高中英语新高考-英语作文：读后续写题型的写作兵法三招：转折,语言,词库
目前英语卷的题型的改革力度是够大的，说来就来。这不，各种证据证明，未来作文会变成文章续写，即：给一篇350词左右的记叙文给你，结尾没有，让考生自由发挥。限制是:需要用上文章里给定的五个左右的词语。目前浙江已经明确在考试说明中说了，后面的高考就要采用这种形式。（孙三五）
这种改革给考生一种恐慌，为什么呢？因为从未写过这样的文章，而且续写听起来好高大上。但是，我看来，这种作文最好发挥。我给出的技巧是：内容上要注意两个转折；语言上要注意倒装和非谓语动词；另外，我给考生们准备了万能的九个小词库。
一、何为内容上的两个转折
写记叙文，英汉是同理的。故事要有曲折即：twist。而高考作文150作文只能让你写顶多两个曲折。曲折分：情节曲折和心理变化的曲折。
英语作文毕竟和语文作文有差别，我们的曲折不要一味追求离奇，而是讲究逻辑的连贯。
二、语言的运用
记叙文是动作和语言的干活，不需要你写复杂句，这是文体的需要。常用的是：非谓语动词和倒装句。为什么呢？因为只有这两种语法结构句子才能表达动作的多样性。
三、关于九个小词库
我认为记叙文的心情描写是伴随着动作一起的，你有什么样的心情就有什么样的动作。笔者平时有摘抄各种文学作品的佳句和词块的习惯。仅挑选一小部分，省略了伴随心情的手、脚、脸等词库，进行粗线条的概括。虽然不多，但我认为也足够应付高考了。我将它们分为九大类：
一、如何表达决心和注意力的集中：
二、如何表达同情和关心
三、如何表达轻松
四、如何表达生气、不耐烦等不愉快的心情
五、如何表达胆小、害怕
六、如何表达害怕、害羞和尴尬
七、如何表达悲伤
八、如何表达疲劳my documents
九、如何表达疼痛
四、实战演练
（这道题是浙江考试说明上的例子，但没有给答案）
步骤一：英文qq网名
第一个转折：
The young man; suitcas in the back at;loud noi of an alarm; the bank; robbery; the shouts; people; the bank thief
报警：群众拦阻；警察赶到
心情：害怕；困惑；疼痛
第二个转折：
真相：一箱书；赶往学校报到
心情：生气；轻松；关心
步骤二：
He dared not stop and dashed to the crowd.He was struck dead with terror. His heart was
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beating painfully fast and banging against his ribs. However, hearing the shouts, veral strong young men in front of the bank blocked and arrested him. Now, every nerve in Authur’s body warned him not to go any further. “I doubt that guy is the bank thief.” said Authur, pointing the man behind.[用非谓语动词] The anger had returned like a hard lump at the back of his throat.
capitalLuckily, just then up came the policemen[倒装句]. Authur began to calm down, his breathing growing slower.[用非谓语动词] He could feel the blood surging round his body and releasing the tension. When the suitcas were opened, many books came in sight. The young man gave Authur a look of concern, saying“I really hope you are not hurt. Maybe we can be friends.” Both of them smiled.
(划线部分都是来自九小词库）
五、九小词库【以下均摘自文学作品，部分词汇需要你查词典理解】职业生涯规划书ppt
一、如何表达决心和注意力的集中：
词语：
Nouns Thoughts, concentration, determination
Verbs Felt, tried, resolved, determined
Heard, remembered
词块：
* Deep in thought
* Lost in her own thoughts
* Tried desperately to remember
* Heard little of what was being said around her
* Nothing was going to stop him now
* Felt a hard ball of determination tightening in his stomach
佳句：
She tried desperately to remember where she had en him before.
She was deep in thought and heard little of what was being said around her.
He shuddered and tend, as a hard ball of determination tightened in his stomach.
函授是什么意思 二、如何表达同情和关心
词语：
Nouns Face, mouth, smile, eyebrows
Concern, sympathy, comfort, warmth
Adjectives Soft, warm, calm, sympathetic, comforting
Verbs Gave, flashed
Drew, turned
词块：
* Face turned soft and sympathetic
* Gave her a look of concern
* Drew her eyebrows together
* Mouth turned down at the corners
* Flashed a comforting smile
佳句：
His face turned soft and sympathetic and his voice sank to a murmur.
She drew her eyebrows together and turned her mouth down in a look of concern.
三、如何表达轻松
词语：
Nouns Heart, pul, blood
Chest, head, brow, scalp, sweat
Adjectives Calm, grateful
Verbs Ead, slowed, calmed, relead ached
词块：
* Pounding ead in her chest
* Breathing slowed
* Rapid beat of her heart became calmer
* Sweat dried on her brow
* Blood surged round her body
* Relead the tension in her body
* Grateful for his narrow escape
佳句：
She began to calm down and her heart started to slow, but the panic had left an ache in her head and a ringing in her ears.
Slowly, the pounding ead in her chest and the sweat dried on her brow.
She could feel the blood surging round her body and releasing the tension.
Her breathing grew slower, as a new calm ttled over her.
四、如何表达生气、不耐烦等不愉快的心情
托福考试介绍词语：
Nouns Heart, pul, breath, throat 大学英语四级准考证
Anger, rage, fury, temper, wrath, disgust, contempt, rentment
Adjectives Cross, furious, raging
Jealous, envious, rentful
Irritating, frustrating
Bitter, vicious, poisonous
Breathless, sweating
Verbs Swept, poured
Pounded, exploded, erupted
Shook, trembled, writhed
Raced, hammered
Clenched, gripped
词块：
love you so much
* Red mist
* Spitting bundle of rage
* Vicious flash of temper
* Hard lump at the back of her throat
* Left him breathless
* Made his heart race
* Hammered in his head
* Swept through him like a tidal wave
* Burning with rage
* Wrath exploded like a volcano
* Poured from her like an acid
* Surrounded him like a foul stench
