高考读后续写话题-人生态度
语境考察
例题展示
主题语境：人生态度
语篇类型：论说文
语篇难度：★★★★
关键词：life
短文词数：320
建议时间：25mins
greeting是什么意思
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Everybody has to face bad days in their life. Some face dias, some face fears, some face poverty,
some face helplessness, etc. No one can escape from it. It is a rule of life. Two things always combine together like joy and sadness, laugh and cry, health and illness, profit and loss, morning and night, victory and failure. Likewi, good days and bad days always combine together.
You know what is the biggest advantage of bad days? First of all in hard days you come to know your you come to know your skills skills and your potential. All the superheros we watch in the television had badly past life therefore they are what they are today. In bad times we try hard to come out of it. Remember one thing that when bad days finish and good days start a person changes his changes his attitude attitude and forgets his pain and this is and forgets his pain and this is the reason the reason that good days and bad days keep on coming and going.
One thing I must say is that your hard days are your teacher and nobody can understand what you face. Make sure whatever you have faced you will never do that with others though your whole life pass in good days or bad days.
When bad days come a When bad days come a person person first of all cannot understand what is going on, why me? But after some time he realizes his strength and starts doing every single thing to come out of it. That journey is very painful but when you once cross it you will find your journey very
meaningful. You have totally changed your thoughts, your perception （感知）（感知）, , and you can understand life better. You get the meaning of your life . In short, you start becoming wi.
The biggest lesson of life during bad days according to me is that a person becomes wi and a giver whom he wasn't before. Life means to create it.
注意：
1.1.所续写短文的词数应为所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.2.至少使用至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1Paragraph 1：：Therefore, you shouldn't fear hard days in your life.hxc
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Paragraph 2Paragraph 2：：However, when you go into the
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文章来源
本文选自英文网站 ，原文题目为：“Life's Biggest Lessons During Hard Days”，原文题目为：“Life's Biggest Lessons During Hard Days”《在艰苦岁月中生活的最大的教训》，作者为Sonia Kaur Sonia Kaur。。
语篇解读
生活中的事情是五彩缤纷、绚丽多彩的，是喜怒哀乐的混合体，所以在艰辛的日子望不气馁，在阳光明媚的日子里不自做，要有清醒的生活理念，才能成为生活的强者、胜者。robinson crusoe
难句分析
原文：One thing I must say is that your hard days are your teacher and nobody can understand what you face.
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译文：有一件事我必须说，你的艰难日子是你的老师，你所面对的，没有人能理解。 分析：这是一个主从复合句。主语中I must say 为省略关系词的定语从句，为省略关系词的定语从句，that that 引导表语从句，其中从句中的what 引导宾语从句。
笔前点睛
★ 审题分析
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审要求 读后续写，本文属于议论文；
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审人称、时态 第二人称、兼顾第一人称，以一般现在时为主；
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审要点 艰辛的日子不气馁，生活态度积极，光明就在眼前；好日子要珍惜，否则会家破人亡，遗憾终生。
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原文所给的关键词分类 人物：人物：person person
事件：bad days bad days、、life life、、good days good days、、skills skills、、attitude attitude、、the meaning of your life the meaning of your life、、the reason the reason、、
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journey journey、、lesson 在续写时，除了注意原文给出的关键词，还需要注意以下线索：
1. What does the author think of bad days 1. What does the author think of bad days？？
2. What do bad days bring you 2. What do bad days bring you？？
3. How do you speak of bad days 3. How do you speak of bad days？？
4. What's the relationship between bad days and good days 4. What's the relationship between bad days and good days？？
5. How can you become a winner of life 5. How can you become a winner of life？？
★ 思路点拨
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本篇续写内容难度大，涉及对生活的感悟，该话题对学生来说较深奥，可以先把文章理解透，正确把握原文内容，正确把握原文内容，根据最后段落，根据最后段落，根据最后段落，发现规律和逻辑关系，结合提示语、提示词从而找到续发现规律和逻辑关系，结合提示语、提示词从而找到续写线索，本文着重写了bad days 对人生的影响以及人们如何才能把不利条件变为有利条件，从中汲取教训避免走弯路，然后再过渡到good days 的叙述上，但要珍惜来之不易的生活，不能让它流失，不能让它流失，这样才能成为生活的胜者。此外，这样才能成为生活的胜者。此外，这样才能成为生活的胜者。此外，要注重提升表达层次，多用复杂句式和高要注重提升表达层次，多用复杂句式和高级词汇。
高分范文
Paragraph 1Paragraph 1：：Therefore, you shouldn't fear hard days in your life. ①You should first think what you want in your life, and then you should smile at everything and have a positive attitude to start finding a good idea of solving it with your skills. ②This is one of the most important things I have learnt in my life. To pass through the bad days is the same as for a person to have a hard journey. person to have a hard journey. ③However, by doing that, you'll change yourlf and get a ③However, by doing that, you'll change yourlf and get a bright future in the end."
Paragraph 2: However, when you go into the good days, you should value them and work hard than
ever. Otherwi, you'll lo the things belonging to you. ④ For example, one of my friends once had a rich, happy family, but he didn't work hard so that he had to drop out of school, which made his parents sad. school, which made his parents sad. ⑤Even wor, his parents got parted becau of him ⑤Even wor, his parents got parted becau of him some day, so that he felt sad and regretful. So you should know the meaning of your life. (152 words)
★ 篇章分析
perch① first..and then..first..and then..首先……接着……，表示做某事的顺序，此处说明做事情的逻辑性，句中的首先……接着……，表示做某事的顺序，此处说明做事情的逻辑性，句中的what 引导宾语从句。
② I I 为省略关系代词的定语从句。为省略关系代词的定语从句。
③ 过渡词However 起到承上启下的作用，表示意思转折。
④ 本句为并列复合句。but 连接前后两个并列分句，后一分句中so that 引导结果状语从句，which 引导非限制性定语从句。
⑤ 本句中的过渡词Even wor 强化观点，而so that 引导结果状语从句。
★ 高分解密
本篇续写能够依据提示句、提示词并结合原文内容合理安排了所要补充的内容，较好地完成了续写任务；另外，作者在使用复杂句式的同时，注重段、句之间的逻辑关系，较多地使用了过渡词，如 however however、、otherwi otherwi、、for example for example、、even wor 等，使得全文结构紧凑，成为得高分的亮点之处。
语境演练
题1
题型: 读后续写
难度:
准确率: 25.45%
The eight-year-old Carol lived with her father David, Mother May and elder brother Rob.
The little family happily lived in a beautiful village surrounded with beautiful nature. The
village was at the foot of a mountain, with beautiful views of the snowy mountain. The family survived on growing asonal plants and trees. Their life is totally surrounded by nature and beauty.
While they lived a very happy life, Carol did not love the beautiful atmosphere of the village.
She really wanted to move into the city and enjoy the city life. She wanted to shop, move
around the city, watch movies, and eat in fantastic restaurants and cafes, etc.
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However, there was hardly any chance that Carol's family moved to the city as they had
everything in the village.
One day, Carol fell asleep during the early noon and she had a sound sleep. Of cour, she
had a strange dream. She saw her grandmother in her dream as a fairy and her decead
grandmother granted her a wish. Carol requested her that she should love to enjoy the city
life as she always desired.
Grandmother understood the desire of Carol, but still wanted to convince her that the peaceful village life is better than the city life.
She told Carol, "Baby, you cannot have access to fresh fruits and vegetables from plants as
you have at your home. You cannot breathe fresh air. You cannot play with animals. You can
hardly find any trees. You will not find peace as you e here! Do you still want to go to the city?"
Without hearing the concerns, Carol asked her grandmother to grant the wish. Grandmother
granted her wish, but with a condition. Carol was told that she would only have 6 hours to
spend in the city. Later, she would return to the village. Carol agreed.
注意: :
注意
1. 所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右
左右; ;
个短文中标有下划线的关键词语; ;
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2. 至少使用 5 个短文中标有下划线的关键词语
每段的开头语已为你写好; ;
3. 续写部分分为两段
续写部分分为两段,，每段的开头语已为你写好
续写完成后,，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
4. 续写完成后
(1)Carol then found herlf in the city with her friends.________________________________________
(2)Carol's brother Rob was calling her for lunch and Carol woke up.___________________________
第一段正确答案：
Carol then found herlf in the city with her friends. Carol and her friends went to watch
cowshedmovies. After that they ate delicious food in a restaurant and shopped in a huge mall. Carol
was happy that she had the chance to experience the life in the city. Yet at the same time, she
understood that everything told by her grandmother was true in the city. There was no peace
and no silence; the city life was fast and rushing. The air quality is not satisfying. She could hardly find any animal or even a tree.
解析：
本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知，本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知，Carol Carol 和她的父亲 David, 母亲 May May。。哥哥Rob 幸福地生活在农村，没机会去城市。一天她做了一个梦，梦中见到了她的奶奶，她希望奶奶能让她过上渴望的城市的生活。奶奶给她讲了城市的生活，后来她又回到了自己的村子。
续写部分分为两段，续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：第一段开头是：第一段开头是：然后，卡罗尔发现她和她的朋友们在城市里。然后，卡罗尔发现她和她的朋友们在城市里。然后，卡罗尔发现她
和她的朋友们在城市里。接下来应接下来应该是她和她的朋友体验城市的生活，同时也发现城市的一些弊端。
第二段正确答案： Carol's brother Rob was calling her for lunch and Carol woke up. She recalled what happened just now in her dream and realized that her life in the village with her family was far more wonderful than the city life. Carol understood that she was having a more joyful life. She shared her dream with her family while enjoying the fresh fruits and vegetables, and they laughed together. Carol also developed love for plants, animals and beautiful nature. 解析：
本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知，本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知，Carol Carol 和她的父亲 David, 母亲 May May。。哥哥Rob 幸福地生活在农村，没机会去城市。一天她做了一个梦，梦中见到了她的奶奶，她希望奶奶能让她过上渴望的城市的生活。奶奶给她讲了城市的生活，后来她又回到了自己的村子。
第二段开头是：第二段开头是：卡罗尔的哥哥罗伯打电话让她吃午饭，卡罗尔的哥哥罗伯打电话让她吃午饭，卡罗尔的哥哥罗伯打电话让她吃午饭，卡罗尔醒了。卡罗尔醒了。接下来她应该是她回忆梦中所发生的一切，她意识到她和家人在农村更快乐。续写时要求使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语增加了写作难度，下划线的关键词语增加了写作难度，我们要熟悉所给划线词语，我们要熟悉
所给划线词语，我们要熟悉所给划线词语，恰当的时候加以运用。恰当的时候加以运用。恰当的时候加以运用。最后最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右；续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。按要求完成写作任务。
