that we can have a good taste of beauty of Shanghai. What's more, the route back to People's Square the same way ems a bit dull. Arriving at the Bund, I suggest walking down the road to Yu Garden, a place of interest full of history where we can indulge ourlves in the taste of Chine traditional culture, architecture and cuisine. Then we can go along Henan Road till Fuzhou Road, the culture street of Shanghai with its unique buildings, where we will encounter various first-class pr
ofessional bookshops in China. And finally we will soon find ourlves in People's Square again.ya ya ying
With the revision, I am sure we students can enjoy more and discover more of Shanghai, and the hike will be a trip to remember for us. Do hope the hiking program a success!
2018 上海春考英语
scott caanVI. Guided Writing
Directions: cleansingfoamWrite an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chine.
假设你是明启中学的学生王磊，你校计划引进一个机器人担任餐厅服务员或者图书馆管理员，并在英语贴吧 征求学生意见，你很感兴趣，决定回帖响应，你所写的内容应包括
1.你认为机器人适合担任的一个岗位，二选一；
2.通过比较，阐述你选择的理由，可以从工作效率、服务范围等方面进行表述。
Writing 1:
Word came that a brand-new robot with the latest technology had been introduced to improve the rvice quality of our school. Library and canteen become the two places where the robot can fully perform its functions. As to whether it should rve as a waiter in our school canteen or as a librarian in our library, our opinions vary from person to person. From my point of view, I strongly support that school canteen is the ideal place for the high-tech robot.
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