题型六 读后续写
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Writing 1
【文章大意】
本文讲述了男孩离家去上大学后家里的狗Poppy闷闷不乐,他父母为了缓解Poppy对男孩的思念,找了一只小狗给她作伴的故事。文章前三段叙述了男孩离家时和父母及Poppy的依依不舍之情;第四、五段描述了男孩离开后家里变得很安静,Poppy变得闷闷不乐,对任何事情都提不起兴趣hdx,男孩的父母很担心她;第六、七段讲述了他们想到办法,为Poppy找来一只小狗陪伴她,并仔细描述了Poppy与小狗见面时的情景。
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第一段开头:父亲打开盒子,一只可爱的小狗出现了。结合原文信息及首句提示可知,接下来应该描述Poppy见到小狗后的反应以及两只狗的相处。
第二段开头:几周后,男孩从大学回到家。根据上文信息以及首句提示可知,接下来应该描述男孩见到父母和Poppy后的兴奋以及看到小狗时的惊讶。
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Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared. Poppy jumped with joy at the sight of the little dog. She lowered her head to watch it curiously. Then she became so excited that she accidentally knocked over the box in an attempt to get clor. With the box tipping over,sweater的音标 out came the little one, who was not shy and instantly got familiar with Poppy. It didn’t take long before the two played around the hou, cheerfully running after each other.
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A few weeks later, the boy upsidedownarrived home from the university. He had been missing his parents and Poppy since it was the first time that he had been away from home for such
a long time. When the boy caught sight of Poppy, he went rushing toward the dog and bent down to give her a big hug. Suddenly, the boy noticed the little dog. "Wow! Who is this?" His parents smiled at the look of surpri on his face. "It’s Poppy’s new companion," said Mom.
Writing 2
【文章大意】
本文主要讲了一个健忘但富有爱心且友好的妈妈的故事。文章第一段总述了作者的妈妈是一个健忘但富有爱心、友好的人duhai,她的这些性格特点在作者一家的一次出游中表现得淋漓尽致。第二段叙述作者一家准备开车去看望祖父母并欣赏沿路风景,作者和自己的兄弟David向伙伴们告别,但一家人在出发两小时后又返回来拿东西,这是妈妈健忘的表现之一。第三段叙述了妈妈健忘的表现之二:当爸爸睡着,由妈妈驾车的时候,作者和David怕妈妈把他们落下,因此去加油站的卫生间时必须要留一个人放哨才行。第四段叙述了在作者一家出行几天后的某个晚上,survey是什么意思由于找不到有空房间的酒店,妈妈提出找一个陌生人的后院搭建帐篷暂住一晚的提议,但被作者他们否定了。这体现了妈妈友善、可爱的性格特点。
【写作指导】
本篇续写信息点众多,给考生提供了广阔的发挥空间,考生可从多个角度展开。比如续写第一段提出作者他们记起了帐篷,下文就可以围绕帐篷展开话题。当然也可以按照妈妈健忘以及友好的性格特点,预测可能会发生的一些有趣的事。在出游中他们也可能还会产生一些问题,下文就可以叙述如何解决这些问题。因为续写第二段首句表明他们顺利经过了几个州,而且沿途欣赏到美丽的景色,那么下文就可以叙述在欣赏美丽的景色过程中,在他们家人之间发生的美好而有趣的事。这里就需要考生发挥足够的想象力。文章第一句"I had an interesting childhood"和最后一段相呼应,故无论如何发挥,文章最终体现的主题应该是亲情和爱。
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The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we brought with us. We were happy to e it still packed, and hoped it would be packed forever. However, the thing came to its turning point. Mom lost Dad in the gas station when we were sleeping. What’s wor, as t
he dark was approaching, we met the same trouble again. Fearful as Mom was, she decided to camp near the road waiting for Dad. The wind cried widely like a monster. Tears took control of us. Mom embraced us tightly singing a soft song, which really made us relaxed. We didn’t meet Dad in the next few days, but we felt comfortable staying with Mom.
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We drove through veral states and saw lots of sights along the way. The tent became a clor friend then. Every time we camped, Mom would read a book or sing a soft song. The warmth of her arms never faded away in my memory. Though she was forgetful, laughter accompanied us along the way. We finally met poor Dad at our destination. This trip made me realize that love can always light the way for people in the dark.
Writing 3
【文章大意】
本文主要讲述了Mac在骑车前往阿拉斯加的途中被一头狼追赶的故事。考生要注意几个关键信息和情节变化:Mac与朋友骑行——朋友车坏,让Mac先行——Mac独行,欣赏风景——被狼追赶,最初误以为是狗——心跳加速,朝狼喷洒喷雾——狼后退,一分钟后又赶上,咬破帐篷包——再次喷洒喷雾,狼更快地追赶——Mac向经过的汽车求助,同时不敢减速——Paul和 Becky开车路过,发现险情——Mac听到汽车声,拦下汽车,而狼就离他十几码远。
【写作指导】
结合两段的开头,第一段:汽车突然停在Mac前面;第二段:几分钟之后,另外两个骑行者也到了。开始构思,第一段中汽车停下后会发生什么?汽车里的Paul和Becky会有什么反应?下车帮忙还是紧闭车门袖手旁观?如果帮忙,以何种方式?赤手空拳还是有防狼工具?施工许可证管理办法此时,Mac,Paul和Becky他们各自的心态如何?恐慌?害怕?勇敢?还是激动?结合第二段可知,此时,他们处在僵持状态(deadlock)的可能性最大。第二段中提到另外两个骑行者到来,他们是谁?是Mac的朋友还是其他陌生人?根据the other可以考虑是Mac的骑行朋友。他们来了之后怎么办?狼会攻击这么多人吗?有没有可能会有更多的狼来?还有没有其他经过的车?考虑情节发展,个人认为只有一头狼,最好的发展应该是它最终逃之夭夭,消失在远方。
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The car abruptly stopped in front of him. Paul and Becky got out of the car immediately to offer help. But with their bare hands, they didn’t dare to fight with the wolf. However, they still approached the wolf bravely. At the same time, the wolf also noticed them and turned to look at them, shouting loudly at them. Mac then jumped down from the bicycle2015高考题及答案 and was ready to fight against the wolf. That reached a deadlock.
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A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived. They found the dangerous situation. Mac’s friends also jumped down from their bicycles and joined the fight with the wolf. More and more cars stopped. Some drivers took out the sticks from the cars, and some took out the knives towards the wolf. Just at that time, the wolf might feel the threats from the people, starting to withdraw. Soon, it ran away and disappeared in the distance.
Writing 4
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But the helicopter didn’t come back again, and the day became darker.island是什么意思 The slim hope in Jane’s eyes faded away. Hopelessness and guilt quickly flooded over her. "Is there any chance for me to survive? I shouldn’t have left Tom. It’s all my fault," Jane whispered, with tears silently rolling down her face. As time went by, the night finally fell. Running out of energy and patience, Jane gave up her walking along the stream and went to sleep.
