专题23 书面表达（新高考）
I、2021年高考真题
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（2021·新高考I卷·书面表达）
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第一节 应用文写作
你校英文报Youth正在庆祝创刊十周年。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
who是什么意思
1. 读报的经历；2. 喜爱的栏目；3. 期望和祝福。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式写字答题卡的相应位置作答。
Youth and Me
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【答案】
Youth and Me
It has been 10 years since Youth was founded. In my memory, it is Youth that acpanies me through my whole high school. When feeling depresd, I often choo to enjoy the novel part which includes a lot of imaginative stories. The stories can relieve my stress and broaden my horizon. Besides, I even submitted my own fiction to 结合能Youth. Refud as I was, I still received some great encouragement, which gives me confidence to be a writer.
I do expect Youth can publish more classic works and have a promising future.
【解析】初中英文自我介绍
本文是一篇应用文，向校刊Youth表达自己的经历，并送上自己的祝福。
建立：found→establish
沮丧的：upt→depresd
得到：receive→obtain
端午节快乐用英语怎么说赏析：enjoy→appreciate
同义句改写
原句：The stories can relieve my stress and broaden my horizon.
拓展句：Not only can the stories relieve my stress, but also they can broaden my horizon.
[高分句型1] When feeling depresd, I often choo to enjoy the novel part which includes a lot of imaginative stories. (运用了which引导的限制性定语从句)
托福和雅思哪个好[高分句型2] Refud as I was, I still received some great encouragement, which gives me confidence to be a writer. (运用了as引导的让步状语从句还运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
第二节 读后续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE
The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surpri they were planning for Mother’s Day. How plead and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.
The big day came at last. The alarm rang at The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the cond stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within conds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the oth
er slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.
Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右。
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.
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The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.
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【答案】
As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. Father’s appearing was like a savior to the two children. Under the guidance of their father, they took positive actions and started all over again. They made the bread and then went on cooking porridge. Father helped them adjust the fire, which was the key to success. It was all right this time. Delicious breakfast was ready. How happy they were!
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. When their mother saw the delicious and perfect breakfast in front of her, she was very surprid. It was not only the gift, but the love of the children for her that moved her very much. The two children could finish cooking a breakfast, which she didn’t expect. The children said loudly, “Happy Mother’s Day!” Mother hugged them tightly and kisd them again and again.
【解析】
本文以母亲节为线索展开，讲述了双胞胎Jenna和Jeff为了献给母亲一份美味的早餐，自己动手，做起饭餐来，但是不幸的是，他们连连失败，后来在父亲的帮助下，获得成功，他们把早餐献给亲爱的母亲，妈妈非常感动的故事。
1.段落续写：sooner
①由第一段首句内容“当双胞胎失望地环顾四周时，他们的父亲出现了。”可知，第一段可描写他们的父亲指导帮助他们准备早餐。
②由第二段首句内容“这对双胞胎把早餐端到楼上，叫醒了他们的母亲。”可知，第二段可描写母亲收到孩子们的礼物早餐，非常感动。
2.续写线索：帮助——指导——积极——献礼——感动
3.词汇激活
行为类
①帮助：help/assist
②.指导：guide/conduct
③.献礼：prent a gift/give a gift
室内设计学校情绪类
①.积极：positive/positively/take positive actions
toothpaste②.感动：moved/touched
[高分句型1]. Father helped them adjust the fire, which was the key to success. (which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]. It was not only the breakfast, but the love of the children for her that moved her very much. (使用not only…but (also)句型及强调句型)
