专题限时集训(十九) 读后续写
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(对应学生用书第193页),,)
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(2017·浙江吴越联盟二模)
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
“Will you take me to go trickortreating，Chad？”Zoe asked when I came home from school.My little sister was already wearing her fairy wings and taking a wand(魔杖)．
“Mom's taking you，”I said.“Mommy slipped on the mat and hurt her ankle，”my sister said.Mom limped(一瘸一拐地走)down the hallway just then，and her left ankle was wrapped in a bandage.“I'll be OK sitting in the car.But could you take Zoe from door to door？She's really been looking forward to Halloween．”“I've been looking forward to it，too，”I said and didn't want anything out of expectation．
I had to admit，though，Zoe was more excited than I was.She'd been trying on her costume(化妆服)every day for a week.“I'm a fairy，”she said，twirling(旋转) around.“I have plans with my friends，”I said.Our plans consisted of racing around the neighborhood to collect as much candy as we could，not bothering too much with costumes．
“Plea，Chad，”Zoe begged.“Fine.”There would be my chance for fun and candy，I thought.Zoe twirled on her toes.Later，Zoe walked to the first hou while I hung back.“I don't want anyone to know that I'm taking you to go trickortreating，”I'd said to her.I'd told my friends that I couldn't hang out with them tonight，but I didn't tell them why，being afraid of being laughed at．“Take a candy bag，”said Mom sitting in the car at the end of the block.When I turned back，Zoe was already 15 steps ahead.“Zoe，wait！”Zoe stopped and turned around.“Hurry，hurry，”she said.I ran to catch up.Looking after her would
be more work than I'd expected.
注意：
1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2．应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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enhanced是什么意思“Trick or treat！”she said at the next hou.
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On our w ay to the car，w e ran into my friend Jeff on the side w alk.
【写作指导】
infrastructure中文原文讲的是妹妹请求哥哥带她去玩万圣节的游戏，哥哥刚开始因为和朋友
们有约定而不愿带她，后来禁不住妹妹的再三请求而决定带她玩。根据第一段
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的提示句可知，本段的主要内容应该是妹妹到邻居家“Trick or treat”的过程的描
述。而第二段则是遇到了哥哥的朋友之后的故事。第一段描述情景较为简单，
但是第二段的故事一定要和原文中哥哥的心理变化保持一致。
【参考范文】
“Trick or treat！”she said at the next hou.The door opened.A woman
stepped out.“Aren't you so cute？”Zoe held up her candy bag.“Are you
alone？”the woman asked，looking around worriedly.“No，”Zoe pointed a finger
at my hiding place in the bushes.“Oh，no，”I thought.She's going to announce me
to the world.“Can he have a candy，too，plea？”Zoe asked instead.The woman
laughed and gave her some more candies，which was out of my expectation．People's faces lit up as soon as they saw Zoe.
On our w ay to the car，w e ran into my friend Jeff on the side w alk.“This is
how you spent Halloween？” he said.But he didn't laugh at me.On the contrary，he
said I was lucky to have a lovely sister.“You became a Halloween hero becau of looking after your sister.”“Yes！”I said I was Zoe's superhero now.As we rode back home，Mom smiled at me.“And did you have fun？”“Actually，I did，”I said.Halloween with Zoe had turned out to be pretty magical.
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B【导学号：38144070】
(2017·浙江温州中学期中)
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
The eightyearold Carol lived with her father David，mother May and elder brother Rob.The little family happily lived in a beautiful village surrounded with beautiful nature．The village was at the foot of a mountain，with beautiful views of the snowy mountain.The family survived on growing asonal plants and trees.Their life is totally surrounded by nature and beauty.
While they lived a very happy life，Carol did not love the beautiful atmosphere of the village.She really wanted to move into the city and enjoy the city life.She wanted to shop，move around the city，watch movies，and eat in fantastic restaurants and cafes，etc.
However，there was hardly any chance that Carol's family moved to the city as they had everything i
n the village.
One day，Carol fell asleep during the early noon and she had a sound sleep.Of cour，she had a strange dream．She saw her grandmother in her dream as a fairy and her decead grandmother granted her a wish.Carol requested her that she would love to enjoy the city life as she always desired.
Grandmother understood the desire of Carol，but still wanted to convince her that the peaceful village life is better than the city life．
She told Carol，“Baby，you cannot have access to fresh fruits and vegetables from plants as you have at your home.You cannot breathe fresh air.You cannot play with animals.You can hardly find any trees.You will not find peace as you e here！Do you still want to go to the city？”
Without hearing the concerns，Carol asked her grandmother to grant the wish.Grandmother granted her wish but with a condition.Carol was told that she would only have 6 hours to spend in the city.Later，she would return back to the
village.Carol agreed.
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1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2．应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；journey的用法
4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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Carol then found herlf in the city w ith her friends.
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Carol's brother Rob w as calling her for lunch and Carol w oke up.
【写作指导】
原文记述了一个生活在山村的女孩渴望过上城里人的生活的故事。原文的
后半段写这个女孩有一天睡着了。而之后的描写都是梦境。根据原文的结构以
及第一段的提示句，本段应该是描述这个孩子梦中在城市生活的故事。而第二
段的提示句暗示本段应该描写梦醒了之后发生的事情。
【参考范文】
Carol then found herlf in the city w ith her friends.Carol and her friends went to
watch movies．After that they ate delicious food in a restaurant and shopped in a
huge mall.Carol was happy that she had the chance to experience the life in the
city.Yet at the same time，she understood that everything told by her grandmother
was true in the city.There was no peace and no silence；the city life was fast and
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rushing.The air quality is not satisfying.She could hardly find any animal or even a
delicious什么意思tree.
Carol's brother Rob w as calling her for lunch and Carol w oke up.She recalled
what happened just now in her dream and realized that her life in the village with her
family was far more wonderful than the city life.Carol understood that she was having
a more joyful life.She shared her dream with her family while enjoying the fresh fruits
and vegetables，and they laughed together.Carol also developed love for plants，animals and beautiful nature．
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阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
There were three boys，Martin，Tom and Jack，who like camping very much.One day，Jack told Martin and Tom that he knew a very good place to go.They t off a new adventure together when they got ready.
The light from the campfire brightened the darkness，but it could not prevent the damp cold of Denn
is's Swamp(沼泽地) creeping into their bones.It was a strange place．Martin and Tom wished that they had not accepted Jack's dare.They liked camping，but not near this swamp．
“So，” Martin asked as they sat watching the hot coals.“How did this place get its name？”
“Are you sure you want to hear it? It's a scary story，” warned Jack.
dynamically“Of cour！” cried out Tom.“If there were anything to be scared of，you wouldn't have chon this place ！”
“OK，but don't say I didn't warn you，”said Jack，and he began his tale.
Way back in time，a man called Dennis tried to start a farm here.He built that cottage over there to live in.In tho days，the area looked quite different—it was covered with tall trees and the swamp was a crystalclear river．After three hard years，Dennis had cleared veral fields and planted crops.He was so proud of his success that he refud to listen to advice.
“‘You are clearing too much land，’warned one old man.‘The land is a living thing.It will hit back at you if you abu it.’”
“‘Silly fool，’said Dennis to himlf.‘If I clear more land，I can grow more crops.I'll become wealthier.He's just jealous！’”
“Dennis continued to chop down trees.Small animals that relied on them for food and shelter were destroyed.He was so eager to expand his farm that he did not notice the river flowing slowly towards his door.He did not notice salt eping to the surface of the land.He did not notice swamp plants choking all the native plants.”
