第二部分 专题十六
短文改错(一)
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(2016·河北衡水中学高三七调)
Dear Mandy，
I'm not doing well in my lessons at school, especial in math. My dad says I must try hard becau he wants me go to university. He thinks I'm lazy, but it's not true. I work really hard, often study late into the night! I've tried to talk to my mother, but she always said I have to work as hard like my brother does. My brother doesn't study very hard, and he always gets excellent grades. It's not fair!
The only thing I like it is art. My teacher says I'm the best student she's had for year. When I told my dad, all he said was, “You mustn't waste your time in art. You must focus your mind on your lessons！” I'm feeling quite puzzling as to what to do now. Would you plea help me out? Thanks a lot!
Yours sincerely，
Lisa
1．第一句中的especial改为especially 考查副词。修饰动词doing，作状语，应用副词形式。
2．第二句中的me后加to 考查固定用法。 do sth.想要某人做某事。
3．第四句中的study改为studying 考查非谓语动词。句中已有谓语动词work，且逗号后无连词，因此study应用非谓语动词形式，又因为笑 冰心I与study之间为主动关系，故用现在分词studying作伴随状语。
4．第五句中的said改为says 考查时态。主语为she，根据always及全文时态可知，此处应用一般现在时。
5．第五句中的like改为as 考查固定结构。as…as…和……一样……。
6．第六句中的and改为but 考查连词。根据句意“我弟弟学习不是很努力，但他总是获得优异的成绩。”可知，前后两个分句之间为转折关系。
7．第八句中的it去掉 考查句式结构。本句中I like为省略了关系代词的定语从句，修饰先行词the only thing，is为系动词，art为表语，it是多余成分，故删去。
8．第九句中的year改为yearsonmonday 考查名词的数。for后常接时间段，year为可数名词，应用复数形式。for years多年来。
9．第十句中的in改为on/over 考查固定搭配。/over sth.在某事上浪费某物(钱财、时间等)。
the lady in my life10．第十二句中的puzzling改为puzzled 考查形容词。此处表示“我感到很困惑”，应用过去分词形式的形容词，puzzled感到困惑的；puzzling令人困惑的，主语常为物。
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For a brighter future, numerous student say goodbye to their family and friends in China and boarded a plane to study abroad. As far as I'm concerning, the advantages of studying abroad outweigh its disadvantages as if they can fit in with the life there. Xie Lei is a perfect example.
2012 was the time that Xie Lei first went to study in England and come across countless difficulties. However, she soon got ud to the life in England and admitted to a world－class university there. Now she has the excellent job in Shanghai due to my international education background.
From what Xie Lei has experienced, I can safe draw the conclusion that it's wi to study abroad as long as students are able to cope with the difficulties.
1．第一句中的南昌新东方官网student改为students 考查名词的数。根据句中的长沙法语培训numerous可知，其后的名词应该使用复数形式。
2．第一句中的boarded改为board 考查时态。根据句中的say goodbye to和语境可知，应该使用一般现在时。
3．第二句中的concerning改为concerned 考查固定搭配。as far as sb.be concerned表示“在某人看来”。
4．第二句中的最后一个as去掉 考查连词。如果他们能适应国外的生活，出国留学是很有好处的。as if仿佛，不符合语境。
5．第四句中的that改为when 考查定语从句。句中的time是先行词，应用when引导定语从句并在从句中作状语。
6．第四句中的come改为came 考查时态。根据上文的jwlwent和and可知此处也应用一般过去时。
7．第五句中and好听的英文名字女后加was 考查时态和语态。她不久被世界一流的大学录取，所以应该使用一般过去时的被动语态。
8．第六句中的the改为an 考查冠词。本句中的job是首次出现，而且表泛指，所以应该使用不定冠词。
9．第六句中的my改为her 考查代词。本句的主语是she，所以句中与she对应的形容词性物主代词应该是her。
10．第七句中的safe改为safely 考查副词。空后的谓语动词是draw，应该用副词修饰动词。
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(2016·黑龙江大庆实验中学月考)In order to promote participation in outdoor exerci, our school had organized an activity to climb the West Mountain on April 10. The moment we arrived at the foot of a mountain, we t out for the top in high spirit. We supported each other to pass the rocky areas on the cour of the climb. Laughing and cheering, we eventually reached the summit, there we were greeted by the bright sunshine and fresh air. Viewing from the top, the city was extremely beautiful. This event was very benefit, for
not only we take a break from our heavy school workload, but we also learned what to cooperate. Therefore, we strongly suggest that similar events are held every year!
1．第一句中的had去掉 考查时态。全文基本时态为一般过去时，且由本句的时间状语on April 10可知，此处应用一般过去时。
2．第二句中的a改为the 考查冠词。此处特指“我们去爬的那座西山”，应用定冠词the修饰。
3．第二句中的spirit改为spirits 考查固定短语。in high spirits兴致勃勃；情绪高涨。
4．第三句中的on改为in/during 考查介词。句意：在爬山的过程中，我们互相帮助经过了岩石区。“在……过程中sky angel”paradoxically应用介词in或during。
5．第四句中的there改为where或在there前加and 考查句式结构。可将此处看作定语从句，先行词为the summit，关系词在从句中作地点状语，应用where引导，故可将there改为where；也可将此句看作是并列句，因此需要在there前加连词and。
6．第五句中的Viewing改为Viewed 考查非谓语动词。the city与view之间为被动关系，应用过去分词作状语。
7．第六句中的benefit改为beneficial 考查形容词。此处位于系动词was之后，作表语，应用形容词形式。
8．第六句中的only后加did 考查倒装结构。当not only置于句首时，应用部分倒装，即将助动词提至主语前，又因为时态为一般过去时，故在we前加did。
9．第六句中的what改为how 考查连词。此处表示“我们还学会了如何合作”，表方式，应用how。
10．第七句中的are改为be 考查虚拟语气。suggest在此意为“建议”，其后的宾语从句应用虚拟语气，从句谓语动词应用“(should＋)动词原形”结构，其中should可省略。
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One day, I was walking in the park while I caught sight of a wallet on a bench. Clearly, so
meone has left it there by accident. I picked it up and checked the contents. Inside them, I found some money and a card with a phone number. Believing that the owner would be worried, I immediate tried the number. A man answered for it in an anxious voice. Heard that I had his wallet, he sighed on relief and told me he would return right away. Ten minutes late, the man arrived. After confirming he was owner, I handed the wallet back to him. With his thumb down, he expresd his gratitude to me repeatedly. Seeing the smile on his face, I felt happy that I was able to help.
