（试题原题）moray
Sandy and Jane came to e the jobo tree on the hilltop again. Jobos were their favorite fruit, but the tree belonged to a lady who lived in the hou by the hill. They heard she was difficult, but that sometimes she would give fruit in return for an errand （差使）.
The girls finally gathered their courage to knock on her door. An elderly woman with a fierce look answered, staring down at the girls. “,”said Sandy, her voice shaky, “that you give jobos in payment for running an errand.”
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The lady raid one eyebrow, then went into the kitchen and took two baskets. She pushed them into the girls' hands. “Go fill the with jobos, and come right back.”
The girls raced up the hill to the tree and filled the baskets with the ripest jobos. Back at the hou, the lady filled a bag with rice and handed it to Sandy. “Take this bag and one basket of jobos to the Brown family. And ask them for the payment,” the lady added with a tight smile. “If you return without the payment, you won't get the fruit.”
The girls struggled all the way with the bag and the basket. When they were there, Mrs. Brown answered the door. Inside on the floor were three little children, each painting something on papers. Mr. Brown was lying sick in bed. Times were hard.
The girls handed her the food. “This is from the lady with the jobo tree,” said Sandy.
“She asked for the payment, too.” Jane said awkwardly.
“The payment! The payment!” The children repeated, waving the paper in their hands happily.
Sandy and Jane looked at each other strangely. With a smile, Mrs. Brown handed Sandy a large aled（密封的）envelope so full that it was almost starting to break open. The girls said goodbye and left quickly. “I wonder,” Sandy murmured, “whether Mrs. Brown can afford to pay for that food.
Worried, the two girls discusd what was in the envelope as they walked back.研究所英文
The lady opened the envelope, took out a pile of papers, and smiled.
合理推敲，构思情节:
Worried, the two girls discusd what was in the envelope as they walked back.
回家路上各种猜测(有无payment) 与纠结(拆不拆信封? 能否拿到水果? )--回到女士家中，递上信封
The lady opened the envelope, took outcharge a pile of papers, and smiled.
揭开真相-_信封里到底是什么? Lady应该经常接济Prown一家最终有拿到jobos? 主题? 层?浅层？深层
非一般的故事
这个故事，与之前多见的读后续写故事不一样，情节和主题藏而不露，随着情节发展通过各种细节透露线索，制造悬念，续文中也应尽量延续这种风格，不宜使用太多分析和解读性话语，把话说得太白。可以紧扣文章中的关键线索和人物特征，设计富有特色的细节描写，巧妙地揭示真相。
(下水文版本1)
上海夏令营两个女孩很担心，回去时讨论了信封里的东西。“里面会是什么呢?我们要不要打开看看?”简问，看着桑迪希望她同意。桑迪立刻制止了她。然后她把手放在信封上，来回地抚摸着，突然大声喊道:“画!一定是孩子们的画!”“如果是，我们能得到我们的黄酸枣吗?”他们感到很困惑，加快了返回的步伐。到达后，她们把信封递给了那位女士，心里惴惴不安。
Worried, the two girls discusd what was in the envelope as they returned“What could it be inside? Shall we open it to find it out? asked Jane looking at Sandy for agreement. Sandy stopped her immediately. Then she put her hand on the envelope, stroked it back and forth and suddenly yelled out,“Paintings! It must be the children's paintings!” “If so, could we get our jobos?” Confud, they quickened the pace of their return. On arrival, they handed the envelope to the lady, feeling unttled. (75)
下水版本2:
北京启德两个女孩很担心，回去时讨论了信封里的东西。“里面会是什么呢?我们要不要打开看看?”装修费计入什么科目
简问，看着桑迪希望她同意。桑迪立刻制止了她。然后她把手放在信封上，使劲捏着，喃喃地说:“里面会不会是钱?或是别的什么?”“如果不是钱，我们能拿到酸枣吗?”困惑之中，他们加快了返回的步伐。到了之后，她们把信封递给了那位女士，心里有些不安。
神探夏洛克第一季下载Worried, the two girls discusd what was in the envelope as they returned. “ What could it be inside? Shall we open it to find it out? Asked Jane, looking at Sandy for agreement. Sandy stopped her immediately 。Then she put her hand on the envelope, squeezed it hard and murmured“Could it be some payment in it? Or something el?” “If not uld we get our jobos?” Confud, they quickened the pace of their return.On arrival, they handed the envelope to the lady, feeling uneasy.
不同的结尾:music是什么意思
The lady opened the envelope, took out a pile of papers and smiled. On the papers were colorful drawings from the children, At this scene, Sandy and Jane looked at each other and smiled. Then, the girls gained their payment a full basket of ripe jobos. For them, it turned out that their errand not only gained them their favorite fruit, but also a sweet taste
of getting payment by their hard work. When they took a bite, the juice was as sweet as the feeling inside their heart.(76 words) 自然式结尾
Possible version.
niorhighWorried, the two girls discusd what was in the envelope as they walked back. "It ems there are a lot of paper notes in it, said Sandy. Jane, however, thought it couldn’t be the ca. She let out a long sigh. Curious and anxious as they were, they didn't have the courage to open it beforehand without the lady's approval. Back to the hou, they carefully handed the envelope to the lady. She took it with expectation glittering in her eyes. The two girls held their breath and could wait no more.The lady opened the envelope, took out a pile of papers, and smiled. On the papers were colorful pictures from the Brown's kids! The girls looked at each other and smiled in relief. Then the lady handed them the other basket of jobos. “Good job, young ladies. Here's your payment,” she said with a wink. The girls took the basket in great delight, “Thank you. ... Could we come again next week?asked the girls eagerly. The lady laughed, “Why not?” As they enj
oyed the sweet reward on their way home, Jane and Sandy felt so grateful and lucky to have en a warm heart through a cold face.
